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message 406: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3972...

New writing, I can't think of what to call this, it's not really a story so much as a...warning? Ha, not an essay, or poem....just something.

So... 577.
I feel like I should total my word count for this year. Ha, it's almost over.



:)
This group helped.
Bunches.
Peace and Love!<3
Marley


message 405: by Marley (new)

1715064 Oh...I has a poem that I need to type up, not that yall read 'em. So...Imma sleep soon, my stomach is hurting...


message 404: by Marley (new)

1715064 Bite My Tongue For You



I bite my tongue in half
To keep from telling you the truth
That I love you
I feel my tongue ride along my teeth
And I wish yours were here too
I hope in vain that you will discover
That we should maybe be a bit closer together
You’ve become a part of something greater
Something more then I could ever hope to be
You’ve been places and done things I could only wish to see
As my tongue bleeds red from being bitten
I torture myself on the inside, asking why I’m so smitten
By the time my teeth are covered with the burgundy burden
I am ready to let the words slither out like the sinful serpent
I will keep my guilt for loving you concealed
And use my bitten, bruised tongue as a shield
You say I can tell you the truth
But I am scared the words I say will paint me drowning in Naïveté and youth


(Something new...sort of rhyming? In my writing.)



message 403: by Marley (new)

1715064 Yes, I don't know if you noticed but I'm a masochist. I just LOVE enjoying torturing myself this way. :(

It wasn't that bad. It's just irritating when he blows you off. Because he's not hanging around me because of me anymore.


message 402: by Michelle (new)

1013780 yeah, i know. its everything else. wow, that is awkward, kinda thing. you serially didnt mind that at all?


message 401: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5270...

Link^^

Which part are you refering to Mimi? Her grandma? She said she texted you.


message 400: by Michelle (new)

1013780 holy crap...


message 399: by Marley (last edited Nov 07, 2009 08:15PM) (new)

1715064 Ha, now I AM behind!

I'm at 7, 450 words. I want to be at 10, 000 by the end of today. But, I'm resting now. :P Oh well. I'll upload soon. I went to see ym bro's play downstate. And got to partake in another wonderful awkward situation today, I got to eat spaghetti in the basement of a church with my best friend's boyfriend that I liked...maybe still do...God only knows what I'm thinking. But I can't put any stress on her cuz her grandms had to go to the hospital. They think she had a stroke...


message 398: by Marley (new)

1715064 I know...now I just gotta learn to do this for homework. Lol, my parents are nagging me to go to bed. Which is ironic because yesterday they were both blasting their stuff until 1am!

Night hun! Sleep well!


message 397: by Michelle (new)

1013780 XD youre on schedule marley!


message 396: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5270...

Something like that...haha


message 395: by Marley (new)

1715064 1,470 words today for Nano...

5,029 in total...I'll post in a bit.


message 394: by Paige (new)

2300728 Woohoo!!!!! Go NaNo writer!


message 393: by Marley (new)

1715064 1,814 words for Nano. Plus a better outline now.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5270...


message 392: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3972...

167 words, just a little thing I wrote. <3

There shall be a Nano update later tonight.


message 391: by Marley (new)

1715064 1700+ words...
Here's the story:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5270...




message 390: by Marley (new)

1715064 Well...here's hoping I get my will to write back. Haven't been feeling up to it, but npow Nano is here...and I have no clue what I'm going to write, and a half an hour until I can begin. I wish I knew how to start this all...but I don't think I even remember how to write a long story anymore.


message 389: by Paige (new)

2300728 LOL I must go read.


message 388: by Marley (new)

1715064 I met my goal today, just one poem, but over 100 words. Yawn...my computer is not cooperating tonight.


message 387: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3779...

265 to be exact, I typed it up for you...well, for them.


message 386: by Marley (new)

1715064 200 ish words, in a mean poem directed toward someone I am mad at...haha.


message 385: by Paige (new)

2300728 I shall go read now! :)


message 384: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3779...

New Poem...I'd apreciate someone to listen...read, whatever.

104 word in it...


message 383: by Paige (new)

2300728 Math does suck!


message 382: by Marley (new)

1715064 READ THEM PEOPLE!

I feel lonely...

I'm always lonely...

Math sucks.



message 381: by Annie (new)

2592123 ha ha have fun with homework!


message 380: by Marley (new)

1715064 I'm okay. School is a bastard, but it always is...that reminds me that I have homework!!


message 379: by Annie (new)

2592123 Yeah, that was confusing. :D lol. I've been good. How about you?


message 378: by Marley (new)

1715064 Ha, yeah, not since you left...and came back again? lol, how ya been?


message 377: by Annie (new)

2592123 Hi again Marley! Haven't talked to YOU in awhile either!


message 376: by Paige (new)

2300728 Yay, karaoke it is then. :)


message 375: by Marley (new)

1715064 I don't think so, no cliffs around here...too hard to bike on.


message 374: by Paige (new)

2300728 LOL You're not gonna throw me off a cliff, are you? :P


message 373: by Marley (new)

1715064 Lol, very nice, here's a pillow. -tosses a fluffy pillow- It's BLUE! Haha...


message 372: by Paige (new)

2300728 LOL Girly, this is where I hang. I was just asleep when you came in the last time. Now I'm awake and sad that you think I'm not here. I mean, I can't believe that you can't smell me, I've been in here for weeks! LOL JK


message 371: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5051...

And finally this!!!

I'm guessing that is around 1000+ words, I'm good with that.

I'm sad, no one ever visits me in here anymore. :(

Oh well!


message 370: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3972...

Another one for a group, but it got too long...


message 369: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3972...

Something for a short story group...IDK how many words...


message 368: by Paige (new)

2300728 Awesome!!!!!!!


message 367: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4972...

BAM!


880 Words, homework, read it...and stuff...


message 366: by Paige (new)

2300728 Those were awesome. I'd like to see where that story goes...


message 365: by Marley (new)

1715064 Marley wrote: "Ummm...in a minute.

249 words yesterday! Hahas, charecter profiles.
100 words today so far.

If I'm gonna do Nano this year, I gotta pick it up."


That charrie profile can be found here!

http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/8955...


message 364: by Paige (new)

2300728 Awesome!


message 363: by Marley (new)

1715064 I am now counting school work in my goals, lol.

So, 387 words on an ILASS thing, which can be read here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4972...
It had to be three paragraphs and one page.

As well as somewhere around 150 words that I randomly wrote up...




message 362: by Marley (new)

1715064 Oooo, Jason Mraz break!


message 361: by Marley (new)

1715064 http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3779...

Haha, I took it off a piece of paper, my handwriting is so sloppy I got rid of the line I couldn't read.

It is Reeeeally bad.


message 360: by Marley (new)

1715064 Ummm...in a minute.

249 words yesterday! Hahas, charecter profiles.
100 words today so far.

If I'm gonna do Nano this year, I gotta pick it up.


message 359: by Paige (new)

2300728 LOL Just do it.

I borrowed that from Nike, I guess.


message 358: by Marley (new)

1715064 Post...it? Urm.....but it's baaad...just something I wrote in 5 minutes bored in spanish...


message 357: by Paige (new)

2300728 *Sang to the Animal House song, TOGA TOGA TOGA*


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