My Brother's Best Friend - CHAPTER ONE by ~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~
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"The first time I saw him, I went to heaven,"
-Libby Ward
My Brother's Best Friend
Libby Ward's older brother brought home a new friend. Normally fed up, and angry at her brother, Libby went in his room to anoy him. But the minute she bust in, she was left speechless.
"I walked into the room, and on my brother's sweaty chair, sat an angel."
-Libby Ward
My Brother's Best Friend
chapters
chapter 1:
CHAPTER ONE
chapter 2:
CHAPTER TWO
chapter 3:
CHAPTER THREE
chapter 4:
CHAPTER FOUR
chapter 5:
CHAPTER FIVE
CHAPTER ONE
chapter 1
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updated Jun 27, 2009
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CHAPTER ONE-"HOW WAS GEOGRAPHY, MISS WARD?"
"Miss Ward, are you still with us?" Madame Fishman asked.
I jolted up from my daydream. Where was I? Oh yeah. Seventh Period Geography, room 301, at Susan B Anthony Girl's Acadamey. Right. "Yes, Madame." I answered.
"Good, than can you tell me the capital of Ohio?" Madame F quizzed.
"Springfield." I answered.
"Wrong. Springfield is the capital of Illinois, Miss. Ward. The capital of Ohio is Columbus."
"Whatever," I mumbled.
"Excuse me, Miss Ward. Did you say something?"
"Um, I just said that you were right," I improvised.
"Good then. Miss. Jerome-" I stopped listening as soon as Madame
moved on.
After 30 more minutes of tortuous Geography, the bell rang. I joined the flow of girls exiting the classroom. I walked to my locker, and entered the combanation. The locker popped open. I grabbed my bag, and slammed the door shut.
"Well, Miss Ward, how was geography?" a sugar coated voice asked.
I whirled around to face my best friend, Krystine. My mouth popped a big grin. "How was biology, Miss Blitzman?" I asked her.
"Dreadful," she said, draping her hand dramatically across her forhead, "Absolutely dreadful."
I laughed, and we joined the procession out the front doors of the school. "Walk or ride?" Krys asked me.
Since we lived so close, we could walk or ride to school. I looked down at my navy blue and white plaid skirt. "Hmmm,"
Krys looked at me expectantly. I looked at the clouds. They didn't seem too dark. "Lets walk," I said, slinging my bag over my shoulder.
"Okay," Krys said.
On the way home, we passed my older brother's school, Blackwell School for Young Men. By the looks of it, school wasn't out yet. The front grounds were deserted. Krys looked up at the brick building, skeptically.
"So hows Devon?" she questioned, a little to eagerly.
"Oh stop, Krys," I punched her lightly in the arm, "I know, he knows, that you like him!"
Krys blushed a deep pink. "Yeah, I guess its pretty obvious."
"Uh huh."
After the school had disapeared in the trees, all talk of boys, and Devon stopped. It was actually pretty silent. The sound of gravel crunching beneath our black buttoned shoes was the only sound at all. I tucked my navy sweater tightly around me, as we left the tunnel of trees. Just a short walk through Graffiti Tunnel, and then we were home.
The wind swept through the trees, shaking leaves down on us. I shivered again, and buttoned the cardigan all the way up to my chin. Krys barely glanced up at the sudden movement from me. Normally she'd be freaking out. "Are you all right?" I asked her.
"Yeah. I had the worst biology class of the semester. Madame Seer was particuarly sneery today." Krys responded.
We ducked into Graffiti Tunnel. "Really. Madame Sneer seemed nicer today."
"Yeah, but you don't have her for biology."
As we left Graffiti Tunnel behind, Krys fell silent again. A few minutes later, we arrived at my house. "I'll email you." I said, waving. I walked up the walkway, and into my house.
Lucky me, my brother was home. Yep, the older one. I could hear his heavy metal guitar music. "Libby, do your homework." Mom called from the kitchen. "I'll bring you some snacks."
"Thanks mom." I made my way up the stairs.
When I got to my room, I spread out my materials, and tried to study for the math test, but Devons music was pounding into my brain. Even after mom told him to quiet it down, it didn't help. By 4:30, I had gotten through one page in my book, and eaten all the snacks.
"I'm gonna give that boy a piece of my mind." I said, slamming my book closed.
I walked across the hall to his bedroom, and pounded on the door. I didn't wait for a response. I burst right in.
And froze.
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"Miss Ward, are you still with us?" Madame Fishman asked.
I jolted up from my daydream. Where was I? Oh yeah. Seventh Period Geography, room 301, at Susan B Anthony Girl's Acadamey. Right. "Yes, Madame." I answered.
"Good, than can you tell me the capital of Ohio?" Madame F quizzed.
"Springfield." I answered.
"Wrong. Springfield is the capital of Illinois, Miss. Ward. The capital of Ohio is Columbus."
"Whatever," I mumbled.
"Excuse me, Miss Ward. Did you say something?"
"Um, I just said that you were right," I improvised.
"Good then. Miss. Jerome-" I stopped listening as soon as Madame
moved on.
After 30 more minutes of tortuous Geography, the bell rang. I joined the flow of girls exiting the classroom. I walked to my locker, and entered the combanation. The locker popped open. I grabbed my bag, and slammed the door shut.
"Well, Miss Ward, how was geography?" a sugar coated voice asked.
