Need a name!! I'm working on it! :) - Prologue by Victoria
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Cade Wells is an ordinary sixteen year old guy. That is, until he wakes up to see his face staring up at him from the inside of an open coffin.
He was dead.
It’s now up to him, and the strange girl from the café, to figure out how he got there and why Samantha is the only one who can see him.
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chapter 1:
Prologue
chapter 2:
Samantha
chapter 3:
Home
chapter 4:
Secrets
Prologue
chapter 1
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updated Jul 04, 2009
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I looked around at all of the people praying silently in their pews, at the end of which sat a morbid bunch of flowers. I look at all the lonely people. Not one of them with a smile on their pale faces, plastered with grief. The church was silent apart from the heart-wrenching sobs from my hysterical mother. What was she doing here? The priest was not his usual happy self either and it seemed that he, along with everyone else, was overcome by sadness. No one looked at me as I cautiously made my way to the altar at the front of the church. I was invisible to them. Why? Look at me! I wanted to shout but it was no use, I had already tried. Over and over again. That was when I noticed the coffin. That would explain it, I thought. Only, I wasn’t expecting to see my face staring back at me. I jumped back in surprise and yelped. “What the hell is happening?”
I turned back to my mother, kneeling beside my family and friends. It was the most horrid sight I had ever seen. A sight I wished I would never see again. One I didn’t understand. Until slowly, it began to dawn on me. It was a dreadful realization.
I was dead.
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I turned back to my mother, kneeling beside my family and friends. It was the most horrid sight I had ever seen. A sight I wished I would never see again. One I didn’t understand. Until slowly, it began to dawn on me. It was a dreadful realization.
I was dead.
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I've read a lot of things on this website, but this is the best! I'm tired of those badly written romances that are always there. This is great, reall…more
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jeez this is a good story i bet htat ur going 2 b a writer when ur older. trust me id be buying ur books if u were a writer
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