Destined - Prologue by Rachel
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There’s a line between good and evil, but what happens when that line is blurred?
Roxi was a normal teenager up until two years ago when fate left her no choice but to become a vampire. Necessary for her to live; it wasn’t something she chose. Does that make her evil? Roxi doesn’t think so. With that choice taken out of her hands, she made the only one she could let herself make. She chose not to give into her nature, but to rise above it.
Despite having to hide, who and what she now is from the people who matter most, Roxi was living her life as best she could. That was until someone from her past resurfaced. Someone who wants Roxi to take a different path than the one she chose. Someone who won’t let her go.
Now Roxi is left with no choice but to work alongside her natural enemy, the very people who hunt her kind- Vampire Hunters. Embarking on a shared mission proves difficult as hunters and vampires clash. They say keep your friends close and your enemies closer, but how do you accomplish that when your enemies no doubt want you dead?
Throw in a supposed destiny that Roxi doesn’t believe in, and a hunter named Logan who may be more than he seems, life’s getting complicated. As Roxi fights to prove she’s more than the hunters think she is, Logan’s learning that not everything is black and white, and soon Roxi begins feeling things for him she knows she shouldn’t.
But when tragedy strikes and Roxi’s world is shattered, she must decide whether to give up, and lose all she is, or fight to complete the mission. Suddenly the stakes are higher, as the realisation that maintaining what’s left of her already broken world may come at a price. One that Roxi’s not sure she’s willing to pay, or even if her heart will allow her too.
**** SCHOOL HAS BEEN VERY BUSY LATELY, AND THAT IS WHY THE CHAPTERS AREN'T COMING OUT AS QUICKLY AS THEY USUALLY DO. I CAN'T SEEM TO FIND THE SPARE TIME TO WRITE. I'M SORRY IF THIS HAS BEEN DISAPPOINTING ANYBODY ****
chapters
chapter 1:
Prologue
chapter 2:
Chapter 1- School surprise
chapter 3:
Chapter 2- The safety of home.
chapter 4:
Chapter 3- The covenant
chapter 5:
Chapter 4- Distress signal
chapter 6:
Chapter 5- Do we have a deal?
chapter 7:
Chapter 6- Introductions
chapter 8:
Chapter 7-Traitor
chapter 9:
Chapter 8- Seeking forgiveness
chapter 10:
Chapter 9- Hunter? Bear? I'll take the bear
chapter 11:
Chapter 10- Saving Logan's life
chapter 12:
Chapter 11- Logan saving my life
chapter 13:
Chapter 12- Personal and Professional
chapter 15:
Chapter 14- Callie
chapter 16:
Chapter 15- Warehouse siege
chapter 17:
Chapter 16- Evil has a name: Micah
chapter 18:
Chapter 17- They need to know
chapter 19:
Chapter 18- I know Micah; he'll never let me go
chapter 20:
Chapter 19- Logan's history
chapter 23:
Chapter 22- It's all a grey area
chapter 24:
Chapter 23- My past; why I became a vampire
chapter 25:
Chapter 24- Do you trust me?
chapter 26:
Chapter 25- Logan's actually apologizing?
chapter 27:
Chapter 26- The Order
chapter 29:
Chapter 28- Believing I can be more
chapter 30:
Chapter 29- Staking a claim
chapter 32:
Chapter 31- He'd been fighting all along
chapter 33:
Chapter 32- Study session
chapter 35:
Chapter 34- Despite everything, i love him!
chapter 36:
Chapter 35- Logan, do you want to be with me?
chapter 37:
Chapter 36- They're all gone...
chapter 38:
Chapter 37- Losing faith
chapter 39:
Chapter 38- The Lodge
chapter 43:
Chapter 42- Not Coping
chapter 44:
Chapter 43- Delivering the news
chapter 45:
Chapter 44- Facing the Truth
chapter 46:
Chapter 45- Leaving
chapter 47:
Chapter 46- Letting her go *IN LOGAN'S POV*
chapter 48:
Chapter 47- Miracle
chapter 49:
Chapter 48- What do we do now?
chapter 50:
Chapter 49- Almost Normal
chapter 51:
Chapter 50- Night-time Visitor
chapter 52:
Chapter 51- The resistance
chapter 53:
Chapter 52- The Plan
chapter 54:
Chapter 53- We can't be selfish
chapter 55:
Chapter 54- One Night in Paradise
chapter 56:
Chapter 55- Promises
Prologue
chapter 1
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updated Dec 04, 2009
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My name is Roxi Knight. I'm 18 years old and I'm a vampire.
