This was a first try at writing poetry. Forgive the bad grammar And please Don't laugh.


On the breath of a wind I hear your voice. In the midnight sky I search for you. I feel the grass hoping for your touch.
But I am alone and lost without you. Your love. your face. and all your studied female grace have won for you a place. My love, Within this broken heart.
The stars within the northern sky remind me of your shining eyes. May the wind now speed my feet. To the place where we will meet.
May the stars in the sky above Tell you of my undying love. may the sadness in your heart take wings and now depart.
Away, Away. never to return.
for now and for all I am yours.

I believe this is prose but sounds like poetry. Its still good

Herman, out of curiosity, why would consider this prose?

I would sort of call it "prosetry". That's what I've labeled my current style...though honestly, this seems more like prose than poetry. It might just be me being narrow minded, because of the lack of indentations/spacing or whatever you want to call it. Like...verses, I mean. It seems to be in paragraph form right now. And the strange grammar and punctuation, etc, bothers me...though I think the actual wording is pretty good. :)

I'm A poor hand when it comes to grammar and punctuation, etc, And I'm sorry if it made it hard for any of you to understand.

Thx for your comments none the less.
And yes this was written as prose.