You Belong With Me (this story is finished) - Dylan's New Girlfriend by Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova
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This story is based on the song "You Belong With Me" by Taylor Swift.
Arielle Swann and Dylan Parker have been the best of friends ever since they can remember. Arielle's family moved into the same neighborhood as Dylan when Arielle was 11. She and Dylan became fast friends. They live right next to eachother and see eachother every day at school.
Arielle and Dylan kept no secrets from eachother, until.... Arielle fell in love with him.
© Copyright 2009 Susannah T.
chapters
chapter 1:
Dylan's New Girlfriend
chapter 2:
Saturday
chapter 3:
Walk in the Neighborhood
chapter 4:
Breakdown
chapter 5:
The Best Day
chapter 6:
A Gift
chapter 7:
Bad News
chapter 8:
Band Practice
chapter 9:
How I Told Dylan
chapter 10:
Band Uniform
chapter 11:
Apology Accepted
chapter 12:
He's Available
chapter 13:
New Ideas
chapter 14:
He Just Might
chapter 15:
Permission Granted
chapter 16:
The Night of My Life
chapter 17:
An Amazing Miracle
Dylan's New Girlfriend
chapter 1
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updated Sep 27, 2009
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I wiped a tear from my eye, while dragging my heavy bike along the wet pavement. The rain pouring down just added to my sorrows. When I made it to my house, I left my bike on the porch. I opened the front door of my house, and walked in, soaking wet. My mom gasped at the sight of me. "Oh honey-"
I walked to my room, ignoring my mom. I collapsed on my bed, and burst into tears. I picked up the picture of Dylan that I had on my dresser. I cried even harder, and didn't dare to open the curtains. The door opened, and my friend came in.
Savannah was my best friend, and she could usually cheer me up.
"Hi Savannah," I said, still crying.
"Hey," she said, smiling warmly. "What's the matter? If you want, we can open the curtains and see if Dylan is in his room."
I gave her a look that told her everything.
"Oh," Savannah said, realizing the problem. "You're crying about Dylan."
I nodded pitifully. Savannah hugged me and said,
"I'm sorry."
"It's okay, it's just, I-I-I thought I actually h-had a chance
w-with him." I sputtered. Savannah nodded respectfully.
"Sorry, I got your hopes up very high; I didn't think he'd get a girlfriend."
"I know."
Savannah said, "I think I need to go."
I agreed without an arguement. I walked to the living room after Savannah left.
"Mom?" I said.
"Yes, Arielle?"
"Well, Dylan, he..." I felt tears well up in my eyes.
"Oh, Arielle, my angel!" my mom exclaimed, pulling me into a hug.
I burst into tears, and hugged my mom back.
"I know it must be hard for you to raise a cry baby without dad's help."
My mom shook her head quickly. "No, honey! Dad will be back from the war soon."
I nodded.
"Well, I really should take a shower."
My mom nodded in agreement.
"Okay, honey, take as long as you want. Take three hours for all I care!"
And I did. I practically took three hours, so when I got out, it was like eight o'clock. I decided to go to bed, and I cried myself to sleep.
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I walked to my room, ignoring my mom. I collapsed on my bed, and burst into tears. I picked up the picture of Dylan that I had on my dresser. I cried even harder, and didn't dare to open the curtains. The door opened, and my friend came in.
Savannah was my best friend, and she could usually cheer me up.
"Hi Savannah," I said, still crying.
"Hey," she said, smiling warmly. "What's the matter? If you want, we can open the curtains and see if Dylan is in his room."
I gave her a look that told her everything.
"Oh," Savannah said, realizing the problem. "You're crying about Dylan."
I nodded pitifully. Savannah hugged me and said,
"I'm sorry."
"It's okay, it's just, I-I-I thought I actually h-had a chance
w-with him." I sputtered. Savannah nodded respectfully.
"Sorry, I got your hopes up very high; I didn't think he'd get a girlfriend."
"I know."
Savannah said, "I think I need to go."
I agreed without an arguement. I walked to the living room after Savannah left.
"Mom?" I said.
"Yes, Arielle?"
"Well, Dylan, he..." I felt tears well up in my eyes.
"Oh, Arielle, my angel!" my mom exclaimed, pulling me into a hug.
I burst into tears, and hugged my mom back.
"I know it must be hard for you to raise a cry baby without dad's help."
My mom shook her head quickly. "No, honey! Dad will be back from the war soon."
I nodded.
"Well, I really should take a shower."
My mom nodded in agreement.
"Okay, honey, take as long as you want. Take three hours for all I care!"
And I did. I practically took three hours, so when I got out, it was like eight o'clock. I decided to go to bed, and I cried myself to sleep.
