Destined - Chapter 5- Do we have a deal? (chapter 6) by Rachel
description:
There’s a line between good and evil, but what happens when that line is blurred?
Roxi was a normal teenager up until two years ago when fate left her no choice but to become a vampire. Necessary for her to live; it wasn’t something she chose. Does that make her evil? Roxi doesn’t think so. With that choice taken out of her hands, she made the only one she could let herself make. She chose not to give into her nature, but to rise above it.
Despite having to hide, who and what she now is from the people who matter most, Roxi was living her life as best she could. That was until someone from her past resurfaced. Someone who wants Roxi to take a different path than the one she chose. Someone who won’t let her go.
Now Roxi is left with no choice but to work alongside her natural enemy, the very people who hunt her kind- Vampire Hunters. Embarking on a shared mission proves difficult as hunters and vampires clash. They say keep your friends close and your enemies closer, but how do you accomplish that when your enemies no doubt want you dead?
Throw in a supposed destiny that Roxi doesn’t believe in, and a hunter named Logan who may be more than he seems, life’s getting complicated. As Roxi fights to prove she’s more than the hunters think she is, Logan’s learning that not everything is black and white, and soon Roxi begins feeling things for him she knows she shouldn’t.
But when tragedy strikes and Roxi’s world is shattered, she must decide whether to give up, and lose all she is, or fight to complete the mission. Suddenly the stakes are higher, as the realisation that maintaining what’s left of her already broken world may come at a price. One that Roxi’s not sure she’s willing to pay, or even if her heart will allow her too.
**** SCHOOL HAS BEEN VERY BUSY LATELY, AND THAT IS WHY THE CHAPTERS AREN'T COMING OUT AS QUICKLY AS THEY USUALLY DO. I CAN'T SEEM TO FIND THE SPARE TIME TO WRITE. I'M SORRY IF THIS HAS BEEN DISAPPOINTING ANYBODY ****
chapters
chapter 1:
Prologue
chapter 2:
Chapter 1- School surprise
chapter 3:
Chapter 2- The safety of home.
chapter 4:
Chapter 3- The covenant
chapter 5:
Chapter 4- Distress signal
chapter 6:
Chapter 5- Do we have a deal?
chapter 7:
Chapter 6- Introductions
chapter 8:
Chapter 7-Traitor
chapter 9:
Chapter 8- Seeking forgiveness
chapter 10:
Chapter 9- Hunter? Bear? I'll take the bear
chapter 11:
Chapter 10- Saving Logan's life
chapter 12:
Chapter 11- Logan saving my life
chapter 13:
Chapter 12- Personal and Professional
chapter 15:
Chapter 14- Callie
chapter 16:
Chapter 15- Warehouse siege
chapter 17:
Chapter 16- Evil has a name: Micah
chapter 18:
Chapter 17- They need to know
chapter 19:
Chapter 18- I know Micah; he'll never let me go
chapter 20:
Chapter 19- Logan's history
chapter 23:
Chapter 22- It's all a grey area
chapter 24:
Chapter 23- My past; why I became a vampire
chapter 25:
Chapter 24- Do you trust me?
chapter 26:
Chapter 25- Logan's actually apologizing?
chapter 27:
Chapter 26- The Order
chapter 29:
Chapter 28- Believing I can be more
chapter 30:
Chapter 29- Staking a claim
chapter 32:
Chapter 31- He'd been fighting all along
chapter 33:
Chapter 32- Study session
chapter 35:
Chapter 34- Despite everything, i love him!
chapter 36:
Chapter 35- Logan, do you want to be with me?
chapter 37:
Chapter 36- They're all gone...
chapter 38:
Chapter 37- Losing faith
chapter 39:
Chapter 38- The Lodge
chapter 43:
Chapter 42- Not Coping
chapter 44:
Chapter 43- Delivering the news
chapter 45:
Chapter 44- Facing the Truth
chapter 46:
Chapter 45- Leaving
chapter 47:
Chapter 46- Letting her go *IN LOGAN'S POV*
chapter 48:
Chapter 47- Miracle
chapter 49:
Chapter 48- What do we do now?
chapter 50:
Chapter 49- Almost Normal
chapter 51:
Chapter 50- Night-time Visitor
chapter 52:
Chapter 51- The resistance
chapter 53:
Chapter 52- The Plan
chapter 54:
Chapter 53- We can't be selfish
chapter 55:
Chapter 54- One Night in Paradise
“We are here to offer you a proposal.” His gruff voice indicated that he didn’t want to be addressing a bunch of vampires. “We have been aware of your,” he paused “existence for a while now. You first came to our knowledge a few months back, but we chose to bide our time before confronting you.”
“Confronting us?” Alana was calm. “What do you wish to accomplish by having this discussion. And, if you wished to surprise us, you have certainly lost the element of surprise now.”
“Yes, we have.” He answered.
