Poetry - first date by Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ oıɔoɹ/rocio Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ pronounced row-see-oh♥
chapters
chapter 1:
first date
chapter 2:
Pesadillas
chapter 3:
Diamond Ring
chapter 4:
Sé Bella Guatemala
chapter 5:
Tears of Sadness Falling Upwards
first date
chapter 1
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updated Aug 14, 2009
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A/N: just a poem i came up with just now. i wrote it just for fun. :) any suggestions? please write!
the girl stood frozen
she had no idea what to say
he was so beautiful
standing there, so perfect in every way
she thought about her hair,
her shoes, her dress
they were all so wrong,
in so many ways
she wished she could be as perfect,
as flawless as him,
as beautiful as her first date
who she could feel was her soulmate
the boy stood frozen
she was completely beautiful
the way her eyes shined
so brightly in the moonlight
he said shall we go
and the girl said ok
and off they went
both nervous, in a secret way
and so they went
towards the moonlit night
full of brightly shining stars
onto their very first date
back to top
the girl stood frozen
she had no idea what to say
he was so beautiful
standing there, so perfect in every way
she thought about her hair,
her shoes, her dress
they were all so wrong,
in so many ways
she wished she could be as perfect,
as flawless as him,
as beautiful as her first date
who she could feel was her soulmate
the boy stood frozen
she was completely beautiful
the way her eyes shined
so brightly in the moonlight
he said shall we go
and the girl said ok
and off they went
both nervous, in a secret way
and so they went
towards the moonlit night
full of brightly shining stars
onto their very first date
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RoSaDbAsSgUaRdAiNs
said:
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wow,this is really good. and you said you couldn't write. :P good job
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chapter 1 review
Snowsong
said:
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Really cool! I like how sometimes it rhymes and sometimes it doesn't.
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Emily
said:
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that was really good. you captured the feeling of nervousness on a first date.
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