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An Apology…
Like the wind that collides against the water
That makes waves crash upon the shore
We were imagining a happy ending
Until I slammed the door
Until I spoke the words
That broke your heart apart
That made our two souls distant
That made the sorrow start
I would like to take back all I said
But I know that it’s no use
I’m sorry that the seams of our love
Have become worn and loose
I am writing an apology
Though, it won’t mend our lives
I’m sorry that I spoke the words
That stabbed your soul like knives
Now let me say just one more thing
I know I’ve said before
I’ll love you today, tomorrow
For life, forevermore



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SLIM SHADY Gontier (HeroesFreak) | 9 comments That's awesome!!!


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

thanks



message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

wow! did you write that???


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

yepperzz



message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

wow! thats amazing! i love it!


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

thankzz


~(PierceTheVeil)~ (Piercetheveil) | 24 comments this is CRAZY awesome! Your writing is amazing!


message 9: by Ashley (new)

Ashley (spazzette) I cold not agree with you more. This is getting a little creepy though....



~(PierceTheVeil)~ (Piercetheveil) | 24 comments LOL. Yeah, it's like we're both psychic or something... that would be amazingly cool. I know vampires don't exist, but it would be really cool if they did (minus the whole blood thing; i don't like blood much)


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