Her Best Friend's Brother - Prologue (Diana's Perspective) by Anna Maxwell
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IMPORTANT: This story is being discontinued. I feel like it has no substantial plot, and I was never really taking it seriously. Feel free to read what's already up, but I will no longer update this story. I can't bring myself to delete this, so it will remain here. Sorry to disappoint some of you, but I feel like I've been wanting and needing to do this for a long time.
Copyright 2009 by Anna Maxwell
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chapter 1:
Prologue (Diana's Perspective)
chapter 2:
A Walk in the Park, Literally
chapter 3:
Rethinking
chapter 4:
Friday Night
chapter 5:
Gone
chapter 6:
The Craziest Thing I'd Ever Done
chapter 7:
Reactions
chapter 8:
Good Times
chapter 9:
Pain
chapter 10:
Blue
chapter 11:
Trying
chapter 12:
Sleep, or Lack Thereof
chapter 13:
(Not Sure Yet)
Prologue (Diana's Perspective)
chapter 1
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updated Jul 28, 2009
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I'd walked down this street every day of my life since my freshman year of high school.
There was nothing particularly interesting or special about it at the beginning. The houses weren't any prettier, the gardens weren't any more lively. I simply wanted to walk to school with my best friend, Emily.
After a week or two, though, I found one very special, very interesting aspect of the red-brick house on that street; the one that caused me to stroll past it every day.
It was him.
Within this singular reason for my daily walk lay many more reasons: warm, welcoming, chocolate-brown eyes filled with emotion and feeling; perfect, oatmeal-colored skin; the most gorgeous, curly, auburn hair I'd ever seen in my life (though sadly, it was normally covered with a baseball cap).
Every time I passed his house, I hoped I might get a glimpse of him helping his mom garden or playing football with his brother. Maybe I'd even talk to him.'
Not likely, but maybe. Just maybe.
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There was nothing particularly interesting or special about it at the beginning. The houses weren't any prettier, the gardens weren't any more lively. I simply wanted to walk to school with my best friend, Emily.
After a week or two, though, I found one very special, very interesting aspect of the red-brick house on that street; the one that caused me to stroll past it every day.
It was him.
Within this singular reason for my daily walk lay many more reasons: warm, welcoming, chocolate-brown eyes filled with emotion and feeling; perfect, oatmeal-colored skin; the most gorgeous, curly, auburn hair I'd ever seen in my life (though sadly, it was normally covered with a baseball cap).
Every time I passed his house, I hoped I might get a glimpse of him helping his mom garden or playing football with his brother. Maybe I'd even talk to him.'
Not likely, but maybe. Just maybe.
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chapter 1 review
Lisa
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loved it! but be more descriptive when talking about how he looks. this is the first time we hear about him so it has to be good.
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chapter 1 review
Cassidy
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This isn't very good. You need to be more descriptive. Instead of focusing on a guy, which is boring, focus on the houses. Describe that. Then, it'll …more
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chapter 1 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
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this is amazing i cant wait to read more of it!!!!!!!!!!!:)))
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chapter 2 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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Ahhhh, too sweet! I love how it's from a boy's perspective. ;D
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chapter 2 review
Joshua
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It's good. Some of the parts I have a feeling came out of real life events (cough, cough). I have just 2 little, itty bitty suggestions though:
…more "
…more "
chapter 2 review
Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova
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good! i really really really really really
really LOVED IT! "
really LOVED IT! "
chapter 2 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
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AWSOME!!GREAT I LOVE ITT!!:))))KEEP GOINGG!!:)))
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chapter 3 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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This is such a sweet story! I love it!
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chapter 4 review
Anna Rosen
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I absolutely hate you, Anna!!!!! I know I've said it a million times already, but I hate you, I hate you, I hate you!!!
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chapter 6 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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OMG!!!! You don't even KNOW how MUCH I LOVE this story! It is too too too sweet! OMG!! THIS IS My favorite chapter!
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chapter 6 review
Gracie
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WOOOOH! likin' it!
ever notice how this always happens in stories, but never in real life? i would love it if the guy i like did that! "
ever notice how this always happens in stories, but never in real life? i would love it if the guy i like did that! "
chapter 7 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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Oh, wow! This story is so sweet, I'm gonna cry!
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chapter 8 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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Uh oh!!! Oh, no, I have to keep reading!!!
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chapter 9 review
Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox
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oh my gosh, I'm like seriously crying, that's SO sad!
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chapter 9 review
Delaney
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I HATE YOU ANNA!!!!! How could you write this? What will Deb think?
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chapter 9 review
R!*A!*V!*E!*N
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OMG! This was soo sadd! I am actually crying that's how good of a story this is.
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chapter 9 review
Debzi
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Angelina should be there at the end too
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IM FREEKEN CRYING MY ERES OUT(your such a good witer) "
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IM FREEKEN CRYING MY ERES OUT(your such a good witer) "
chapter 9 review
♥Jess♥
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NOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so crying right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffles while tears are rolling down my cheeks*
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chapter 10 review
Gracie
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keep the speech! i really like it! it made me get a little weepy...really...
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chapter 11 review
jennifer
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this story is sooo nice and heartbreaking, u should write more!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 11 review
Debzi
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1) im going to cry again:c (:))
2)"pitty? it was pitty that saved him"
3) poor 'Angelina"
3) i looovvvee it! "
2)"pitty? it was pitty that saved him"
3) poor 'Angelina"
3) i looovvvee it! "
chapter 12 review
Anna Rosen
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Eeeeeeeeeeeee! I love this chapter, I mean, its kind of sad, but then I come in, and that makes me feel awesome, and then Marty comes in, which makes …more
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chapter 12 review
♥Jess♥
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coolio and FINALLY, someone else who uses and has heard of the word SNUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "Sneaked" just sounds so... wrong to me. *shrugs*
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chapter 12 review
You Know You Love Me ~leah~
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hey good story! sad that u had 2 cut it off tho
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