Poems, (from mckenzie :) )

by Brie Reid
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genre: Poetry
description:
Just my first draft of my poem.


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chapter 1: Poems.


Poems.
chapter 1   —   updated 01/12/08   —   374 characters   —   0 people liked it
Pointe Shoes

Pink, silky
and smooth

but hard as
a rock

on the inside.

you think you
envy them

until you slip
them on

pain overcomes
you

like running in
quicksand

you quickly
step out

and right
there you

realize that being in
your own shoes

is perfectly
fine.


- Theres a moral to this
poem but its kinda hard to get. :D
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