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message 125: by Martin Gottlieb (new)
Aug 04, 2009 06:02AM

2585236 what a fun jingle
the sound of wind chimes
across the lake


message 124: by Meghan (new)
Aug 01, 2009 10:25AM

199350 throw a fit will we
a tired mother thinks, ha!
I beat you to it.


message 123: by Meghan (new)
Aug 01, 2009 10:22AM

199350 or buy us more stuff
my kids all shout with glee, or
throw a fit will we


message 122: by Robbie (new)
May 07, 2009 08:17PM

429846 we're consumed by love
but love doesn't pay the bills
or buy us more stuff


message 121: by Robbie (last edited Dec 24, 2008 01:40PM) (new)
Dec 24, 2008 01:40PM

429846 baby on the way
trembling with joy and with fear
we're consumed by love



message 120: by Dini (new)
Dec 23, 2008 08:14PM

245923 while our new love grows
we sit down and wait for the
baby on the way


message 119: by Robbie (new)
Dec 02, 2008 08:16PM

429846 walking hand in hand
our toes sinking into sand
while our new love grows


message 118: by Dini (new)
Nov 21, 2008 05:49PM

245923 you'll need to wear shades
under the blue, cloudless sky
walking hand in hand


message 117: by Robbie (new)
Nov 09, 2008 08:58PM

429846 For a brighter day
Wash with Tide and brush with Gleem
You'll need to wear shades!


message 116: by Dini (new)
Oct 31, 2008 04:04AM

245923 the spices of life
helps you through the ups and downs
for a brighter day


message 115: by Robbie (new)
Oct 08, 2008 08:00PM

429846 always together
shakers of salt and pepper
the spices of life


message 114: by Abigail (new)
Sep 07, 2008 09:21PM

1432413 True quality time
reading a beloved book
always together


message 113: by Robbie (new)
Sep 07, 2008 05:10PM

429846 what fond memories
carefree days, doing nothing
true quality time


message 112: by Dini (new)
Aug 31, 2008 08:03AM

245923 found in the basement
old pictures from my childhood
what fond memories!


message 111: by Novin (new)
Aug 26, 2008 03:21AM

68233 couldn't stop reading
a long old poem which I-
found in the basement



message 110: by Dini (new)
Aug 26, 2008 02:39AM

245923 way too late last night
I was up with a book I--
couldn't stop reading


message 109: by Abigail (new)
Aug 16, 2008 04:55PM

1432413 The morning birds sing
too loud at noon. I was up
way too late last night.


message 108: by Robbie (new)
Aug 13, 2008 06:31PM

429846 deadline approaching
I will work all through the night
the morning birds sing


message 107: by Rachel (new)
Aug 12, 2008 11:13AM

346802 dunno where to start...
hours tick by, the pressure mounts,
deadline approaching


message 106: by Dini (new)
Aug 05, 2008 12:46AM

245923 I don't like packing
things strewn all over the place
dunno where to start


message 105: by Meghan (new)
Aug 04, 2008 09:53PM

199350 itsy-bitsy one
lost amonst all the boxes
I don't like packing


message 104: by Robbie (last edited Aug 04, 2008 06:45PM) (new)
Aug 04, 2008 06:45PM

429846 one who got away
was ten times bigger than this
itsy-bitsy one


message 103: by Dini (new)
Jul 23, 2008 01:02AM

245923 my love overflows
as I see the face of the
one who got away


message 102: by Robbie (new)
Jul 15, 2008 09:33PM

429846 on the silver chain
his face peers from the locket
my love overflows


message 101: by Robbie (new)
Jun 12, 2008 07:43PM

429846 see the best in each
charm that joins the others
on the silver chain


message 100: by Rachel (new)
May 30, 2008 07:25AM

346802 happy times we shared;
choose to remember the good,
see the best in each



message 99: by Robbie (new)
May 28, 2008 08:55AM

429846 visitin' old friends
we tell jokes, remembering
happy times we shared


message 98: by Novin (new)
May 28, 2008 03:10AM

68233 my tears fall later
shaking with happines
visitin' an old old friend


message 97: by Robbie (new)
May 26, 2008 08:43AM

429846 But I play along
I smile, feigning happiness
my tears fall later


message 96: by Meghan (new)
May 24, 2008 07:33PM

199350 Damn widowbrain
I don't know what that word means
But I play along


message 95: by Alicia (new)
May 23, 2008 06:29AM

919449 Where are the haiku?
I know I put them somewhere.
Damn widowbrain!


message 94: by Robbie (new)
May 22, 2008 04:32AM

429846 perhaps it's just me
wanting to keep up the game
where are the haikus?


message 93: by Dini (new)
May 08, 2008 07:54AM

245923 LOL, Robbie. The in-laws are redeemed!


message 92: by Robbie (new)
May 08, 2008 07:52AM

429846 troublesome in-laws
always have good intentions
perhaps it's just me


message 91: by Erin (new)
May 06, 2008 06:48PM

402002 Dini - so funny! especailly with your PS re no in-laws yet :) 3rd line really packed a punch.


message 90: by Dini (last edited May 05, 2008 06:27AM) (new)
May 05, 2008 06:27AM

245923 like climbing ivy
encroaching upon your life
troublesome in-laws

(This is fiction. I don't actually have in-laws yet.)


message 89: by Robbie (new)
Apr 18, 2008 06:43PM

429846 without the wilting
my hairdo curls and towers
like climbing ivy


message 88: by Robbie (new)
Apr 07, 2008 09:06AM

429846 frescoes on my wall
portray flowers, beauty, love
without the wilting




message 87: by Dini (new)
Apr 04, 2008 09:56PM

245923 art spills everywhere
spending night and day painting
frescoes on my wall


message 86: by Rachel (new)
Apr 04, 2008 10:03AM

346802 weak portfolio
overstuffed until it splits
art spills everywhere


message 85: by Robbie (new)
Apr 02, 2008 10:07AM

429846 his Achilles heel
the falling market stabs his
weak portfolio


message 84: by Arctic (new)
Mar 31, 2008 11:59AM

678071 Infinite treasure
a bed for sleepy Smaug and
his Achilles heel


message 83: by Dini (new)
Mar 28, 2008 12:26AM

245923 It is MY precious
A row of books on the shelf
Infinite treasure


message 82: by Meghan (new)
Mar 25, 2008 08:13PM

199350 War against Mordor
The ring calls for his master
It is MY precious


message 81: by Dini (new)
Mar 23, 2008 10:58PM

245923 They shout "Fight! Fight! Fight!"
Hobbits, humans, elves and dwarves
War against Mordor

(Because I just saw Return of the King last night. Heh.)


message 80: by Robbie (new)
Mar 22, 2008 10:25PM

429846 My boys are now fans
Leaning to the left and right
They shout "Fight! Fight! Fight!"


message 79: by Alicia (new)
Mar 17, 2008 04:12PM

919449 Planet of the Apes
All day long on New Year's Day:
My boys are now fans.


message 78: by Robbie (new)
Mar 16, 2008 08:44PM

429846 Tim Roth is awesome
Who the heck is Tim Roth? Shrug.
Planet of the Apes


message 77: by Arctic (last edited Mar 12, 2008 02:13PM) (new)
Mar 12, 2008 02:07PM

678071 a sonata soars
Legend of 1900
Tim Roth is awesome




message 76: by Rachel (new)
Mar 08, 2008 12:55PM

346802 melodiously
fingers tickle the iv'ries
a sonata soars


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