The Liars - The Rain by ×☠Casey Crane☠× She's ripping wings off of butterflies

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Hi, I'm Mist. And I would like to tell you about my experience with The Liars.



chapters

chapter 1: The Rain

chapter 2: Coals

chapter 3: Coming soon


The Rain
chapter 1   —   updated Oct 24, 2009   —   1178 characters   —   10 people liked this writing   —   9 reviews of this writing
I sat at my desk. The rain pounded against my window. I sighed, while my eyes drifted down to a lined piece of paper, half full of my scribbles that were supposed to be writing my hand-writing. I started to read what I had written.

After reading it, I frowned. I slid my hand over to the paper and I crushed it in to a ball, then threw it across the room, which was covered with similar pieces. Thunder boomed.

I looked at a stack of paper on the corner of my desk. I reached out to get another piece of paper, but, decided against it. I sighed and put my elbow on the desk, put my hand into a fist, and leaned my head against it. My stared at the dancing rain, listening to the booming of the thunder, and watching the flickers from the lightning. A raindrop slowly slid down my window.

I jumped as i heard someone banging on my door.

I started walking towards the door, my bare feet pressing against the wooden floor. Next to the front door was a window that i could look through to see who was at the door. I reached the window, pulled away the curtain, and looked through the window. I couldn't see my visitor through the fog, the rain, and the night's mist.
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Jennifer said:
" By the way. . .how is this in the horror genre? "
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Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ oıɔoɹ/rocio Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ said:
" hey i like it but they ending just suddenly stops. u should continue writing it. tell us why the raindrop and u are not so different. also, u have a f...more "
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N for Nellie-la☠Quirky☠ said:
" awesome!!! "
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Perla Goode said:
" i'm interested "
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PlatinumPrincess said:
" Interesting... very intriguing. Keep it up. "
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SweetSacrifice said:
" You should continue it, instead of stopping there. "
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Al said:
" WRITE MORE! LOL! It was getting good! You need to continue this one! "
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N for Nellie-la☠Quirky☠ said:
" awesome...
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The Joker (Harbinger of ☠Doom☠) said:
" awesome. kinda sounds like Erik... "
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