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message 183: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (last edited Sep 28, 2009 08:41PM) (new)

1253494 hmm..really?

maybe I will...let's go breathe into it! lol


message 182: by DragonEyes wants everyone to read her blog! (last edited Sep 27, 2009 06:10PM) (new)

1296084 um... what? I just finished reading a book called Zig-Zag, but it wasn't a quest....
Though if you want a quest try the story in this topic folder called Just An Idea. I like that one but it died.


message 181: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 OMG! :)

Dragon Eyed is your new story (zig-zag) a quest?


1296084 not really, The album it's on is '03


message 179: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 she's cute, nice voice...i saw her on VH1 a long time ago. Is this a new song?


message 177: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 ((yup!))


1296084 ((did you watch the vid?? :)))


message 175: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 ((Intersting! Very interesting.))


message 173: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 I am starting to read that one through, it's really interesting and complicated. Don't know what exactly hip-hop should sound like, I do believe it seems nice when danced! :)


1296084 The Run is really good, have u read through the whole thing? I didn't start helping on that one till like page 13.


1296084 do a google search, you can probably find a youtube vid of it. It's hip-hop (i think, not pop & not rap, but somewhere in between. Is that hip-hop?)


message 170: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 DragonEyed I think I would like to hear it too, lyrics seem nice. Not unless it is a prayer song of some kind. Those make me cry and I never understand what they mean!

Janeen I will be waiting...no hurry, no worry. I like the way a few stories are going currently like The Run and Welcome to Your Magic Life,

See you there




1296084 It's called (Suprise) Hesitation and by Stacey Orrico (Don't know if I spelled her name right though.)


1296084 ((A random song lyric * just because I feel like it

Why do you spend all your time
Watching life pass you by,
Hanging on to your pride?
All that you can anticipate;
Hoping all your mistakes
Will somehow fade away.

What you gonna do with this?
It's either hit or miss.
You know the answer now;
Come on give your heart away.

I know you hurt inside.
I know the reason why
Don't wait a moment now;
Come on give your heart away.

Why the hesitation?
God is still a waiting,
Gotta stop procrastinating.
Can ya feel me?
Why the hesitation?
You can pick your destination,
And the risk is so worth taking.
Can ya feel me?


Your heart will never be the same.
Giving up drama stains,
Letting go for easier ways.
When will you ever realize;
Letting go all your lies,
All the pain will subside.

What you gonna do with this?
It's either hit or miss.
You know the answer oh;
Come on give your heart away.

I know you hurt inside.
I know the reason why
Don't wait a moment,
Come on give your heart away.

Why the hesitation?
God is still a waiting,
Gotta stop procrastinating.
Can ya hear me?

Why the hesitation?
You can pick your destination,
And the risk is so worth taking.
Can ya feel me?
Why the hesitation?
You can pick your destination,
And the risk is so worth taking.
Can ya hear me?


Did ya know,
It's so easy?
So why'd ya say,
"Your to easy."
Ya know you need Him.
Come on give your hear away.

Why you waiting?
You're wasting time
Hesitating.
You know you need Him.
Are you ready,
To be free?

Why the hesitation?
You can pick your destination,
And the risk is so worth taking.
Can ya hear me?


What ya need?
What ya need?
What ya want?
What ya want?
I'm just wondering,
Why?

Why the hesitation?
God is still a waiting,
Gotta stop procrastinating.
Can ya hear me?
Why the hesitation?
You can pick your destination,
And the risk is so worth taking.
Can ya hear me?
(Rpt.)


ARE YOU STILL HESITATING? GOD IS WAITING FOR YOU TO COME TO HIM!


message 167: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 Ummmm..let me think, I might be able to think of something...


message 166: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 :) well...what's it going to be about?


message 165: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 ok


message 164: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 lol.....let's start another.


message 163: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 ((It sort of died.))


1296084 ((I'm gonna stop posting on this story. I'm not sure what we can do with it. ))


message 161: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 ((ummmm sure))


1296084 ((OK, so are we gonna try to turn this around so that it makes sence? and all that was just dome wierd prophetic dream? Does that sound good?))


message 159: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 Or so he thought , but it turned out that Fate had other plans. Rylan was sent here for a purpose and he was to be made aware of it in a strange, winding sort of way. Something like before when he had dreamed of the Girl in the Palace, but also of something Good that would happen. If only...

