Immortality- Book #1 - Dear Readers (chapter 12) by Ellen ♥ Mwah!
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This is my story which I am working on over the holidays for something to do. the chapters may be abit long because i have first written it on word document.Be honest in the comments please. And its only a draft so if there are spelling mistakes sorry! =D
Alyson and her family have abandoned the immortal world when a war broke out among them. 16 years later the immortal world is starting to catch up with them, and there only chance to stay free is to leave.They move to a small town only to be introduced to bigger problems, ones that envolove Alyson's life and who she represents in the immortal world.
chapters
chapter 1:
Chapter 1
chapter 2:
Chapter 2
chapter 3:
Chapter 3
chapter 4:
Chapter 4
chapter 5:
Chapter 5
chapter 6:
Chapter 6
chapter 7:
Chapter 7
chapter 8:
Chapter 8
chapter 9:
Chapter 9
chapter 10:
Chapter 10
chapter 11:
Chapter 11
chapter 12:
Dear Readers
Dear Readers
chapter 12
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updated Aug 04, 2009
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Hey Everyone
I just want to say thanks for reading my story. I have slowly begun to work on the sequel. And I will post the prologue when it is finished [ which should hopefully soon ].
Thank you for reading and sticking with it! [ I have noticed my chapters tend to get abit loong =D ]!!
Thankyou once again.
Hope you liked it.
Ellen...
P.S The sequel will have more chapters and they hopefully wont be as long. Just a heads up! =D
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chapter 2 review
Mindy
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Ellen, wow.
I really, really like it.
Spelling mistakes aside ( ;-} ), it's awesome! It has a great plot and is well written. ...more "
I really, really like it.
Spelling mistakes aside ( ;-} ), it's awesome! It has a great plot and is well written. ...more "
chapter 5 review
Mindy
said:
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That whole dream-thing/memory-loss was totally unexpected but totally awesome!
Keep it up!
;-} "
Keep it up!
;-} "
chapter 6 review
Rebecka
said:
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keep writing,
i really like it,
hmm.
alyson and justin should be together,
i thought that at the beginning of this book. "
i really like it,
hmm.
alyson and justin should be together,
i thought that at the beginning of this book. "
chapter 7 review
Rachel
said:
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Wow, Ellen i really like this.
As long as u write more, i will read it LOL.
Love, love, love the Justin thing "
As long as u write more, i will read it LOL.
Love, love, love the Justin thing "
chapter 8 review
Mindy
said:
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Write faster!!!! I need to know how they react to her powers!!!! I need to know EVERYTHING!!!!
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chapter 9 review
Rachel
said:
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Oh good chapter!!
I must say i was a bit peeved at Justin for lying but now i'm sorta 4giving him *smiles sheepishly*
Can't wait 4 mor...more "
I must say i was a bit peeved at Justin for lying but now i'm sorta 4giving him *smiles sheepishly*
Can't wait 4 mor...more "
chapter 10 review
Rachel
said:
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Wow cool :)
Let me guess.... is William gonna come and take her back?? is he, is he??
Quick write more lol "
Let me guess.... is William gonna come and take her back?? is he, is he??
Quick write more lol "
chapter 10 review
Mindy
said:
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I LOVED IT!!!! I hope that she can get both her family AND Justin back!!!!
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chapter 10 review
Sophie
said:
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cool, write more ellen!
i hope she stays with justin.. but doesnt go back to the castle with william "
i hope she stays with justin.. but doesnt go back to the castle with william "
chapter 12 review
Abbee
said:
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cool! we'll all be waiting altho i did like that u had loong chapters cuhz then the chapters seemed like chapters from a real book! =)
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