It isn't bad enough that I have to struggle through high school, while I'm fighting alongside my people as a vampire warrior.
Now there is an uproar amongst some of the more powerful vampires, that threatens the very life I am desperate to keep hidden. The struggles that I've been faced with are none I could have ever imagined.
Oh, and to top it off I think I've fallen in love with the very man destined to someday kill me.
Although thinking back, I'm not sure there was ever a way I could have avoided that.
I mean, how do you fight whats written in the stars?
Confused? Well, I am and It's my life.
My story started four months ago on a cold winter afternoon. School was just finishing and I could never have guessed what fate was about to throw my way.........
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Rachel Micallef's Destined © Goodreads 2009. All rights reserved.
Don't Copy.
My name is Roxi Knight. I'm 18 years old and I'm a vampire.
It isn't bad enough that I have to struggle through high school, while I'm fighting alongside my people as a vampire warrior.
Now there is an uproar amongst some of the more powerful vampires, that threatens the very life I am desperate to keep hidden. The struggles that I've been faced with are none I could have ever imagined.
Oh, and to top it off I think I've fallen in love with the very man destined to someday kill me.
Although thinking back, I'm not sure there was ever a way I could have avoided that.
I mean, how do you fight whats written in the stars?
Confused? Well, I am and It's my life.
My story started four months ago on a cold winter afternoon. School was just finishing and I could never have guessed what fate was about to throw my way.........
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chapter 1 review
Heather (Jasper Fan #1)
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this is an AMAZING story already. U hav a LOT of talent
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chapter 1 review
Angee
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I'm truly intrigued. I've never read Vampire Academy, so I can't compare the two. But I'm truly interested to see what else Roxi has in store... my co…more
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chapter 1 review
Ashara
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Yes, very, very, very good Prologue:P
Both Sharnia ans mio (ashara:D)loved it.
Now on to teh next one... "
Both Sharnia ans mio (ashara:D)loved it.
Now on to teh next one... "
chapter 2 review
Izzy
said:
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mint not bad print it and make a book out of it.
Yea ita a tade like Vampire Accademy but seeing that is my favourie series (can't wait till Blo…more "
Yea ita a tade like Vampire Accademy but seeing that is my favourie series (can't wait till Blo…more "
chapter 2 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
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omg rachel this is great!!!! i cant wait to read it when it becomes a book!!!!
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chapter 2 review
Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ oıɔoɹ/rocio Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ
said:
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oh my gosh this is so good! i like ur writing :)
hey just be careful with spelling mistakes. u have a few. u could write them in word first, if …more "
hey just be careful with spelling mistakes. u have a few. u could write them in word first, if …more "
chapter 2 review
Ashara
said:
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Wow girl, and i thought my story was okay...it doesn't even compare to mine! i'm looking forward to reviewing it, whcih i am just about to do, and rea…more
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chapter 5 review
Mindy
said:
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Wow.
I don't know how your friend mistaked that for VA.
Granted, I would still take the complement of being compared to Richelle Mead. ;-} …more "
I don't know how your friend mistaked that for VA.
Granted, I would still take the complement of being compared to Richelle Mead. ;-} …more "
chapter 6 review
Mindy
said:
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See? Totally not like VA.
Yet still totally awesome!
PLEASE KEEP WRITING! AND SOON! "
Yet still totally awesome!
PLEASE KEEP WRITING! AND SOON! "
chapter 10 review
♥Jess♥
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'One thing I knew for sure, there was no way in hell that we were going to get along.'
*snorts* Yeah, right. You end up falling in love with …more "
*snorts* Yeah, right. You end up falling in love with …more "
chapter 12 review
Mindy
said:
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The past two days, I've woken up with a chapter waiting for me. Can we make it a third?