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chapter 1 review
Trixie
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It's great. The picture of sadness is clear. Please write more! I look for this writing everyday to fine something NEW! Keep it up!
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chapter 1 review
⚡Mrs. Rupert Grint⚡
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Good, but waaaaay too overused plot. Girl and guy are best friends, girl falls in love with the guy, guy doesn't realize it until the end, in the end …more
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chapter 2 review
♠Miriam♠ I (nuff said)
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this reminded me so much of the music video for talor swift's song. luv it!
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chapter 2 review
Maryam_Music Lover
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I love the way they communicate, the note thing!Very cool!Lol!
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chapter 4 review
Sarahbear
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please keep writing.you belong with me is my favorite song.and music video.i luv that its now a really good story.
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chapter 5 review
Taylor (gray skies)
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it was cool it was kinda like the taylor swift music video "you belong with me" and also u so have to finish it that so cant be all
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chapter 6 review
Taylor (gray skies)
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hah yeah when i last posted i didnt c u said this was a story based on the song, im weird. well i loved it so r u going to do the prom scene in teh st…more
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chapter 6 review
⚡Mrs. Rupert Grint⚡
said:
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Um, you do know karaoke is where you sing a song already written by someone else on a cd, right?
Don't get me wrong, it's good.
you also don'…more "
Don't get me wrong, it's good.
you also don'…more "
chapter 7 review
Sarah
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uhhh, she sounds a little selfish in this chapter, her dad dies and all she cares about is her happiness, shouldn't she kinda miss her dad a bit?
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chapter 8 review
ScreamSunshine
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This is really good! What is Dylan going to say about her fathers death?
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chapter 8 review
Rae*Ani/Isi* *RolePlay Addicted*
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that was really good. i like how savannah went ahead and made copies without asking ariel first. teeheehee
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chapter 8 review
Trixie
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Come on! Write more! It's getting more interesting! Keep it up! I really like it!
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chapter 8 review
⚡Mrs. Rupert Grint⚡
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Wait, how did they make sheet music if Arielle only wrote the singing part, and Savannah is a drummer?
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chapter 9 review
ScreamSunshine
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This is greattt :D
I was upset that Dylan didn't hug her or anything when she said her dad died. He should have tried to comfort her or some…more "
I was upset that Dylan didn't hug her or anything when she said her dad died. He should have tried to comfort her or some…more "
chapter 9 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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OMG!!!! I REALLY THOUGHT SHE WAS GONNA TELL HIM!!! grrrrrr....
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chapter 9 review
Trixie
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c'mon man, write more! I'm a big fan! I'm waiting and I'm unpatient to wait!
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chapter 9 review
♠Miriam♠ I (nuff said)
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this was good i thought he was actually going to find out!!! i can't wait to see his expression when he does.
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chapter 9 review
BOO*alli*BOO
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the beggining is really sweet... just like the video... but its kinda predictable... and by the time you know who dies its a little cheesy. your dad d…more
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chapter 10 review
Trixie
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Chapter 9 is sooo sad.... But Chapter 10 is seems fun to do! YaY! Please write more! I love it!
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chapter 11 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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awwwwwww, sweet! Great story! Keep writing!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 11 review
♠Miriam♠ I (nuff said)
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keep writing!! i want dylan to know the truth!!!!
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chapter 12 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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Oh my god! I almost SCREAMED! I had to cover my mouth! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!
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chapter 12 review
rp and music addicted Bookworm (Becca)
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OMG!!!!! I LOVE THE SONG, AND NOW THIS COMES UP AND IT TIES EVERYTHING TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 13 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
said:
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I CANNOT BELIEVE HOW MANY PEOPLE LIKE THIS STORY! it's super successful! keep writing you and your writing is awesome!
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chapter 14 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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YAY! HE LIKES HER! *happy dance* YAY!
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chapter 15 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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cool! but seriously su, get on with it!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE AND DO IT QUICKLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 15 review
Jessika
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it was okay but i just kind of thought it was kind of boring in some parts and kind of too short, but it was good. yeah um so i dont really get the la…more
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chapter 16 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! OMG!!! I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 17 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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YAY! Such a good ending!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE this story! I cannot believe her dad came back!!! So he wasn't dead after all?!…more
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chapter 17 review
Olivia
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *wipes happy tear away!*
This was soooooo good!!!!! :) "
This was soooooo good!!!!! :) "
chapter 17 review
crazy MN Viking fan who's also a STALKER!! ~leah~
said:
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its goood over all but a lot of dialougue tho
and how did her dad cum back from the dead?? "
and how did her dad cum back from the dead?? "
