My Letter/His Letter - Prologue by D.C. Bussey
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black,
bleak,
changing,
death,
deep,
faith,
god,
hope,
life,
love,
new,
poem,
poetry,
spirit,
spirituality,
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At first I was a bit hesitant to put these writings up. But I have noticed that many members have put up their beliefs and philosophies in writings. So here is mine, can you guess what I believe? It's obvious really. Now this a letter I wrote during a weekend that changed my life, and made me believe in God. I wasn't looking for Him, but funny thing is that He found me. If this offends you like I know it will some, then read it. You can afford to be offended. People that know me will know that I don't push my faith on others, but this is my writing and I will write how I felt. It was a profound thing for me and I'm glad I wrote how I felt during those moments of Spiritual completeness.
I originally wrote this continuously, because I felt the spirit lead me, but now I have seperated the letter into sections. This shed a little light onto what happens in each part. Hope this letter helps you in your faith as it has helped me.
chapters
chapter 1:
Prologue
chapter 2:
The Spirit
chapter 3:
Forgiveness and Redemption
chapter 4:
A New Life
Prologue
chapter 1
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updated Jun 20, 2009
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Like poison drawn from a snake bite, tears draw away the death of the world, leaving people free. Words are power, but power unused is worthless, thus words must be spoken, only then will they have worth. A sang word is like a drink of cold water in a desert of dry death. A note put with a word is like a dam being released. Do not interfere with the moving of the spirit, He is not bound by human inhibitions. Emotions surface and you are left with the choice to either follow or ignore. Instruments are the most creativly created and moving pieces man has ever put together, I imagine God himself designed them, just as he created voices. Remember even an off tune and terrible voice can be made beautiful if surrounded by hundreds and thousands. May the world know true joy and true Christianity for both will bring happiness only some have dreamed of.
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chapter 1 review
Erica
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The sentences didn't connect very well. They seemed to have the same overall topic, but together all of it just sounded like one cliche after another,…more
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chapter 2 review
Marley
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I feel....like my agnostic self should not like this. But it is well-written, so....I will. And I will not be mean...yet.
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chapter 2 review
Isabella ღ
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IDK what to say. This is something I can't judge for its not what I can oppose. I'm no ta religious person so this to me is a little awkward. Talking …more
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chapter 2 review
Noelle
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I think every Christain feels that way you just wrote what u were feeling like every author does but you just made ordinary words longer so it seemed …more
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chapter 3 review
Eryn
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its not really something i am into, but its really good. if you want to read the bad side to god...the side that i have seen all my life,...then read …more
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chapter 3 review
Poema Poematis
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That is really beautiful. And most of all it is true, I love the emotion in it.
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chapter 4 review
Rachel
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This is reeeaaally deep, and I understand it takes quite a bit of courage to put yourself out there like that. Good job!
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chapter 4 review
Aly ♫SOCCER GOALIE♫SOFTBALL CATCHER♫
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Wow. This really puts what you believe out there, but I am glad you put it. It is beautifully written and reminds me of myself in some ways.
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chapter 4 review
Kenzie
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You're so- This is- ... I don't know what to say. It's so in touch with everything.
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chapter 4 review
Christa & ?
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I read your description first, and tried to read it as you said you wrote it. It was a truly incredible peice of writing. I have felt the hand guide m…more
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