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message 7: by Martin Gottlieb (new)

summer noon
the sidewalk darkens
drop by drop

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message 6: by Novin (new)

warm summer breeze
it's getting dark&darker
just moonlight remains

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message 5: by Walter (new)

Rewrite:
The sound of a fly.
My window is open, and
the slightest breeze.

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message 4: by Walter (new)

the sound of a fly
a window is open. a
slight breeze coming through

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message 3: by Novin (new)

water lily petals
seeking a drop of water
deep in the summer

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message 2: by Rachel (new)

reviving dead thread -
fashion cycles last decades,
this forum: two months

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message 1: by Katydidwhat (new)

a bird's stick feet
clutch telephone wire
gently sways

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