Destined - Chapter 7-Traitor (chapter 8) by Rachel

by Rachel
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There’s a line between good and evil, but what happens when that line is blurred?

Roxi was a normal teenager up until two years ago when fate left her no choice but to become a vampire. Necessary for her to live; it wasn’t something she chose. Does that make her evil? Roxi doesn’t think so. With that choice taken out of her hands, she made the only one she could let herself make. She chose not to give into her nature, but to rise above it.
Despite having to hide, who and what she now is from the people who matter most, Roxi was living her life as best she could. That was until someone from her past resurfaced. Someone who wants Roxi to take a different path than the one she chose. Someone who won’t let her go.
Now Roxi is left with no choice but to work alongside her natural enemy, the very people who hunt her kind- Vampire Hunters. Embarking on a shared mission proves difficult as hunters and vampires clash. They say keep your friends close and your enemies closer, but how do you accomplish that when your enemies no doubt want you dead?
Throw in a supposed destiny that Roxi doesn’t believe in, and a hunter named Logan who may be more than he seems, life’s getting complicated. As Roxi fights to prove she’s more than the hunters think she is, Logan’s learning that not everything is black and white, and soon Roxi begins feeling things for him she knows she shouldn’t.
But when tragedy strikes and Roxi’s world is shattered, she must decide whether to give up, and lose all she is, or fight to complete the mission. Suddenly the stakes are higher, as the realisation that maintaining what’s left of her already broken world may come at a price. One that Roxi’s not sure she’s willing to pay, or even if her heart will allow her too.




**** SCHOOL HAS BEEN VERY BUSY LATELY, AND THAT IS WHY THE CHAPTERS AREN'T COMING OUT AS QUICKLY AS THEY USUALLY DO. I CAN'T SEEM TO FIND THE SPARE TIME TO WRITE. I'M SORRY IF THIS HAS BEEN DISAPPOINTING ANYBODY ****



chapters

chapter 1: Prologue

chapter 8: Chapter 7-Traitor

chapter 15: Chapter 14- Callie

chapter 27: Chapter 26- The Order

chapter 39: Chapter 38- The Lodge

chapter 46: Chapter 45- Leaving

chapter 48: Chapter 47- Miracle

chapter 53: Chapter 52- The Plan

chapter 56: Chapter 55


Chapter 7-Traitor
chapter 8   —   updated Oct 09, 2009   —   6902 characters   —   302 people liked this writing   —   219 reviews of this writing
“How long?” I demanded, ignoring his remark. “How long have you been working for Micah?”
“Long enough” He snarled. He seemed so different. Not like himself. But he was himself; everything else had been a lie.
“How could you? How could you betray us like this? After everything we’ve been through.”
“It was surprisingly easy.”
“Easy. You’ve turned your back on everything we’ve been taught. Everything we believe in.” I wanted to scream, but I still didn’t want to draw attention. There were some things I still needed to know. Like why?
“Ha! Everything you believe in. You think I wanna sit back and wait until a bunch of pathetic hunters come and slaughter me. To live my life and exist in a half life. When I can live like a king. Not a chance, give me this any day.”
“That’s why you’ve been staying here so much.” I realised. “Why you won’t come out during the day. You can’t!” He’d done it. He’d actually taken a life, maybe more than one. He truly was evil.
He sneered. “The price to pay for immortality.”
“The price you will pay, will be your life. We’ll never let you leave here alive. I won’t let you.” I slowly started to walk towards the cabinet, on the wall. Step after step. The shock of realising that someone I believed to be good was turning into rage.
“As vampires we were once powerful and strong. People who knew of us feared us. Feared what they didn’t know and because of that we were in control. Look at us now. We exist like this, living in groups, afraid of hunters.” He spat “Hunters, who are no more special than anybody else, except that they are trained to kill us. And we let them. We could obliviate them, but we don’t and I’m sick of it”
“We are not afraid of them.”
“Oh, no. Then why is it that the Death Walkers are working with them? It’s because you’re all afraid of them. But not me.”
“I am not afraid of them. I and the rest of the Death Walkers will be working with them because Micah has to be stopped, not because we fear them, it’s the right thing to do. I know it, Alana knows it, Quintenn knows it, and we all know it.” I shook my head. “I thought you believed that.”