Awesome! ;-} "
Awesome! ;-} "
chapter 13 review
Snuffleupagus!
said:
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omg i love this. i dont think its like VA tho. please keep writing. its amazing :)
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chapter 14 review
Mindy
said:
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Okay. You have totally got to get to work on the next chapter. I HAVE to know who Callie is!
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chapter 14 review
Snuffleupagus!
said:
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i must know who callie is! please write the next chapter!!!!
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chapter 15 review
Mindy
said:
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I love your writing, but I've got to ask. When does Micah come in? And why did Roxi first react to his name like that? Please Keep Going!
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chapter 15 review
Snuffleupagus!
said:
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please keep writing. waiting for thenext chapters is driving me insane :)
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chapter 15 review
Sarah
said:
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I love your story and how you write chapters so quickly!! :D Normally I have to wait weeks for a good chapter to come out, but your so awesome you wri…more
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chapter 16 review
Mindy
said:
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If you got my message earlier, you'll know why I'm asking, but any way to pump out another chapter 2day? I just KNOW that that is Micah! PLEASE?!
…more "
…more "
chapter 16 review
Rebecka
said:
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is it that one dude micah!?!
i think thats his name andyways i think its him omg is it himm?? "
i think thats his name andyways i think its him omg is it himm?? "
chapter 16 review
♥Jess♥
said:
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They like each other!!! Teehee! =D But uh-oh. Micah's here, isn't here? Crudmuffins!
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chapter 17 review
Rebecka
said:
"
rachel,
thats so good that im sitting here my eyes gled to the screen,
yelling at anyone who bugs me
=)
ohh and i was shaking ,
an…more "
thats so good that im sitting here my eyes gled to the screen,
yelling at anyone who bugs me
=)
ohh and i was shaking ,
an…more "
chapter 17 review
Mindy
said:
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That was totally awesome! Now I can't wait to hear some back-story! ;-}
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chapter 19 review
Mindy
said:
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Okay. WOW. man, the way this story is evolving... All I can say is "more please!"
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chapter 20 review
Ellen ♥
said:
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"Faith?” he looked at me questioningly. “Faith is rubbish"
-Haha! "
-Haha! "
chapter 20 review
♥Jess♥
said:
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*transports back to 2nd grade* You like him, you like him, you really really like him! And vice versa!
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chapter 21 review
Mindy
said:
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This is SO going to bug me. What can smell amazing and yet have Roxi and Claudia busting up?
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chapter 22 review
Mindy
said:
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Okay. We now have our questions about Greg out of the way. MORE PLEASE!!!! Please write fast!!!!!
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chapter 24 review
Rebecka
said:
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not nice rachel, theres tears in my eyes,
r u serious ur gunna leave it there?
better get typing fast!! "
r u serious ur gunna leave it there?
better get typing fast!! "
chapter 26 review
Sarah
said:
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wat is it? is it worse then him being a vamp killer? y is he afraid?
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chapter 26 review
Ellen ♥
said:
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what is it? whats so bad about the crest? Hurry up and write please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 26 review
Mindy
said:
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I think it's worth repeating: I love me some back-story! Bring it on!
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chapter 26 review
Rebecka
said:
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and confusion swept over me
lol really i wanna know what "The Order" is "
lol really i wanna know what "The Order" is "
chapter 28 review
Sophie
said:
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oh please tell me he kisses her soon!
oh, and i love it!
the prophecy thing adds a good twist to it "
oh, and i love it!
the prophecy thing adds a good twist to it "
chapter 28 review
Rebecka
said:
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she should have said yea, she does believe hes going to kill her, r they going to kiss yet???
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chapter 28 review
XXmelancholyXX
said:
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if u are reading this then you are not typing the next chapter and if you arent typing the next chapter we cant read it so stop reading and TYPE!!!!
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chapter 29 review
Ellen ♥
said:
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You always leave it so there is a cliff hanger from one chapter to the next!
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chapter 29 review
Catie
said:
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OMG I love this so much. I keep waiting for them to kiss. Please write more:)
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chapter 29 review
XXmelancholyXX
said:
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This, is TORTURE, you are torturing us, stop torturing us post the next chapter
"
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chapter 29 review
Mindy
said:
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I loved of course but damn. Right when we're about to find out something we all want to know, they get a friggin' red alert!
