some of my cheesy and corny attempts at poetry

by James Pantou
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genre: Poetry
description:
I've uploaded some of these in my friendster blog. Now it's here. I suggest you read these before any meal. The effects of my poetic artistry (should it be possible to call it so) can be quite severe. But if you decide to go on a diet, read these aloud exactly before meals ;p


chapters

chapter 1: Manusia pereka kata

chapter 3: Wonderful

chapter 4: ziiiiiii


Manusia pereka kata
chapter 1   —   updated 12/29/07   —   314 characters   —   2 people liked it   —   2 reviews
Manusia pereka kata

Manusia tak bisa dipercaya

Kata pun tak bisa dipercaya

Karena cuma rekaan manusia

Pun kata-kata yang Anda baca

Walau semuanya bernas makna

Karena sayalah pereka-rekanya

Jangan percaya begitu saja

Saya juga manusia

Sama seperti Anda

Tak bisa dipercaya

Hahahahaha
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Edziardo said:
" nice poetry! "

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chapter 4 review
Gratcia said:
" Hihiiiii...eh James ini bukan haiku kan, hahaha...

Cheers, kebanyakan baca teologi niy...haha :P "

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