Immortality- Book #1 - Chapter 11 (chapter 11) by Ellen ♥ Mwah!

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This is my story which I am working on over the holidays for something to do. the chapters may be abit long because i have first written it on word document.Be honest in the comments please. And its only a draft so if there are spelling mistakes sorry! =D

Alyson and her family have abandoned the immortal world when a war broke out among them. 16 years later the immortal world is starting to catch up with them, and there only chance to stay free is to leave.They move to a small town only to be introduced to bigger problems, ones that envolove Alyson's life and who she represents in the immortal world.



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chapter 1: Chapter 1

chapter 2: Chapter 2

chapter 3: Chapter 3

chapter 4: Chapter 4

chapter 5: Chapter 5

chapter 6: Chapter 6

chapter 7: Chapter 7

chapter 8: Chapter 8

chapter 9: Chapter 9

chapter 10: Chapter 10

chapter 11: Chapter 11

chapter 12: Dear Readers


Chapter 11
chapter 11   —   updated Aug 04, 2009   —   1121 characters   —   52 people liked this writing   —   30 reviews of this writing
I could faintly hear the background noises. People murmuring, somebody crying and whimpering, and somebody whispering things to my ear.
“Alyson everything is okay, but you need to wake up honey okay?” The person snuffled.”Please baby wake up”
I could hear her feet being shuffled away, and faintly hear her sobs. It was gut wrenching.
“Shhh dear. She will wake up okay; she just used a lot energy she needs to recover from it”
“But it has been two months and she is still asleep. She should have recovered by know”
My mind was too sleepy to process what the lady was saying. Two months, I have been asleep for two whole months? That couldn’t be right. What is happening to me?
“Nobody knows how long it could take. Nobody has this kind of power and she used a lot opening the wooden doors. Calm down she will be okay”
My mind felt groggy and heavy, like your eyes are when you haven’t had enough sleep.
Go to sleep Alyson, if we can’t have you nobody can. Sleep.
I obeyed the menacing voice in my head, and let the blackness take over me once again.
To Be Continued

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" Ellen, wow.

I really, really like it.

Spelling mistakes aside ( ;-} ), it's awesome! It has a great plot and is well written. ...more "
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Rebecka said:
" wow cant wait to see what happens next!!! "
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Mindy said:
" That whole dream-thing/memory-loss was totally unexpected but totally awesome!
Keep it up!
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Rebecka said:
" keep writing,
i really like it,
hmm.
alyson and justin should be together,
i thought that at the beginning of this book. "
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Rebecka said:
" I KNEW IT!!! haha im so proud of myself that was my guess "
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Mindy said:
" I had a feeling it would be Justin. Please write more! "
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Rachel said:
" Wow, Ellen i really like this.
As long as u write more, i will read it LOL.

Love, love, love the Justin thing "
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" its good. i like that she gets with justin. keep writing. "
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Rebecka said:
" wow,
didnt expect that at all, loved it!!
write more!! "
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Mindy said:
" Write faster!!!! I need to know how they react to her powers!!!! I need to know EVERYTHING!!!! "
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Rachel said:
" Oh good chapter!!
I must say i was a bit peeved at Justin for lying but now i'm sorta 4giving him *smiles sheepishly*

Can't wait 4 mor...more "
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" That was really awesome! Bring on the next!!! "
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Vina said:
" KEEP WRITING!! "
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chapter 10 review
Vina said:
" Love this story. is more going to happen with Drew? "
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Rachel said:
" Wow cool :)
Let me guess.... is William gonna come and take her back?? is he, is he??
Quick write more lol "
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Mindy said:
" I LOVED IT!!!! I hope that she can get both her family AND Justin back!!!! "
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Catie said:
" NICE "
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Sophie said:
" cool, write more ellen!
i hope she stays with justin.. but doesnt go back to the castle with william "
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Rachel said:
" OMG write the sequel now...... please!!!!!
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Mindy said:
" Loved it!!!! Can't wait til the sequel!!! "
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Abbee said:
" cool! we'll all be waiting altho i did like that u had loong chapters cuhz then the chapters seemed like chapters from a real book! =) "
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Rachel said:
" Hey Ellen, i really like this story..... i can't wait to find out whats gonna happen to Alyson (oh, and she BETTER be with Justin) in the next one =D ...more "
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Yobiel said:
" i never really go on goodreads, but i go on just to read this. "
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