Diaries of a Bird Kid - Chapter One - Garrett by Swiftfire

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Hahaha, this is basically the Maximum Ride roleplay from Garrett/Stella's POVs!!! I may change some things, but most of it will stay the same... so... yeah... ENJOY!!!!

Note: Some of the charries in the story belong to other people (well, most of them). So, thank you GVP, Olivia, RedPath, Rebecca, Jessica, Tanglesky, Lauren, and Caitlin!!! I'm also cutting out some of the minor characters, to make it less confusing!!!

Here's all the members of the flock (so far):

Stella
Garrett
Daphle
Storm
Cormia
Damon
Opal
Jake
Christie
Tanner
Eliana

Oh, btw, I do not own any Maximum Ride rights, so don't kill me, blah blah blah...



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chapter 1: Chapter One - Garrett


Chapter One - Garrett
chapter 1   —   updated Jan 01, 2010   —   3809 characters   —   30 people liked this writing   —   25 reviews of this writing
In the air, nothing matters. Not loss, not hardships, not sadness... that's why I loved to fly. I closed my eyes, letting myself soar on an air current, feeling the wind in my powerful wings.

"Freedom is awesome!" I heard Daphle yell, and I opened my eyes just in time to see her do a double front flip. In mid-air. Then she dove towards the earth at about a hundred miles per hour, her long brown hair rushing behind her, and pulled out at the last second. I smiled. A week ago we had been in cages at the School, but now we were free. No more cages. No more whitecoats sticking needles in us. Just... freedom. But, at a cost, such a cost.

No, I thought. Don't think about it. It's over, and there's nothing you can do about it now. So don't think about her.

I sighed and followed Daphle. She turned around a little. "So, where are we going now, Garrett?" she asked me.

I attempted a smile, for Daphle's sake. She was only eleven, after all. "I was thinking New York," I said. "There's a lot of people there, so we'll be hard to find."

Daphle thought for a second or so. "New York's far away from the School, right???"

I leaned over and ruffled her hair. "Yes, it is. Maybe we can learn some geography there, too."

Daphle smiled and rolled her eyes. I mentally praised myself. I was getting pretty good at this.

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Another hour of freedom passed.

"I'm hhhuuuuuunnnnnggggrrrryyyyy!!!" complained Daphle from beside me.

I sighed and looked down. Below us was a small town, and I could see the Golden Arches from where we hovered. "Okay," I agreed. "Quick break."

We landed behind the McDonald's. I tucked in my wings close to my body, and shifted Daphle's jacket so her wings were unnoticeable. Walking to the front of the restaurant, I spotted a sign that said we were in Ohio.

"Come on," I called to Daphle, taking out the money they had 'borrowed' from an unsuspecting person back in Colorado.

I pushed open the doors and scanned the restaurant instinctively. There were lots of windows, most of which I could probably break if the door was blocked. There were a few people eating, and I scanned their faces. You could never tell...

"Hello?" came a bored voice.

I looked up in surprise and whirled around. The voice had come from the girl behind the counter. She had short spikey black hair and was wearing a pink nose ring.

"Huh?" I asked.

The nose ring girl rolled her eyes at me. "Wanna order something???"

Oh. Right. "I'll have the-" I glanced at the menu, then decided just to pick a random thing. "Three double cheeseburgers, four large fries, two Dr. Peppers, and two chocolate shakes."

The girl looked at me with wide green eyes. I self-conscientiously folded my wings tighter against my back.

Daphle stepped up. "I'll have the same thing."

If possible, the girl's eyes grew wider. It was... kind of amusing. Then she blinked and turned to punch in the numbers. "Here or to go?"

"Um..." I started.

"Here," Daphle answered for me. Good old Daphle. What would I do without her???

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Soon afterwards, the food came. And believe me, a double cheeseburger has never tasted better.

"Yum," I said between bites.

"I SO second that motion," Daphle said, slurping her shake. "How much longer 'til we get to New York, after this?"

Well, we were in Ohio, so... "Three, four hours," I estimated.
Daphle nodded.

I did another quick restaurant scan. No one seemed to be turning into wolves yet. Daphle was finishing off the last of her burger. "Ready?" I asked her.

"Yep," Daphle said happily. "Let's go to New York!!!"
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RedPath ~Enna-girl~ said:
" This rocks Swifty!!!!! "
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Joan said:
" OMJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is a great story!!!!! i couldn't stop reading, great job!! "
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Angel♥ said:
" cool. "
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I'amber said:
" Love it! "
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Wren ♫aka♫ Rebecca said:
" u rock swifty!!!! great job! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" That is great! just how I remember it. I love the Idaho arguement to. Idaho does suck btw. "
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☠☠☠Greek Vampire Pixie☠☠☠~Wal-Mart~ said:
" AWESOME!!!!!! "
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Wren ♫aka♫ Rebecca said:
" *tear* its a walk down memory lane! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" Jake is so weird. I'll have him talk more since Stella seems to be complaining... "
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Nightshade said:
" EEK!!! SO COOL!! I'm somewhat hopelessly confused but that's okay! Jk. XD
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Wren ♫aka♫ Rebecca said:
" so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" good ol Jake! ~pats his wolfy head~
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Jordan said:
" This would be a great Roleplay, as you've made it to be. Great! I love the originality of the characters' personalities. Wierd enough, this could be p…more "
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Wren ♫aka♫ Rebecca said:
" i forgot how much our rp sounded like a story! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" nope! Cormia just happened to decide to be nice. since Stella will be dating her crush. "
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Jordan said:
" Ah, I hope he lasts. "
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RedPath ~Enna-girl~ said:
" It's getting good! "
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☠☠☠Greek Vampire Pixie☠☠☠~Wal-Mart~ said:
" AWESOMENESS!!! "
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Wren ♫aka♫ Rebecca said:
" i really forget that im not reading a book! "
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chapter 8 review
.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" I WANT MORE SWIFTY!! CAN U WRITE SOON!? lol "
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☠☠☠Greek Vampire Pixie☠☠☠~Wal-Mart~ said:
" WRITE MORE!!!!!! PWEEZE!!!!!!!!! "
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Brendan said:
" good stuff. i like how your dodging around the copyrights issues of maximum ride so that they cant sue u! very talented stuff there. "
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Jonathan said:
" wow. i almost thought i was reading James PAttersons' work for a minute. (in a good way, not like you stole from him)
AWESOME YO! "
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RedPath ~Enna-girl~ said:
" yay! you added some more!!!

Poor Eliana<--- yay I can say her name now!

lol I'm so pathetic........... "
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Wren ♫aka♫ Rebecca said:
" MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOR…more "
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