I whirled around to face my best friend, Krystine. My mouth popped a big grin. "How was biology, Miss Blitzman?" I asked her.
"Dreadful," she said, draping her hand dramatically across her forhead, "Absolutely dreadful."
I laughed, and we joined the procession out the front doors of the school. "Walk or ride?" Krys asked me.
Since we lived so close, we could walk or ride to school. I looked down at my navy blue and white plaid skirt. "Hmmm,"
Krys looked at me expectantly. I looked at the clouds. They didn't seem too dark. "Lets walk," I said, slinging my bag over my shoulder.
"Okay," Krys said.
On the way home, we passed my older brother's school, Blackwell School for Young Men. By the looks of it, school wasn't out yet. The front grounds were deserted. Krys looked up at the brick building, skeptically.
"So hows Devon?" she questioned, a little to eagerly.
"Oh stop, Krys," I punched her lightly in the arm, "I know, he knows, that you like him!"
Krys blushed a deep pink. "Yeah, I guess its pretty obvious."
"Uh huh."
After the school had disapeared in the trees, all talk of boys, and Devon stopped. It was actually pretty silent. The sound of gravel crunching beneath our black buttoned shoes was the only sound at all. I tucked my navy sweater tightly around me, as we left the tunnel of trees. Just a short walk through Graffiti Tunnel, and then we were home.
The wind swept through the trees, shaking leaves down on us. I shivered again, and buttoned the cardigan all the way up to my chin. Krys barely glanced up at the sudden movement from me. Normally she'd be freaking out. "Are you all right?" I asked her.
"Yeah. I had the worst biology class of the semester. Madame Seer was particuarly sneery today." Krys responded.
We ducked into Graffiti Tunnel. "Really. Madame Sneer seemed nicer today."
"Yeah, but you don't have her for biology."
As we left Graffiti Tunnel behind, Krys fell silent again. A few minutes later, we arrived at my house. "I'll email you." I said, waving. I walked up the walkway, and into my house.
Lucky me, my brother was home. Yep, the older one. I could hear his heavy metal guitar music. "Libby, do your homework." Mom called from the kitchen. "I'll bring you some snacks."
"Thanks mom." I made my way up the stairs.
When I got to my room, I spread out my materials, and tried to study for the math test, but Devons music was pounding into my brain. Even after mom told him to quiet it down, it didn't help. By 4:30, I had gotten through one page in my book, and eaten all the snacks.
"I'm gonna give that boy a piece of my mind." I said, slamming my book closed.
I walked across the hall to his bedroom, and pounded on the door. I didn't wait for a response. I burst right in.
And froze.
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chapter 1 review
Tiah
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Hi,
Loved reading your opening. Good use of details and character voice. You inspire me. Keep going, can't wait to read the rest. In fact, ...more "
Loved reading your opening. Good use of details and character voice. You inspire me. Keep going, can't wait to read the rest. In fact, ...more "
chapter 1 review
Anna
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Lol. My story has almost the same title, but it's totally different. I love it though!
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chapter 1 review
.:.Midnyte Song.:.
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Y did she freeze!? Lol! It was the new friend right? I'm right. I just know it. Lol.
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chapter 2 review
♥♥maddie♥♥
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coolio, i like it. just write more because i swear i might forget about it! lol, i'm like that... well, it's good. =]
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chapter 2 review
Isabel- Percy Rox! Logan Lerman Rox!
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i love taylor swift. have you heard crazier? it would go nicely along with it
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chapter 2 review
.:.Midnyte Song.:.
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isn't it spelled 'deets'? I could be wrong but i'm sure its spelled that way.
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chapter 3 review
♥♥maddie♥♥
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whoa... that last line makes me think that he's like... a bad guy! have him ask her out, then her find out he's cheating on her or is only dating her ...more
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chapter 3 review
Isabel- Percy Rox! Logan Lerman Rox!
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that's really funny. did you just make it to match the song?
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chapter 4 review
Nina !!! im the vampire girl!!! u jealous?
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so far i absoulutly love all of your writing
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chapter 4 review
♫♪ Olivia ♪♫
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ah it's really good! Like the plot!
Can't wait to read more! "
Can't wait to read more! "
chapter 5 review
Isabel- Percy Rox! Logan Lerman Rox!
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i am laughing so hard that my brother's going crazy next to me saying, "What?! Isabel! What?!"
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chapter 5 review
Maryam_Music Lover
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YAYYYY!!!!!STEPHAN LIKE HER!!I'AM SOOO HAPPY!!!PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!
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chapter 5 review
Sophie
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aww, he likes her
but why did he 'shoot daggers' at krys wen she said he let them into the room? hmmm.. "
but why did he 'shoot daggers' at krys wen she said he let them into the room? hmmm.. "
chapter 5 review
Love (#1 BEATLES FAN IN THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE)
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this is really cool. keep it coming! please!
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chapter 5 review
Darleine
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this is so good, i hope u write more it's so iteresting
your a good writer
i enjoyed the story!!!!!!!!!!! "
your a good writer
i enjoyed the story!!!!!!!!!!! "
chapter 5 review
Dimitrilover
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i love it, but ur killing me with the wait!
i need more!!!!!!
not tryin 2 be rude, but please continue now!!!!! "
i need more!!!!!!
not tryin 2 be rude, but please continue now!!!!! "



