“Well, I don’t. And I’m not the only one. There are many, both here and around the world, that share Micah’s vision. A vision where we are once again in charge”
“There have always been vampires who kill and murder. That will never change. What makes you so sure this is different in anyway?” I interrupted.
“It is, you’ll see.” He smirked. “I think you’d like it. There is nothing better than the feeling you get watching someone take their last breath, knowing you hold all the cards. Of knowing that you are in control.”
“You” I raged “are disgusting. I don’t want any part of that. Never. And if you think that for one second, I’m gonna let you walk out of here, you're out of your mind!”
“Too bad. We could have had fun.” James raised his head and his eyes went from being his normal colour, to having a dangerous glow. He bared his fangs and sprang at me.
I gripped the knife that sat atop the cabinet and twisted so that instead of hitting me James collided with the cabinet.
He let out a shriek and started to circle me, just like we did during training. Only this wasn’t training and only one of us was going to walk away alive.
I pushed aside all the thoughts I had of him, flirting with Claudia and as my friend, and thought of him only as my enemy. I had to find his weakness and use that. I knew he was overconfident and that he wasn’t as fast as other vampires I’d faced.
As we circled each other, I realised that he would be doing the same thing. I hoped he couldn’t find my weaknesses as easily as I could his.
Again, he lunged at me and again I dodged him. He grabbed my arm and I flung him backwards. He stumbled a bit but was otherwise unmoved. He was strong; I could feel it in his grip.
“He has plans for you. Micah.” He smirked.
“What?” I stumbled in surprise and he landed a hit smack square in my chest, sending me backwards and with a crash, into a table.
Jumping to my feet, I felt wetness on my shirt and looking down, saw I had a gash on my stomach. I panted. Oh well, I thought. As a vampire I healed fast. Soon enough there wouldn’t be anything there except the tear in my shirt. It was a shame too; this was one of my favourite shirts.

“You think that even after all this time, he’d let you go?” he laughed. “He’ll never let you go.”
Angered, I kicked out at him. He caught my ankle and twisted. I was faster than him and thought ahead. As he twisted, so did I. I turned my body in the air, around and up, so that when he released my ankle I ended up landing on the ground in a crouch.
I extended my foot and kicked his legs out from under him, but he rolled and was soon on his feet once again. I jumped up and he grabbed for the knife in my hand.
We struggled and he wrestled it from my grip. With a flick of his wrist he sent it flying across the room and into the wall on the other side. In the same motion I pushed my hand up and was rewarded to hear a crack. I had broken his nose. Blood poured down over his shirt and with a roar of rage and pain, he backhanded me across my jaw.
“Bitch!”
Oh, that was it. I punched him, full force into his ugly face and bolted across the room, with him hot on my heels.
By this time the noise we had been making and our absence had been noticed and everyone was flocking into the room. Claudia was standing there, open mouthed as well as Frank Morgan, Logan and most of the other hunters. They all entered the room in the same minute it took both James and I to reach the other side of the room.

I was just the tiniest bit faster and as my foot hit the wall, I did a back flip, scooping up the knife at the same time. I flipped around and it one fluid motion, sank the knife into James’s heart.
He let out a gurgle and sank to his knees. Blood poured from his mouth, and he gasped his last breath as I pulled the knife out.
I stood there panting and gasping for breath before I turned and looked at all the shocked faces staring at me. I knew I was covered in blood, both mine and his, and that I was a mess. No one had any idea what had happened and why, and I wasn’t in the mood to explain.
I walked towards Logan. He followed me with his eyes until I was standing before him, all eyes on me. “There was your snitch.” I said before I thrust the bloody knife into his hands. He simply looked down at it until I turned and walked towards the door, opening it quietly.
“Roxi. Oh my God. What...” Claudia was speechless, staring down at James’s lifeless body. “Where are you going?”
I turned to face her one last time before slamming the door behind me.
“Church!”
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" Love the new chapter. Bad Micah:) "
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" revenge on micah!!!
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" ok, i am officialy sure that im addicted to your story so post hte next chapter or else...
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AAHHHHH omg omg omg i cant breathe lol and idk y, it was just that good... "
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you hav to post the next chapter.. soon!! "
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The wait was longm, but so worth it! =P
I want more Logan and quickly! "
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bloody micah, go find sumone hu actually likes u!!
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DONT KILL LOGAN!! "
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" i think micah planned them to go there. so he can take Roxi and kill logan. if u kill logan i will fly to australia, and strangle u and then i will pu…more "
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Kim said:
" Great!!
you had to leave it on a cliff hanger didnt you! :L
cant wait to read more. "
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XXmelancholyXX said:
" hurry up Rach!!!!!!!!!!! i understand u have school but still, WE NEED MORE!! "
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Abbee said:
" awesome. ur story sucked me right in. i LOVE IT! "
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Rebecka said:
" not nice mannn i wanna know "
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Sophie said:
" aww rach u didnt tell us anything abt her and logan :(
ah well, i will be hounding u for the next chapter :) "
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Mindy said:
" LOVE IT!!!!