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chapter 30 review
Sophie
said:
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omg i thaut they were gonna kiss at the car..
please post the next cvhapter soon.. i wanna see what happens!! and when they kiss! "
please post the next cvhapter soon.. i wanna see what happens!! and when they kiss! "
chapter 31 review
XXmelancholyXX
said:
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ok, i am officialy sure that im addicted to your story so post hte next chapter or else...
"
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chapter 31 review
Mindy
said:
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Oay. OMG!!!!!! Now that we have that awesome piece of work out of the way, can we PLEASE move on to ch. 31?!
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chapter 32 review
Rebecka
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AAHHHHH omg omg omg i cant breathe lol and idk y, it was just that good... "
AAHHHHH omg omg omg i cant breathe lol and idk y, it was just that good... "
chapter 32 review
Sophie
said:
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oh my god!! they finally kissed!!
you hav to post the next chapter.. soon!! "
you hav to post the next chapter.. soon!! "
chapter 32 review
Ellen ♥
said:
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YAY!! Im sooo happy!
The wait was longm, but so worth it! =P
I want more Logan and quickly! "
The wait was longm, but so worth it! =P
I want more Logan and quickly! "
chapter 32 review
XXmelancholyXX
said:
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THANKYOU!!!!!! but dont think your done yet, oh no, we need more
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chapter 33 review
Mindy
said:
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PLEASE tell me that Logan DOESN'T DIE!!!!! I honestly don't think I could stand it if he did. It would almost be like Dimitri dying again. :-(
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chapter 33 review
Catie
said:
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Oh my!!! They finally kissed, but I am scared about that last pharagraph. What does that mean? Is he going to die? No please no!!
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chapter 33 review
Sophie
said:
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OMG logan cannot die!!
bloody micah, go find sumone hu actually likes u!!
i hope things go well with roxi and logan :) "
bloody micah, go find sumone hu actually likes u!!
i hope things go well with roxi and logan :) "
chapter 33 review
Ellen ♥
said:
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YAY!!!
=D
I am now one very happy girl only one thing is missing.... the next chapter!!! "
=D
I am now one very happy girl only one thing is missing.... the next chapter!!! "
chapter 34 review
Sophie
said:
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AHHHHH!! how can it be empty.. oh my god, its a trap isnt it??
DONT KILL LOGAN!! "
DONT KILL LOGAN!! "
chapter 34 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
said:
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i agree with sophie!!
PLEASE DONT KILL LOGAN!!:( "
PLEASE DONT KILL LOGAN!!:( "
chapter 34 review
Ellen ♥
said:
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Kill Logan and I will seriously kill you!! I mean it, you cannot kill him! D=
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chapter 34 review
Rebecka
said:
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i think micah planned them to go there. so he can take Roxi and kill logan. if u kill logan i will fly to australia, and strangle u and then i will pu…more
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chapter 34 review
Kim
said:
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Great!!
you had to leave it on a cliff hanger didnt you! :L
cant wait to read more. "
you had to leave it on a cliff hanger didnt you! :L
cant wait to read more. "
chapter 34 review
XXmelancholyXX
said:
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hurry up Rach!!!!!!!!!!! i understand u have school but still, WE NEED MORE!!
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chapter 35 review
Sophie
said:
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aww rach u didnt tell us anything abt her and logan :(
ah well, i will be hounding u for the next chapter :) "
ah well, i will be hounding u for the next chapter :) "
chapter 35 review
XXmelancholyXX
said:
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its about time!!! u really need to speed it up. we need more(again)!!!!!!
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chapter 35 review
Kim
said:
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This is a great story :)
as good or even better that some of the books out now days! "
as good or even better that some of the books out now days! "
chapter 35 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
said:
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KEEP WRITING PPLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
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chapter 36 review
Mindy
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I loved it!!!
This is going to sound so wrong, but I'm glad you put the fire in there. Logan and Roxi are both still alive.
Tha…more "
This is going to sound so wrong, but I'm glad you put the fire in there. Logan and Roxi are both still alive.
