Critique My Story!!!
> What if the legends were true?
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(last edited Dec 06, 2012 07:50PM)
Sep 12, 2012 10:17PM
I would really appreciate if people would critique my work in progress. I am actually pretty far in but I would like some feedback.
This story has now available at smashwords and amazon.
Ducky and Kyra just inbox me if you are interested in getting a free copy at Smashwords. :)
Sep 18, 2012 07:20PM
It's good, I like it!
Sep 23, 2012 11:19AM
I think you have an amazing knack for description and language devices!!! You can really bring the scene to life with the plot and scenery development, and the action keeps you on the edge of your seat with a fast-but-not-too-fast pace. Keep up the great work!!!!!
Nov 11, 2012 10:22AM
Thank you Ducky and Kyra, I been out of it working on other projects for awhile. Unfortunately life distracts you.
Nov 15, 2012 08:38PM
*snort* No kidding.
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