Damn. It's about time!!! Bring on the next PLEASE!!!! "
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XXmelancholyXX said:
" its about time!!! u really need to speed it up. we need more(again)!!!!!! "
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Kim said:
" This is a great story :)
as good or even better that some of the books out now days! "
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Abbee said:
" AHHH! CLIFF HANGER! stop this torture. "
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*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:))) said:
" LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KEEP WRITING PPLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D "
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Sarah said:
" :O :O :O "
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Mindy said:
" I loved it!!!

This is going to sound so wrong, but I'm glad you put the fire in there. Logan and Roxi are both still alive.

Tha…more "
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Kim said:
" That was so sweet then *sniff* it got s-so sad and i was *sniff* actually crying :( "
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Sophie said:
" OMG a fire!! theyre all dead, claudia and callie..
thank god logan didnt die!! YAY! and they r together :D
but that was soo sad wen the mano…more "
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*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:))) said:
" omg Rach!!!that is sooooo sad :'(!!im glad Logan wasnt in the Manor!!!!please keep writing "
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Rebecka said:
" omg no no no no no not dead, cant be dead!!! "
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Medina said:
" OMG!Rachel, awesome story, loved it like Hell, totally in love with Logan. NNNNOOOOO, they cant all be dead! By th way, if you Kill off Logan I will p…more "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" =O

OMG! RACHEL! I NEED MORE AND QUCIK! *snaps fingers* GET TO IT!

-Excuse the captials "
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ayundabhuwana said:
" Really, you should publish it or something. It's awesome!!! "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" =O
I was definitly not expecting that! "
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Mindy said:
" Okay. WOW. Love it Girl!!! ;-} "
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*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:))) said:
" this is hella good!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D "
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Sophie said:
" aww she took all her abger out on logan.. but its good he knew she was sad
it so cute how he knew she was there and he waited for her :D
"
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Medina said:
" Honey...Im gonna cry if you dont continue soon, and i just finished crying from Blood Promis...Tear "
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Abbee said:
" cool! "
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Kim said:
" within the first paragragh i was crying again.. "
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XXmelancholyXX said:
" more?? pwetty pwease?? "
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Raylene said:
" so awesome write more plz come on! "
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Sophie said:
" FINALLY!!! yay!@! this chapter wanst boring, despite ure qualms :D
and it was more roxi and logan time.. but he was acting a bit strange..?
…more "
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Mindy said:
" EEEPP!!! You FINALLY got it up!!! ;-} "
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*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:))) said:
" LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…more "
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Abbee said:
" where is she? "
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Kim said:
" thanks for writing the next chapter!
i was dying from waiting!
great chapter btw :) "
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Sophie said:
" YAY! a new chapter, finally :P
aww her and logan r sharing a room, how cute ~~
screw micah, they need to kill him once and for all!! "
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Kim said:
" aaaw.

great chappy as always.

youve gotta love logan

i feel really sorry for roxy "
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Mindy said:
" Damn. PLEASE get the next chapter up ASAP!!! "
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Sophie said:
" aww, Logan is so caring and sweet- bringing her blood even tho he hates the thaut of it
please let her hav a damn shower :P "
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Kim said:
" great as always.
i wish that you hadnt killed off the conavent :(
anyways good job "
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Mindy said:
" LOVE IT!!! Hey, the ASAP thing worked! Maybe you can do another ASAP job? "
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*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:))) said:
" this is soo good!!i feel so bad for Rox though!!Keep writing!!! "
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Sophie said:
" oh no, the first body.. i bet she will crumble
will she loose it Rach? lol
write more :P "
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Mindy said:
" PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE get the next chapter up!!!!! ;-} "
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Kim said:
" thats certianly gunnu dampen her already dreary mood

great description in this chapter ;) "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" =(
This is going to be hard for her! "
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Sophie said:
" awww! that last part is so cute ;)
she is gonna go mental wen they find claudia.. poor roxi, i hope logan can handle her outbursts
write mo…more "
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Mindy said:
" They haven't found Claudia. Could it be that she's still alive?! PLEASE hurry with the next chapter!!! ;-} "
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ayundabhuwana said:
" oooh, can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!!! "
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Kim said:
" Break the Kleenex out again

Im going to start sending you the bill :L

isnt there going to be any happiness in her life any time …more "
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Sophie said:
" NOOO! STOP PUSHING LOGAN AWAY!
Rach i swear if u dnt hav them making up the next time they talk i will hunt u down!!
next chapter! "
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Mindy said:
" Okay, please, PLEASE tell me they eventually work this situation out!!!!???? "
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Kim said:
" Roxi should listen to Logan..