Tha…more "
chapter 36 review
Kim
said:
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That was so sweet then *sniff* it got s-so sad and i was *sniff* actually crying :(
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chapter 36 review
Sophie
said:
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OMG a fire!! theyre all dead, claudia and callie..
thank god logan didnt die!! YAY! and they r together :D
but that was soo sad wen the mano…more "
thank god logan didnt die!! YAY! and they r together :D
but that was soo sad wen the mano…more "
chapter 36 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
said:
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omg Rach!!!that is sooooo sad :'(!!im glad Logan wasnt in the Manor!!!!please keep writing
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chapter 36 review
Medina
said:
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OMG!Rachel, awesome story, loved it like Hell, totally in love with Logan. NNNNOOOOO, they cant all be dead! By th way, if you Kill off Logan I will p…more
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chapter 36 review
Ellen ♥
said:
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=O
OMG! RACHEL! I NEED MORE AND QUCIK! *snaps fingers* GET TO IT!
-Excuse the captials "
OMG! RACHEL! I NEED MORE AND QUCIK! *snaps fingers* GET TO IT!
-Excuse the captials "
chapter 36 review
ayundabhuwana
said:
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Really, you should publish it or something. It's awesome!!!
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chapter 37 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
said:
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this is hella good!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
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chapter 37 review
Sophie
said:
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aww she took all her abger out on logan.. but its good he knew she was sad
it so cute how he knew she was there and he waited for her :D
"
it so cute how he knew she was there and he waited for her :D
"
chapter 37 review
Medina
said:
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Honey...Im gonna cry if you dont continue soon, and i just finished crying from Blood Promis...Tear
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chapter 38 review
Sophie
said:
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FINALLY!!! yay!@! this chapter wanst boring, despite ure qualms :D
and it was more roxi and logan time.. but he was acting a bit strange..?
…more "
and it was more roxi and logan time.. but he was acting a bit strange..?
…more "
chapter 38 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
said:
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LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…more
"
chapter 38 review
Kim
said:
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thanks for writing the next chapter!
i was dying from waiting!
great chapter btw :) "
i was dying from waiting!
great chapter btw :) "
chapter 39 review
Sophie
said:
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YAY! a new chapter, finally :P
aww her and logan r sharing a room, how cute ~~
screw micah, they need to kill him once and for all!! "
aww her and logan r sharing a room, how cute ~~
screw micah, they need to kill him once and for all!! "
chapter 39 review
Kim
said:
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aaaw.
great chappy as always.
youve gotta love logan
i feel really sorry for roxy "
great chappy as always.
youve gotta love logan
i feel really sorry for roxy "
chapter 40 review
Sophie
said:
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aww, Logan is so caring and sweet- bringing her blood even tho he hates the thaut of it
please let her hav a damn shower :P "
please let her hav a damn shower :P "
chapter 40 review
Kim
said:
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great as always.
i wish that you hadnt killed off the conavent :(
anyways good job "
i wish that you hadnt killed off the conavent :(
anyways good job "
chapter 40 review
Mindy
said:
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LOVE IT!!! Hey, the ASAP thing worked! Maybe you can do another ASAP job?
"
chapter 40 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
said:
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this is soo good!!i feel so bad for Rox though!!Keep writing!!!
"
chapter 41 review
Sophie
said:
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oh no, the first body.. i bet she will crumble
will she loose it Rach? lol
write more :P "
will she loose it Rach? lol
write more :P "
chapter 41 review
Kim
said:
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thats certianly gunnu dampen her already dreary mood
great description in this chapter ;) "
great description in this chapter ;) "
chapter 42 review
Sophie
said:
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awww! that last part is so cute ;)
she is gonna go mental wen they find claudia.. poor roxi, i hope logan can handle her outbursts
write mo…more "
she is gonna go mental wen they find claudia.. poor roxi, i hope logan can handle her outbursts
write mo…more "
chapter 42 review
Mindy
said:
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They haven't found Claudia. Could it be that she's still alive?! PLEASE hurry with the next chapter!!! ;-}
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chapter 42 review
ayundabhuwana
said:
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oooh, can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!!!
"
chapter 42 review
Kim
said:
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Break the Kleenex out again
Im going to start sending you the bill :L
isnt there going to be any happiness in her life any time …more "
Im going to start sending you the bill :L
isnt there going to be any happiness in her life any time …more "
chapter 43 review
Sophie
said:
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NOOO! STOP PUSHING LOGAN AWAY!
