my biology partner - Detintion Landon's POV! (chapter 10) by cinderella
description:
Sabrina is a normal teenager. When she is paired with the new guy Landon for biology she doesn't notice any thing different except his beauty. Little does she know that he will change her life extremely.
PLease tell me if you like it. Also I love to be told about the good things and bad things :)
I have made a YouTube video on my story. It is a video about the way I see the characters. Go to YouTube and search My Biology Partner by Cinderella, or search Injoydecmber. (i'm still trying to fix the music.) Comment the story ir message me telling what you think :)
chapters
chapter 1:
Explanation
chapter 2:
Just a half smile.
chapter 3:
Reunion! (Changed the descriptions)
chapter 4:
A ride home
chapter 5:
Second day
chapter 6:
Landon's POV The note
chapter 7:
Trouble
chapter 8:
Telling the Story
chapter 9:
Landon's explosion
chapter 10:
Detintion Landon's POV!
chapter 11:
Afterwards (Back to Sabrina's POV)
chapter 12:
Weeks later
chapter 13:
Fighting
chapter 14:
Curbside
chapter 15:
Back to Normal
chapter 16:
Staying strong
chapter 17:
Breakdown
chapter 18:
The guitar player
chapter 19:
thinking of change
chapter 20:
Spilling
chapter 21:
A beautiful Day (Landon's POV)
chapter 22:
Saying goodbye.
chapter 23:
Sidewalk talk(completely changed!)
chapter 24:
Forgetting her (Landon's POV)
chapter 25:
A chapter that was taken out!!
I heard her laugh and looked at the door. That wasn't a great idea, I got a good shot of Heath kissing her.
Now she is on her way to her way to her our with the fake guy. Ha he acts so cool but I know he is just an a**.
Sabrina walked in and sat in the back corner opposite from me. I felt so bad and needed to apologize but how? I couldn't tell her what I could do. I walked over to sit next to her. She started to get up and I grabbed her wrist.
"Please just listen to me Sabrina."
She sighed and rolled her eyes then sat back down.
"Look I feel horrible. I just don't like what your boyfriend thinks about me. It is crazy he doesn't even know me. He was thinking some really rude things and then you told me You didn't want to talk to me. You really hurt me. I know you don't think I got you three days of detention."
Her voice was shaking. "You know what he is thinking?"
I leaned closer to her and whispered, "Yes Sabrina, I can read everyones mind except for yours. And I like it that way. It gives me relief. "
"Oh," she sighed "your so NOT funny. I'm not all happy like I was earlier today, right now I really hate you, you can't make me laugh like earlier. If you are trying to apologize you are doing the wrong things! Mind reader? Do you think I'm stupid? Oh and you can't read my mind! You are only saying that so I don't ask you what I'm thinking." She laughed an angry laugh. "Oh, you are sooo good at making people like you then completely hate you Landon Night!"
My jaw dropped and I was filled with anger and sadness. I could understand why she didn't believe me but why did she go crazy. Oh, it's all about karma isn't it?
"Sabrina, you make me so mad I can't control myself! I just can't believe you after all we have been through today you make it worse! I shouldn't have told you shi*!"
"No, you shouldn't have! You should of Just kept your mouth closed the first day I met you! And I should of followed Heath and stayed clear of you and your trouble making problems!" She didn't take a single breath during her little speech. "Please just go back to where you were sitting," she said in a calmer voice.
I stood up and walked back to the seat I was sitting at. I was in complete shock at heartbreak.
I got a lot of good done with that I thought to my self sinking in to my seat.
reviews of this writing
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With the whole 'you're the only person who's mind I can't read' it's again slightly Twilight-ish. But I still really like it. Continue Please! "
This is reaaaaally good. I don't like Heath. I like Landon! Muhahaha. GO LANDON! :) "
oh btw i watched harry potter and the goblet of fir...more "
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Can't wait for more! "
NOOOOOOOOO NO NO NO NO NO NO! AHHHHH! Landon bad! :O
I can't wait for more! Ahhhh! "


















