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topic: General Haiku > three-line haiku; my attempts





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message 11: by Robbie (new)

429846 These are beautiful, Martin! Thanks for sharing them.


message 10: by Martin Gottlieb (new)

2585236 fall sunrise
the shadows of leaves
follow the wind





2585236 night traffic
the smell of seaweed wafts
above the pier



2585236 mountain lake
a golden eagle's wings
span two contrails



2585236 wetland shore
the maple ripples
with the sky



2585236 river sunlight
the smell of tugboats
and blossoms


2585236 playground
after the rain--
the sound of traffic



2585236 old photo
my father as a child
looks past me



2585236 fifty buzzards
off the water tower
winter trees



2585236 pine forest
the scent of first snow
on the fawn


message 1: by Martin Gottlieb (last edited Aug 04, 2009 05:38AM) (new)

2585236 Da Lat christmas
up and down the tree
fireflies



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