“Surely you few hunters can hope to vanquish us. If that is what you think then you are wrong.” She gestured to the group of us standing to her side and then around the house. “We out number you immensely.” Her crisp, British accent, faded over the centuries was like acid in the room.
The hunter with ice blue eyes and blonde hair snorted and Alana shot him a look, which he ignored. He too, took a step towards her “If you believe that we have come unprepared then it is you that are mistaken.” He had a strong voice, the voice of a leader.
Alana merely stared back at him, unmoving. I could feel the tension in the air.
“You said you had a proposal.”
Alana turned towards me, clearly not appreciating my interruption.
“Yes, we do.” The older man said, this time looking at Alana and Alana only. “We have come to make a deal with you. A proposition if you will.
Alana raised her eyebrows, indicating that he had surprised her. I didn’t blame her; hunters didn’t usually make deals with vampires. Never. “You have come to ask for our help.”
“We don’t need your help.” It was the younger blonde hunter, clearly not liking her assumption. I could guess that she hadn’t been far off.
“I am under the instruction of ask for your assistance in exchange for immunity from us. You will be left unharmed, free to exist with limited interference from us.” The older hunter had a very hard edge to his voice. He was being ordered to do this, I realised. This wasn’t what he, or, I cast a quick glance at the blonde hunter, his comrade wanted.
“Limited interference?” Alana spoke sharply.
“Yes, we will monitor you. To make sure that you are living peacefully and that you are not harming anyone.”
“Or?”
“Or.... we will be forced to take action.” He smiled a very nasty looking smile. That was what he wanted, a reason to vanquish us.
Alana nodded, considering this.
Up until this point Claudia, Quintenn and the rest of the vampires had been still. Now Claudia walked to my side, casting a glance at the blonde hunter. Under other circumstances it would have looked like she was checking him out, but surely not now. Then again, it was Claudia.
“What is it that you ask assistance with?” Alana had stepped closer to the hunters, showing that she didn’t fear them at all. No, she knew we would all defend her if she was in any danger.
“We have been tracking a vampire. His has caused quite a lot of death and destruction and he is becoming increasingly a top priority for us.”
This time Alana’s raised only one eyebrow. “A vampire?” she asked in disbelief. “You need our help with a vanquishing another vampire. What, you want us to do your job for you?”
“No!” the younger hunter stepped right up towards Alana, eyes blazing. Her guards twitched, but otherwise stayed put. “This vampire is different. He is strong, powerful and has many contacts within your world. He has eluded us. All we ask is that you help us track him. We will take it from there.”
“Do we have a deal?” the older hunter waved his comrade off, eyes weary.
We weren’t even introduced.
“Who is it that you expect us to track? We won’t agree unless we have some idea of who it is that we are looking for. We won’t work blind.” Alana, I could see didn’t believe this was as simple as they were putting it across. And she was right. Vampire hunters were good at their jobs; it was what they were trained for. They would never turn to a vampire for help. They must be desperate.
“An old vampire. He goes by the name Micah.” The younger blonde hunter spoke with no emotion.
A strangled sound escaped my lips. I knew that name. It was a name from my past. Suddenly it felt as though the world was getting darker and ready to swallow me whole.
This I was not ready for.
The eyes of every hunter in the room looked at me. A few vampires too, although they knew the reason behind my reaction. Claudia to a step towards me, her eyes fierce.
“You know him?” Blue eyes cast me a questioning look.
I stared back, unable to speak.
“Yes.” It was Alana who answered. “Yes, we know him. We have.... crossed paths with him before” she said slowly. Then she stared both hunters in the eyes. “And yes, if Micah is in town, we will help you track him down. We accept your deal” she said with finality.
“How do you know him?”
“That is none of your concern. As I said we will help you but you will respect our decision to leave some things.....” she shot me a sympathetic look “in the past.”
If the hunters noticed the look Alana and I shared they didn’t acknowledge it.
“Very well. We have a deal.” The old hunter stepped up to Alana and offered her his hand.
She shook it. “Now lets speak privately about this is my office.” She gestured for him to leave the room and he stiffly flowed. With one last look at all in the foyer, Alana moved of in the direction of the hunter, her guards in tow.
That left the blonde hunter standing, facing me. His expression was hard and frustrated. He seemed to be studying my reaction and well he should have been. I had no doubt gone pale.
Learning that the last person you ever wanted to see, the guy who tormented your every nightmare, was in town tended to do that to a person. No matter how strong they were.
Hunters I could handle. This I wasn’t sure about.
Claudia was whispering in my ear and Quintenn had come to stand beside me too.
No. My mouth went hard. I would handle this. I refused to let Micah destroy my life.
I wasn’t paying attention to Claudia, but I let her lead me out of the room. “I cannot believe this!” Claudia was screaming at Quintenn. “How is it that he is in town and you don’t know?”
