is he right for me? (please read!) - first day of school by Sarahbear

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chapter 1: first day of school

chapter 2: school

chapter 3: who is this guy

chapter 4: hallway

chapter 5: furious

chapter 6: ride from school

chapter 7: man hes strong

chapter 8: Damen

chapter 9: secret meeting

chapter 10: trouble

chapter 11: pregnant?

chapter 12: hotel room


first day of school
chapter 1   —   updated Jul 04, 2009   —   1103 characters   —   26 people liked this writing   —   22 reviews of this writing
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uh not again.im fourteen.girls my age dont deserve to be in school.were supposed to be shopping and tanning not studying and sitting in class.

well i cant change the rules so i guess its school, for now.i throw on a yellow ruffle top with black skinny jeans and head for my older brothers room to get my bag. i open the door to find a strangely beautiful guy sittin on his bed.ive never seen him with my brother before.he had brown,long,shaggy, and shiny hair,aquamarine eyes and that perfectly tanned skin.He was probably 16 like my brother.

he had this weird look on his face. he was smiling at me but questioning me at the same time.almost like he was admiring me.

"ill just grab my bag and leave then" i told him.Man where was my brother.shouldnt he be watching his friend.

"oh i was just checking you i mean chris's room out." he said smiling.

"smooth.well i better get goin or else im gonna be late.you might wanna go too."

"right well see ya later"he stated.

"wait whats ur name?"

he shrugged his shoulders and walked out of the door.
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Sarah said:
" I suggest you use proper grammer, a lot more people will read your story if you do, and it makes the story look more attractive. "
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Renaynaynay! said:
" ahhhh!sarah!i love it!you are soo good at writing!keep going.(mrs.cottonballs!tehe) "
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Hulagold said:
" it skips around too much......but its still a good story "
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Devin said:
" OMG!!!! i love it "
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" dammm girl!best chapter yet! i love this.u were right!keep going!<3 "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" KEEP WRITING! :D "
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" keep going girl!!!!ur making me anixios "
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cinderella said:
" good keep writing! "
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Courtney *Stark Lover* said:
" Well, I did feel like you were skipping around a lot. I thought that it was still the first day when they had the meeting. I wasn't sure at first, I f…more "
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