((Still in Progress)) - Opening by Oceanwaves

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"The World has corrupted. The streets are deserted, the buildings are empty. The air is unbreathable. In 10 years we were supposed to make a comeback. That's what they said. They said the world would be clean, and fresh. No more pollution. But we were too late. Once we made the turn around, it was already making it's course. The Z-Plaugue. They said it would only hurt few. But it killed many. But they weren't dead. They were still alive."

Abrielle believes she's the only one left. After the plague hit, it hit 99.9% of the Earth. At first people thought it was minor. It wouldn't last. But it stayed for years. Slowly crumbling the population. And when it seemed over, it began. And Abrielle was the first to notice. She thinks she's the only one out there, but there are others out there. And they're waiting for her.



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chapter 1: Opening


Opening
chapter 1   —   updated Aug 18, 2009   —   1177 characters   —   13 people liked this writing   —   10 reviews of this writing
A cigarette.


People are cigarettes. Useless pawns used for someone’s own personal addiction. They have immense hope when they’re taken off of the old dusty shelves, and into someone else hands. Those hands are they're guardians.


They are shoved into their guardians dirty old pockets where fabric encloses them, and they wait helplessly until they’re guided out to the “light” again, to see what the world has to offer.


And when they finally get that freedom, they’re only used for a few pointless minutes of pain, and destruction. Their guardian uses them for their own pleasure while breaking that cigarette.


When the beholder is done, they end your importance. That was your only use. You’re thrown to the ground and forgotten, but there is still a flicker of hope.


Your few ashes start to ignite themselves, and you feel those few moments of adrenaline running through you. You still have power, and that's all that matters. Surviving.


Then you’re trampled. Stepped on. Your life is over. There’s no meaning. No hope left. No one is there for you. Only yourself and your misery.

But that's more than enough company.

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Sam said:
" Amazing... "
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Shion, the IMMORTAL DAUGHTER of POSEIDON***ISQ*** said:
" woah!! cool, i never thought of it like that!!! this is really cool! "
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ember said:
" i love it you make it sound so meaningless. the way you describe life to the death. "
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Felicity/Rosestar said:
" That is really intense Ocean! You are a great writer! "
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♠Miriam♠ (Owl City Fan) said:
" Wow, this was really deep! Keep writing. :) "
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Allie said:
" wow, great writing! "
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Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) said:
" This is really well written. I can't wait to read the rest. The plot sounds really interesting. I love books with huge disasters like that, and thi…more "
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Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) said:
" I love this! You're an awesome writer! I can't wait for the next chapter. This reminds me a bit of "The Stand", which is good, because I …more "
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Sam said:
" Tis is great stuff! "
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Snuffleupagus! said:
" i like this a lot. looking forward to more :) "
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