Goodbye - Goodbye by ♫Krista♫
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Goodbye
Goodbye
chapter 1
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updated Jul 05, 2009
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I felt the pain in me
when I had to say goodbye
to the only man I loved,
for I did not want him to see me die.
It was quick and very sad.
I saw the torment in his eyes,
I prayed to God to help him
because I could not bare to see him cry.
I shook his hand, kissed his cheek
and left without another word.
I glanced behind my shoulder,
he was gone, soaring high above just like a little bird.
The rain had finally stopped
but the clouds were still dull and gray,
I said my goodbyes;
the last words I would say.
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when I had to say goodbye
to the only man I loved,
for I did not want him to see me die.
It was quick and very sad.
I saw the torment in his eyes,
I prayed to God to help him
because I could not bare to see him cry.
I shook his hand, kissed his cheek
and left without another word.
I glanced behind my shoulder,
he was gone, soaring high above just like a little bird.
The rain had finally stopped
but the clouds were still dull and gray,
I said my goodbyes;
the last words I would say.
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Anna (Maxy)
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I really like this! It's sad, but really good. You have a gift.
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Christa & ?
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*tear* *tear* *snivel* (blows nose) I like it a lot, but it's so sad! X O (cry face)
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