is he right for me? (please read!) - first day of school by Sarahbear
chapters
chapter 1:
first day of school
chapter 2:
school
chapter 3:
who is this guy
chapter 4:
hallway
chapter 5:
furious
chapter 6:
ride from school
chapter 7:
man hes strong
chapter 8:
Damen
chapter 9:
secret meeting
chapter 10:
trouble
chapter 11:
pregnant?
chapter 12:
hotel room
first day of school
chapter 1
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updated Jul 04, 2009
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22 reviews of this writing
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uh not again.im fourteen.girls my age dont deserve to be in school.were supposed to be shopping and tanning not studying and sitting in class.
well i cant change the rules so i guess its school, for now.i throw on a yellow ruffle top with black skinny jeans and head for my older brothers room to get my bag. i open the door to find a strangely beautiful guy sittin on his bed.ive never seen him with my brother before.he had brown,long,shaggy, and shiny hair,aquamarine eyes and that perfectly tanned skin.He was probably 16 like my brother.
he had this weird look on his face. he was smiling at me but questioning me at the same time.almost like he was admiring me.
"ill just grab my bag and leave then" i told him.Man where was my brother.shouldnt he be watching his friend.
"oh i was just checking you i mean chris's room out." he said smiling.
"smooth.well i better get goin or else im gonna be late.you might wanna go too."
"right well see ya later"he stated.
"wait whats ur name?"
he shrugged his shoulders and walked out of the door.
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uh not again.im fourteen.girls my age dont deserve to be in school.were supposed to be shopping and tanning not studying and sitting in class.
well i cant change the rules so i guess its school, for now.i throw on a yellow ruffle top with black skinny jeans and head for my older brothers room to get my bag. i open the door to find a strangely beautiful guy sittin on his bed.ive never seen him with my brother before.he had brown,long,shaggy, and shiny hair,aquamarine eyes and that perfectly tanned skin.He was probably 16 like my brother.
he had this weird look on his face. he was smiling at me but questioning me at the same time.almost like he was admiring me.
"ill just grab my bag and leave then" i told him.Man where was my brother.shouldnt he be watching his friend.
"oh i was just checking you i mean chris's room out." he said smiling.
"smooth.well i better get goin or else im gonna be late.you might wanna go too."
"right well see ya later"he stated.
"wait whats ur name?"
he shrugged his shoulders and walked out of the door.
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chapter 1 review
Taylor *gray skies and no smiles*
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omg exciting keep writeing i want to know what happens
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chapter 1 review
Sarah
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I suggest you use proper grammer, a lot more people will read your story if you do, and it makes the story look more attractive.
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chapter 3 review
Renaynaynay!
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ahhhh!sarah!i love it!you are soo good at writing!keep going.(mrs.cottonballs!tehe)
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chapter 6 review
Renaynaynay!
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dammm girl!best chapter yet! i love this.u were right!keep going!<3
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chapter 12 review
Courtney *Stark Lover*
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Well, I did feel like you were skipping around a lot. I thought that it was still the first day when they had the meeting. I wasn't sure at first, I f…more
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