Who Knew? - chapter 1 by Renaynaynay!

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This is about a girls life who gets turned around when a new guy comes to town.They do date but its what happens after they brake up that turns around Sarahs life.



chapters

chapter 1: chapter 1

chapter 2: chapter 2

chapter 3: chapter 3

chapter 4: chapter 4

chapter 5: chapter 5

chapter 6: chapter 6

chapter 7: chapter 7

chapter 8: chapter 8

chapter 9: chapter 9

chapter 10: chapter 10

chapter 11: chapter 11

chapter 12: chapter 12

chapter 13: chapter 13

chapter 14: chapter 14

chapter 15: chapter 15

chapter 16: chapter 16

chapter 17: chapter 17

chapter 18: chapter 18

chapter 19: chapter 19

chapter 20: chapter 20

chapter 21: chapter 21

chapter 22: chapter 22


chapter 1
chapter 1   —   updated Jun 21, 2009   —   3517 characters   —   51 people liked this writing   —   39 reviews of this writing
Another day at the worst school i could go to.No one bothers to say "Hi" to me.They all think I am a freak.The truth is,the just haven't got to know me ever since 7th grade.I have chnged people!I just sit in class and stare off into spac or read my book.The sad thing is,I always get caught.
"Sarah for the last time put your book away before I take it away."Mrs.Blalack told me.
Mrs.Blalack is my English teacher.She loves that I read a lot and that I like to read.She just doesnt like it when I read In class.

Hi,I'm Sarah.All the kids at Pacific High think I am weird.I have gone to school with all of them.They dont know about my mom and I plan to keep it like that.They also dont know that I am a really good dancer.I dont mean to brag,but hey its true.I used to have friends until my 7th grade year.That was when my mom died and I stop talking to everyone.The only person I talked to was Kelli.She was my best friend and was there through it all with me.She still is my best friend and the only person who wants to talk to me.
"Hey Sarah."
"Hey."
"So have you talked to Cole yet?"
"Nope.And dont plan on it."
"Come on.You to were great friends in middle school."
"Ya until...-"
"Dont think about that.I bet he would like to become your friend again."
"So.That doesn't really mean anything."
"Come on.You still like him and you cant say you dont.I know you better than anyone on this planet."
"Thanks,but no thanks."
They walked to class in silence.Sarah was replaying the conversation in her head.She couldnt believe that Kelli was still trying to get her to talk to him.He had a good girlfriend,Lexi.She was cheer captain and could get any guy she ever wanted.Plus Cole was the football star and didnt need a girlfriend like me.I mean look at me.Im not skinny but Im not fat,no one likes me,and he doesnt even reconize me.
As Kelli and I walk into the classroom my eyes go to Cole.He wtches me walk in and smiles his amazing smile.I cant help but smile back.Lexi is also in that class and when she see's us she goes over and start's making out with him.I look down and Kelli see's what just happened and walks me over to our seats.When the bell rang Lexi looked over at me and gave a wicked smile.
"I dont know what her problem is but she better fix it."I turned around and told Kelli.
She started to laugh but stoped so that she didnt get in trouble.Our teacher came to the front of the room and told us to choose a partner.I turned around to Kelli to see her looking in Lexi's direction.
"Hey are you her partner now?"
"No.Ha why would I be?"
"Are we partners?"
"Ya."
Once we all had our parnters he told everyone to move a table.It made a big opening in the middle of the class.
"Okay class today we are going to do something totally different and I could get in trouble if you tell anyone...so dont tell anyone.Now help me block the door."
Cole and two other guys put stuff by the door so that no one could get in or see in.
"What are we gonna do?"I asked.
"We are gonna have a dance contest."
A lot of people looked terrified but I didnt.I thought it would be cool.But as soon as we were about to start Mr.Night's phone rang.When he got off he told us to get the classroom back to normal very quickly and yes that we will do our dance contest today.
When we got everything moved back to normal we sat down and strated reading so it looked like we were working.Less than a minute after that the princable and a new kid walked in.
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call me crazy and be done with it. said:
" i really like this so far!! :D "
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~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" Rene, this is good. You might want to edit it. There should be a space between a period, and the next word. Same with the commas. This really is good,…more "
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Lenalee said:
" cool "
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Devin said:
" this sounds kinda like a story of a girl "
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Ambrea said:
" wow naynay. i love it(: kelli says some stuff that ive said to you before! haha. love yaa. "
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chapter 2 review
~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" Hey! This was an awesome chapter! But you need to work on your spelling. And Kelli and Sarah were with Erik, not Cole. This is great! "
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cinderella said:
" I have only read the first few chapters but this is really good!
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Sage said:
" Wow that is really good so far!!! "
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chapter 3 review
~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" I noticed that you liked to change point of view at the beginning. That confuses the reader. So its either "I" or "Sarah". This is…more "
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~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" Good. But what happened to meeting the person behind the school, after school? "
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Daisy said:
" liked it "
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Sarahbear said:
" omg that was amazing.that just inspired me for my next story.im thinking average joe kind of girl that gets sucked into black magic.you know being a w…more "
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♥♥ Saumya ♥♥ said:
" i rly liked it but i agree with ~*Maia*~Hermione Rocks!*~Max Ride Rulez*~ it needs editing "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" This is good. Keep going. (: "
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~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" ooh, keep writing!!! "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Keep writing! "
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Abbee said:
" wooo! keep writing! =) "
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~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" :( / :) "
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~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" Good! "
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chapter 10 review
~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" Yay! Lexi is one boyfriend stealing, evil back stabbing little bitch! "
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Mindy said:
" Cool!!! "
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Devin said:
" really rene fruit snacks
ynot candy or somthing like that? "
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cinderella said:
" Rene keep freakin writing! :) "
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cinderella said:
" hahaha fire burning "
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chapter 18 review
Taylor (gray skies) said:
" hey i like it i have to say i dont know what u should do, i dont get why erik is like being like that but o well i think u should like some how make i…more "
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Mindy said:
" From the way the last chapter ended, it seemed that Eric really was sorry about hurting her and was sad to see her with someone else even if he was th…more "
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Ana Lucia said:
" women keep writing!! you're making me anxious.. "
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Sarahbear said:
" i wish that would happen to me "
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chapter 19 review
Linda said:
" this is really good!keep writing!:) "
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Catie said:
" oh my goodness. What a choice. I think that she should stay with Cole. "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Stay with Cole. "
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cinderella said:
" i love it girly! :) "
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sMiLeY!! said:
" Make Cole and Erik get in a fight for Sara.. "
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Abbee said:
" COLE!!!!!! "
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A.J. said:
" Keep writing. I like it. "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Whoa!
Keep writing! :O "
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Mosspaw (Allisa) Sailor Moon's #1 Fan! said:
" IT IS SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! its sad at the end though. "
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Ruby! said:
" yes!!! make a sequal!!!! i love it!!! and when/if u dothen post the link here!!!! "
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A.J. said:
" I liked it. You should write a sequel. "
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