my biology partner - Spilling (chapter 20) by cinderella

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Sabrina is a normal teenager. When she is paired with the new guy Landon for biology she doesn't notice any thing different except his beauty. Little does she know that he will change her life extremely.

PLease tell me if you like it. Also I love to be told about the good things and bad things :)

I have made a YouTube video on my story. It is a video about the way I see the characters. Go to YouTube and search My Biology Partner by Cinderella, or search Injoydecmber. (i'm still trying to fix the music.) Comment the story ir message me telling what you think :)



chapters

chapter 1: Explanation

chapter 2: Just a half smile.

chapter 4: A ride home

chapter 5: Second day

chapter 7: Trouble

chapter 8: Telling the Story

chapter 9: Landon's explosion

chapter 12: Weeks later

chapter 13: Fighting

chapter 14: Curbside

chapter 15: Back to Normal

chapter 16: Staying strong

chapter 17: Breakdown

chapter 18: The guitar player

chapter 19: thinking of change

chapter 20: Spilling

chapter 22: Saying goodbye.


Spilling
chapter 20   —   updated Aug 05, 2009   —   4396 characters   —   98 people liked this writing   —   70 reviews of this writing
"Whoa." Heath gasped.

I rolled my eyes, "Come on." I grabbed his hand and pulled him to his car.

I dropped his hand and got into the passenger's seat.

"What's with the new look?" Heath asked.

So i guess wearing heels, curling my hair, and wearing a tad bit heavier make up is considered a new look. "What new look? I'm just in a good mood and I'm liking the idea of change." I reached over and kissed him on the cheek. He smiled. "Good morning to you too." I said.

"Sorry Sabrina, you just took me by surprise." He sighed and pulled into the school parking lot. "Well why are you in such a good mood?" He asked while searching for a parking spot.

"You know I really don't know. I guess maybe the thought of change has got me all excited." My heart sped up at thought of one of the changes. Changing Heath for Landon. It's not like it was official yet but the thought excited me. I still wasn't sure about changing and it just hurt me to think of dumping Heath.

"What else are you going to change?" He asked pulling into a spot and turned off his car.

"I'm not to sure yet but when I am you will know." I smiled at him and got out of the car.

He met me at the back of his car and took my hand. We walked to over to our little family of friends who were all chatting together. I thought it was kinda weird considering they never were all together in the morning.

"Hey guys, what's going on?" I asked when we got over to them.

Lacey and Gavin turned around. "Oh! Hey Sabrina." Lacey said and separated from Gavin to reveal Landon in the middle of the circle.

Seeing Landon in the middle made me suspicious. "What are you guys talking about?" I tried to sound nice.

After a few shared glance in the circle, Krissy answered. "Uh, we were, umm talking about... Christmas! We all know it's just around the corner. We are actually talking about doing a secret santa."

"Great cover up, now we are going to have to do secret santa." Lacey hissed.

I knew it. Landon told them everything. I took a step closer to Landon. "They knew all along didn't they? You told them you plan and then you told them what happened! How could you? Why would you?"

I was furious. That should of been something private. Plus now everyone knew but Heath.

"Sabrina I'm really sorry. I told Gavin only at first but of course Lacey was getting suspicious. He told her, then she told Krissy, and then Krissy told Ashton."

"Who is going to tell me?" Heath interrupted. He sounded mad But I ignored him.

"So you all know?" I asked. They nodded. "Why didn't anyone give me a heads up?" The guys shrugged and the girls looked guilty.

"I'm really sorry Sabrina. I knew Landon didn't want you to know," Krissy said.

Rinnng!

"I'll see you guys later," I said still angry. I grabbed Heath's hand and pulled toward the school doors."

"What was that all about?" Heath asked when we were in school.

"Oh, I told Landon a secret of mine yesterday and he told all our friends." I said annoyed wish that was true.

"Oh what secret?" he asked when we got to my locker.

I opened my locker. "You know the one about the kiss in pre- k with Chase." I lied. I put my bag and coat in my locker.

"Oh, that's not to bad Sabrina. Unless he promised."

I grabbed my math stuff and slammed my locker door shut. " He did. That's why I am so mad." I carried on with the lie.

"That makes sense. I'll see you at Lunch." He kissed me on the cheek and walked away.

I walked to math and sat next to Ashton. "Sabrina, you shouldn't have been so harsh on Landon. He really does love you. He also has some news that he just found out about last night." He said.

"What is it?" I asked hoping he would spill.

"It's something he should tell you Sabrina. You look fabulous today. Landon was shocked when he saw you walk out of Heath's car. He stopped telling us what happened yesterday. Luckily he was able to finish before you came over."

"Oh, well thank you." I smiled. I actually liked the new look.

"Welcome." He laughed. "Are you trying to impress anyone?"

"No," I said shyly. "Well I just felt the need to dress to impress."

Mrs. Dawson walked walked in and cut off all conversation. The only thing that I could think about was what Landon really thought of my "new look" and what his news was. By the time I got to biology I was a nervous wreck.
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