The Caged Canary
by Neko Riyder
genre:
Romance
description:
/Fiction-Romance/
ok warning this story is undergoing a lot of revision so unless the chapter says at the top revised then it is the original and bad copy. this is going to take some tie so be patient please.
chapters
chapter 1:
The Yakuza Princess
chapter 2:
chap1
chapter 3:
Chapter 3
chapter 4:
Chapter 4
chapter 5:
Chapter 5
The Yakuza Princess
chapter 1
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updated 06/29/08
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415 characters
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4 people liked it
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4 reviews
"So do you have the money?" a tall, lean man with long brown hair asked a scrawny teenage waiter. The long haired man was a very devious person. The sadistic happiness glistened in his eyes like the sun on water. His Italian accent that melted so many hearts dripped from his every word. His black dress shirt and slacks hid him well in the dark alley behind the Japanese-American restraunt the teen was working in.
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chapter 1 review
Victoria ~HannaHannaH~
said:
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in your words "WOOT!!!" glad you got it up. afew editing mistakes.('Damn, why does my knee hurt,' she thought shifting her legs. is in there...more
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chapter 2 review
Victoria ~HannaHannaH~
said:
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double 'WOOT!' although the typos are harly noticable, they could be fixed . cant wait for the third chapter!!
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chapter 3 review
Victoria ~HannaHannaH~
said:
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ooh! im intreuged!! i want to read more and am dying!!! the confusion, the untold secrets.
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