I hope Claudia managed to escape the fire somehow.
if shes dead then i think roxi will completely lose i…more "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" This ought to be interesting. Keep writing! I really love this! "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" Lol. I hate that when that happens. People having a convo about you when you're right there and they have forgotten! "
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Sophie said:
" yay, she is finally gonna go and tell Logan she needs his help :) "
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Mindy said:
" Please, PLEASE tell me that they work it out and then they get put into some kind of danger where they have to be completely in sync to get out of!!!!…more "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" Luv this so much! Plz write more soon! "
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Sophie said:
" YAY! they made up.. and we a juicy make-out scene.. finally!! hahaha
oh no, they are hiding things from him coz they noe he is with Roxi- but wat…more "
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sMiLeY!! said:
" Write More!!! "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" Uh-oh.... I love this! And happy birthday! "
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Mindy said:
" COME ON!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOOOOON!!!!!! ;-} "
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Kim said:
" aaww. leave it on a cliffhanger why dont you.
at least roxi is a little happier now.. "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" Ooh! A mystery! "
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Medina said:
" Rachel, As always, this is awesome! i say do wat ever you want. You are the writer. But in my POV, i would like to read about how Logan feels....hope …more "
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Sophie said:
" NOOOO!! he has to find her.. but how? oh this is so sad :(
and YES Rach, post the chapter that is in his POV.. coz we never relli noe how he feel…more "
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Sarah said:
" post it!!!!!! that sounds awesome! :D "
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Ana Lucia said:
" port it!! love this story...=) "
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Abbee said:
" Yea, I"d like to hear his side! :) love ur story as usual. "
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ayundabhuwana said:
" I think it's ok. Can't wait for the next chapter! "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" OMG! That is just pure evil. I love where this is heading though! "
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Sophie said:
" yay! aww, i liked this chapter, coz it finally gives us an insight to Logan :)
good on ya Rach ;) "
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Mindy said:
" I am SO FREAKING GLAD you posted this chapter!! It seems like Destined is starting to wind down. I REALLY hope you make us ALL happy with what we kno…more "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" Love love love this, Rachel! Keep writing, this rocks! "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" I like his POV. "
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ayundabhuwana said:
" wow, i can't believe claudia's alive!! good for roxi! "
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Mindy said:
" Eeeeeppppp!!! love it Girly!!! ;-} "
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Medina said:
" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, they are alive!!!!YAY "
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Sophie said:
" ohmygod! they r alive! yayyyy :)
aww, this is relli good, n ow she isnt alone- they will help her :)
good on ya with that Rach ;) lol "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" I am soooooo glad you didnt kill everybody off! "
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Mindy said:
" Love it Girly, as always! I can totally understand about family drama, so don't fret about complaints from this corner. Take YOUR story at YOUR own pa…more "
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Mindy said:
" Love it Girly!!! PLEASE get the next chapter up sooner than soon!!! ;-} "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" Awww. I thought it was Micha! Lol. "
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Mindy said:
" Amazing, as always! Just PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE don't let that darkness get out of controll!! Remember how I like mostly-happily-ever-afters???!!! ;-} "
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ayundabhuwana said:
" yay! and cute! "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" =O
I wonder what Claudia is keeping secret? "
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Mindy said:
" Hmmm...You do realize that now you HAVE to update, like, now. As soon as now as now can get. Sooner, even. Pwease? (Big Puppy Dog Eyes) "
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Mindy said:
" WHAT!!!!!!! NO!!!!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE TELL ME THAT LOGAN DOES NOT DIE!!!!!!!!! IF YOU KILL HIM OFF, I SWEAR I WILL NEVER FINISH MY OWN STORY!!!! HOW …more "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" =O
Oh my God! "
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Mindy said:
" Can you PLEASE get the next chapter up, like, NOW!!!!!!!!! ;-} "
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chapter 55 review
Mindy said:
" YAY!!! YOU LISTENED!!! Now that you wrote that, Logan and Roxi WILL have a happy ending. And, yes, there IS an implied threat in there somewhere... ;-…more "
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Aileen said:
" Aww!! I love it!! =D<3 "
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Ellen ♥ said:
" Awww!! "
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ayundabhuwana said:
" aw, what a cute chapter :) "
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*HaYlEy*WoOdLoNe rOcKz!!:))) said:
" OMFG LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!KEEP IT UP PWETTY PWEASE!!:)))) "
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