How to Change the World
by Alyssa
genre:
Poetry
description:
This is a poem I wrote on a day when I had an inspirational experience and breakthrough. My eyes looked at that experience, and every experience in the way of this poem.
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by Alyssa Shrout
by Alyssa Shrout
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updated 03/27/08
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Drifting unconsciously
Waves of effect lapping over m body
Some days I'm treading water
Other days I'm drowning
All along I'm wondering:
Will I ever be in control?
A ship comes
Brightly in the distance
Wherever it moves
The elements do its bidding
As it approaches
I see knowing eyes in the faces of smiling people
Aboard the S.S. Cause
Touched
Lifted
Inspired
I join the ship
Becoming the creator of my life
From up here
My eyes are open to miles and miles of horizons
Along the way
I spot people floating in effect
Some days drowning
Other days treading water
I look upon them with
Knowing eyes and a smiling face
Translucence shows me divinity
Touched
Lifted
Inspired
Another creator
Aboard the S.S. Cause
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Waves of effect lapping over m body
Some days I'm treading water
Other days I'm drowning
All along I'm wondering:
Will I ever be in control?
A ship comes
Brightly in the distance
Wherever it moves
The elements do its bidding
As it approaches
I see knowing eyes in the faces of smiling people
Aboard the S.S. Cause
Touched
Lifted
Inspired
I join the ship
Becoming the creator of my life
From up here
My eyes are open to miles and miles of horizons
Along the way
I spot people floating in effect
Some days drowning
Other days treading water
I look upon them with
Knowing eyes and a smiling face
Translucence shows me divinity
Touched
Lifted
Inspired
Another creator
Aboard the S.S. Cause
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Michele
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I loved this! Every word resonates within me...Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Michele Junior "
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Caralee
said:
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Great poem Alyssa,I think I am one of those people treading water! Hopefully someday I can join the ship too!
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