Goodbye - Goodbye by ♫Krista♫

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A poem I just thought of



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chapter 1: Goodbye


Goodbye
chapter 1   —   updated Jul 05, 2009   —   547 characters   —   16 people liked this writing   —   12 reviews of this writing
I felt the pain in me
when I had to say goodbye
to the only man I loved,
for I did not want him to see me die.

It was quick and very sad.
I saw the torment in his eyes,
I prayed to God to help him
because I could not bare to see him cry.

I shook his hand, kissed his cheek
and left without another word.
I glanced behind my shoulder,
he was gone, soaring high above just like a little bird.

The rain had finally stopped
but the clouds were still dull and gray,
I said my goodbyes;
the last words I would say.
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SylverSkye said:
" sad! very good, though! "
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♫♪Kristenn҉ liked it
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ScreamSunshine said:
" That brought tears to my eyes. "
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Anna (Maxy) said:
" I really like this! It's sad, but really good. You have a gift. "
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♥κДτϊε βэαη♥ said:
" i love it! its so sad! "
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Musical♥Writer said:
" lovely!! "
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Annie said:
" :*( "
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You Know You Love Me ~leah~ said:
" omg..that was so...amazing "
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♥ Brigid ♥ said:
" beautiful! "
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I'amber said:
" oh, I love this.
Sad, but amazly good! "
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call me crazy and be done with it. liked it
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Aly ♫SOCCER GOALIE♫SOFTBALL CATCHER♫ said:
" wow. its so sad, but amazing! "
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Cleveland said:
" Pensive.I wished for a few more words. "
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Christa & ? said:
" *tear* *tear* *snivel* (blows nose) I like it a lot, but it's so sad! X O (cry face) "
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