“I swear there has been no talk. He hasn’t made any moves to come here.”
“That you know of.”
“He hasn’t. Trust me, if he did I would know.”
“Sure you would. Just like you’d know he was in town. I can’t believe that we had to find out from hunters. Hunters!”
Their voices snapped me out of my thoughts. Looking up from where I was biting my lip, I saw the blonde hunter staring at us. He was standing up against the wall talking to his hunter buddies. They were standing in a circle close together and they were whispering. I could see his lips moving, but he was looking our way.
“Shhhh. Not here. We’ve got an audience.” I nodded towards the hunters. Claudia and Quintenn glanced up as I pulled them out of the room, out of the hunter’s line of sight and past James, who was just walking into the room. “Look, this is not a big deal okay. I can handle him, but I don’t want them” I pointed towards the hunters “to know anything they can use. Because, no matter what they say, something feels wrong.”
“No shit Sherlock.”
Oh, I love Claudia’s humour.
“Their gonna use us.”
“That may no be a bad thing.” Quintenn had his right hand on his chin. “We’ve been trying to kill him for decades, maybe with some help we can finally be rid of him.”
“Last time is saw him he was more powerful. The truth is I’m not surprised that the hunters need assistance. Not with him.”
Claudia gave me a look. “This will not be like last time. Okay, never again. Do you hear me!”
“Yes.” I smiled but I didn’t really feel it. At least I could maybe rid myself of him, once and for all. I could stop looking over my shoulder. I could be free....
reviews of this writing
Both Sharnia ans mio (ashara:D)loved it.
Now on to teh next one... "
Yea ita a tade like Vampire Accademy but seeing that is my favourie series (can't wait till Blo…more "
hey just be careful with spelling mistakes. u have a few. u could write them in word first, if …more "
I don't know how your friend mistaked that for VA.
Granted, I would still take the complement of being compared to Richelle Mead. ;-} …more "
Yet still totally awesome!
PLEASE KEEP WRITING! AND SOON! "
*snorts* Yeah, right. You end up falling in love with …more "
Awesome! ;-} "
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i think thats his name andyways i think its him omg is it himm?? "
thats so good that im sitting here my eyes gled to the screen,
yelling at anyone who bugs me
=)
ohh and i was shaking ,
an…more "
-Haha! "
r u serious ur gunna leave it there?
better get typing fast!! "
lol really i wanna know what "The Order" is "
oh, and i love it!
the prophecy thing adds a good twist to it "
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please post the next cvhapter soon.. i wanna see what happens!! and when they kiss! "
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AAHHHHH omg omg omg i cant breathe lol and idk y, it was just that good... "
you hav to post the next chapter.. soon!! "
The wait was longm, but so worth it! =P
I want more Logan and quickly! "
bloody micah, go find sumone hu actually likes u!!
i hope things go well with roxi and logan :) "
=D
I am now one very happy girl only one thing is missing.... the next chapter!!! "
DONT KILL LOGAN!! "
PLEASE DONT KILL LOGAN!!:( "
you had to leave it on a cliff hanger didnt you! :L
cant wait to read more. "
ah well, i will be hounding u for the next chapter :) "
as good or even better that some of the books out now days! "
This is going to sound so wrong, but I'm glad you put the fire in there. Logan and Roxi are both still alive.
Tha…more "
thank god logan didnt die!! YAY! and they r together :D
but that was soo sad wen the mano…more "
OMG! RACHEL! I NEED MORE AND QUCIK! *snaps fingers* GET TO IT!
-Excuse the captials "
it so cute how he knew she was there and he waited for her :D
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and it was more roxi and logan time.. but he was acting a bit strange..?
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i was dying from waiting!
great chapter btw :) "
aww her and logan r sharing a room, how cute ~~
screw micah, they need to kill him once and for all!! "
great chappy as always.
youve gotta love logan
i feel really sorry for roxy "
please let her hav a damn shower :P "
i wish that you hadnt killed off the conavent :(
anyways good job "
will she loose it Rach? lol
write more :P "
great description in this chapter ;) "
she is gonna go mental wen they find claudia.. poor roxi, i hope logan can handle her outbursts
write mo…more "
Im going to start sending you the bill :L
isnt there going to be any happiness in her life any time …more "
Rach i swear if u dnt hav them making up the next time they talk i will hunt u down!!
next chapter! "
I hope Claudia managed to escape the fire somehow.
if shes dead then i think roxi will completely lose i…more "
oh no, they are hiding things from him coz they noe he is with Roxi- but wat…more "
at least roxi is a little happier now.. "
and YES Rach, post the chapter that is in his POV.. coz we never relli noe how he feel…more "
good on ya Rach ;) "
aww, this is relli good, n ow she isnt alone- they will help her :)
good on ya with that Rach ;) lol "

