<:D hope this is good! >>


message 158: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 :D Perhaps ..and they lived happily ever after.


message 157: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 =P


message 156: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 lol


message 155: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 ((me too...))


1296084 ((I'm confused...?))


message 153: by St[♥]r Pr!nc:$$ (new)

1253494 (hey nice story)

And the next thing he knows is he wakes up in a room full of furniture from his mother err aunt's bedroom. Thinking he is back home, Rylan eager to see all that's been happening in his absence stumbles out the dark room and...<a girl's scream> "Hey, who are you?" someone shouts in his ear...and that's how he meets his real sister, Honeydew but errm he doesn't know who she is, all he sees is the big stick in her hand and her flowing red hair. "Madam I come in peace" he says...beseechingly... and tries to snatch the stick from her hand....A BIG BOLT of THunder...and lightning,...and he realises that it is a very beautiful woman and she was just holding up a candle that had gone out in the wind. Falling to the floor in relief, Rylan looks around the strange room and wonders why he was sent here by the darned river of time!! And What was he to do about Rosepetal , seemed so long ago that he had touched her in the moonlight...oh well...!


message 152: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 ((Er... I don't know.))


1296084 ((Tis story is soooooooooo confused. I'm trying to get it to fit together. Rosepatal & Rylan were having dreams about each other & went to see this fairy who is crazy. They figure out the fairy is Rylan's real mother and his fake mother is actually his aunt. Doesn't that make the queen a fairy too? and how are they supposed to get married if their father is the same person? that's incest! does that mean the wizard isn't actually their father, just one of their predecessors from way back? ))


message 150: by Janeen-san (new)

1566203 "You have magical powers, my child," breathed the Star Fairy. "Quick, run. Run before the river of Time begins to flow again."
Rylan was looked at the Fairy is astonisment.


message 149: by deleted member (new)

Rosepetal stared at her hands, "What power? that wasn't power!"


message 148: by T.O.L.I. (new)

1203021 Th evil woman stepped through the door and screeched "here they are!"

In pure hate Rose grabbed her knife and hurled it straight at the woman. Only too late after she had thrown it she realized she was going to kill someone! She closed her eyes and waited for it to happen, OH she wished she could stop it all.....

and when she heard no scream she opened her eyes again.....to see that everything wad frozen......other than her and rylan.

Rylan looked at her with wide eyes, "oh my god. You have the power!"


message 147: by deleted member (new)

Rylan glanced the other way, wrapping his hand around Rosepetal, "I won't let you go." He whispered in her ear. "We will get out of this."


message 146: by T.O.L.I. (new)

1203021 Then suddenly pounding footsteps were herd and shouting, a high pitched sounding...

"Thats my mother!" rylan gasped he stood still and listened closer. he heard the woman shouting "theyre in the secret room! theyre in the secret room!"

rose had no time to react until someone stepped into the room.........


message 145: by deleted member (new)

Rylan stood by Rosepetal, listening so closely he could hear every breath.


message 144: by T.O.L.I. (new)

1203021 rose listened closely to the hallway, but heard nothing


message 143: by deleted member (new)

"Oh, good idea."


message 142: by T.O.L.I. (new)

1203021 "i know, but i just wanted to wait for the footsteps to pass"


message 141: by deleted member (new)

"But we're going to hae to go back out anyway, to kill that imposter!"


message 140: by T.O.L.I. (new)

1203021 "no one can get in here, if we dont want them to"


message 139: by deleted member (new)

"Safe?" Rose asked.


message 138: by T.O.L.I. (new)

1203021 "the safe room"


message 137: by deleted member (new)

"Well, what is this place then?"


message 136: by T.O.L.I. (new)

1203021 "i told you" he said "its a secret and its magic"


message 135: by deleted member (new)

"This is nuts Rylan, why did that happen?" Rose whispered.


message 134: by T.O.L.I. (new)

1203021 rose followerd quickly ans tood in amazement when......Rylan walked strtaight through the wall......his head popped back out and said come on!


rose followed through the wall


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