Rach i swear if u dnt hav them making up the next time they talk i will hunt u down!!
next chapter! "
Rach i swear if u dnt hav them making up the next time they talk i will hunt u down!!
next chapter! "
chapter 43 review
Mindy
said:
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Okay, please, PLEASE tell me they eventually work this situation out!!!!????
"
chapter 43 review
Kim
said:
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Roxi should listen to Logan..
I hope Claudia managed to escape the fire somehow.
if shes dead then i think roxi will completely lose i…more "
I hope Claudia managed to escape the fire somehow.
if shes dead then i think roxi will completely lose i…more "
chapter 43 review
Ellen ♥
said:
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Lol. I hate that when that happens. People having a convo about you when you're right there and they have forgotten!
"
chapter 44 review
Sophie
said:
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yay, she is finally gonna go and tell Logan she needs his help :)
"
chapter 44 review
Mindy
said:
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Please, PLEASE tell me that they work it out and then they get put into some kind of danger where they have to be completely in sync to get out of!!!!…more
"
chapter 45 review
Sophie
said:
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YAY! they made up.. and we a juicy make-out scene.. finally!! hahaha
oh no, they are hiding things from him coz they noe he is with Roxi- but wat…more "
oh no, they are hiding things from him coz they noe he is with Roxi- but wat…more "
chapter 45 review
Kim
said:
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aaww. leave it on a cliffhanger why dont you.
at least roxi is a little happier now.. "
at least roxi is a little happier now.. "
chapter 46 review
Medina
said:
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Rachel, As always, this is awesome! i say do wat ever you want. You are the writer. But in my POV, i would like to read about how Logan feels....hope …more
"
chapter 46 review
Sophie
said:
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NOOOO!! he has to find her.. but how? oh this is so sad :(
and YES Rach, post the chapter that is in his POV.. coz we never relli noe how he feel…more "
and YES Rach, post the chapter that is in his POV.. coz we never relli noe how he feel…more "
chapter 46 review
Ellen ♥
said:
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OMG! That is just pure evil. I love where this is heading though!
"
chapter 47 review
Sophie
said:
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yay! aww, i liked this chapter, coz it finally gives us an insight to Logan :)
good on ya Rach ;) "
good on ya Rach ;) "
chapter 47 review
Mindy
said:
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I am SO FREAKING GLAD you posted this chapter!! It seems like Destined is starting to wind down. I REALLY hope you make us ALL happy with what we kno…more
"
chapter 48 review
Sophie
said:
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ohmygod! they r alive! yayyyy :)
aww, this is relli good, n ow she isnt alone- they will help her :)
good on ya with that Rach ;) lol "
aww, this is relli good, n ow she isnt alone- they will help her :)
good on ya with that Rach ;) lol "
chapter 49 review
Mindy
said:
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Love it Girly, as always! I can totally understand about family drama, so don't fret about complaints from this corner. Take YOUR story at YOUR own pa…more
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chapter 50 review
Mindy
said:
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Love it Girly!!! PLEASE get the next chapter up sooner than soon!!! ;-}
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chapter 51 review
Mindy
said:
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Amazing, as always! Just PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE don't let that darkness get out of controll!! Remember how I like mostly-happily-ever-afters???!!! ;-}
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chapter 52 review
Mindy
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Hmmm...You do realize that now you HAVE to update, like, now. As soon as now as now can get. Sooner, even. Pwease? (Big Puppy Dog Eyes)
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chapter 53 review
Mindy
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WHAT!!!!!!! NO!!!!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE TELL ME THAT LOGAN DOES NOT DIE!!!!!!!!! IF YOU KILL HIM OFF, I SWEAR I WILL NEVER FINISH MY OWN STORY!!!! HOW …more
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chapter 55 review
Mindy
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YAY!!! YOU LISTENED!!! Now that you wrote that, Logan and Roxi WILL have a happy ending. And, yes, there IS an implied threat in there somewhere... ;-…more
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chapter 55 review
*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:)))
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OMFG LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!KEEP IT UP PWETTY PWEASE!!:))))
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