Playing Pretend (My Boyfriend is Hers) -finished- - Fight (chapter 8) by SiNgUrL
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What would you not do for your best friend? Can there be a happy ending when a big part of your life started with playing pretend?
Criselda Vonner was a cheerleader in school and she was best friends with Faith Smith. Faith Smith's boyfriend was the hottest guy in school and the captain of the foorball team, Paul Whitman. With Trixie Layman, the cheerleading team captain, wanting to steal him away from her, Criselda had to do something and that was to pretend to be the new girlfriend of Paul atleast until Trixie got tired of stealing Paul away from her. The only problem was she was afraid because she knew that she already had a secret love for Paul since first year highschool even before he courted Faith.
chapters
chapter 1:
Best Friends
chapter 2:
Start of the Game
chapter 3:
New Student
chapter 4:
Justin Flanders
chapter 5:
Unexpected Kiss
chapter 6:
Deeper
chapter 7:
Talk with Paul
chapter 8:
Fight
chapter 9:
Slip up
chapter 10:
Telling Justin
chapter 11:
Truth
chapter 12:
Goodbye Letter
chapter 13:
Getting on with Life
chapter 14:
Friends
Fight
chapter 8
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Justin and I were working on finishing our English projects about the story of Aphrodite that night and it was before ten already.
"Do you think will be good enough for that fat professor to pass me?" Justin asked.
"You already revised that for about a hundred times already, Justin," I chuckled.
He winced at me.
"Okay, well, we've done our best so that's enough I think. Actually Aphrodite is one hell of a goddess," I smiled.
"Like you," I thought I heard him say.
"What?" I asked for him to repeat.
"I said Yes, she is," he raised a mocking eyebrow on me and we both ended up laughing when my phone rang.
"Hey, Cris!" it was Paul. What does he need now?
"Hi," I said and my heart was beating fast when I knew it was him.
"Have you-" he was saying something when I saw Justin writing something on the back of my hand. I didn't notice it at first but because he pushed the pen too hard I saw it and pulled it away.
"Ow! What's that for?" I said. He was wearing a wide smile.
"I'm sorry Paul. What was that you're saying?"
"You have company there at this time of night? Is it-" he said but before he could ask I told him he didn't need to worry because it wasn't Faith who was with me.
"Then who?" if I could be right, he sounded a bit surprised. Why would he care anyway, right? And besides, I wasn't doing anything wrong. Justin stood up and went to get something in my fridge.
"No one. Anyway, we'll be finished with this project-" before I could continue, I saw Justin eating my last cup of ice cream.
"Justin! That's mine!" I stood up almost forgetting that I was talking with Paul on the phone.
"Hey! Don't be selfish. Anyway, even if you cry I won't return it. I love this flavor, you know," I stared at him in disbelief.
"Fine, you can have it but replace it or else..." I said when Paul cleared his throat on the phone.
"Oh, Paul! I'm sorry. Where were we?" I realized I was still on the phone.
"Oh, yeah! He would go home soon after EATING MY LAST CUP OF ICE CREAM!" I said while wincing at Justin who was wearing a wide smile.
"You're with Justin? ANd you didn't tell me?" he sounded annoyed and irritated.
"I'm sorry but hey..." I thought about it, I didn't need to tell him who I'll be studying with or who ever I was with.
"Well, I didn't need to tell you who I'm with, Paul," I said when Justin went to the kitchen to throw out the "empty cup of my favorite ice cream!"
"Oh, yeah." his voice was lower as he realized I was right.
"I'm not your boyfriend. I forgot," he said and hang up after saying bye.
"What was with him?" I looked on my phone and closed it.
I couldn't understand what he meant by he forgot he wasn't my boyfriend. I really don't get it. I didn't want to get a wrong assumption.
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In school, Paul didn't ask me about anything about Justin or that night when we were sitting together in the cafeteria. Well, I think that's better. He wasn't talking much with me either. I think that was one of my points when I told him we shouold lie low. Well, it took days before he agreed with me.
While Paul was practicing with the football team and my team mates were practicing, too. I excused myself for a while because I was getting worried. I didn't see Faith all day at school and because Paul looked like he didn't want to talk to me, I didn't dare ask him any questions. Maybe he was having a bad day.
I went to my locker in the hallway and looked for my phone when Justin startled me.
"Hey! Miss Aphrodite!" he said smiling wide. He leaned his hand on the locker supporting his body.
"Justin! You startled me!" I let out a deep breath.
"I want to tell you something," he said and I just raised my brows wondering what it was he would be wanting to tell.
And then his face got closer to mine.
"Justin?" but he wasn't stopping. it was like his face would be falling to mine and my first reaction was to close my eyes.
"You idiot!" it was Paul's voice.
I opened my eyes and saw Justin on the floor touching his cheek. Paul punched him on the face. I saw his fists still clenched so I stood between them.
Paul looked so angry. Was it still part of the pretending? I couldn't understand.
"What's wrong with you, Paul?" I asked in surprise and anger that he punched my friend.
"He was about to kiss you!" I was shocked. yes, Justin was about to do that but why was he so angry about it? No one would see it and our pretending wouldn't be ruined. Or was he feeling pissed because he was still my fake boyfriend in school that if somebody saw Justin and me, his reputation would be damaged.
"What's this about, Paul?" I asked again while Justin stood up and stood behind me.
"You didn't tell me you were with him last night and now, you're willing to be kissed by him? I must be the one asking what's wrong with you, Cris!" Paul announced it.
The students, the rest of the Scorpions and the squad were all there. Now, he ruined his reputation. He was going way too far. I couldn't understand now if it was about his reputation or his relationship with Faith- the pretending. He was confusing me too much and Faith wasn't around wither making me worried sick. I felt dizzy and fell into someone's arms.
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"Do you think will be good enough for that fat professor to pass me?" Justin asked.
"You already revised that for about a hundred times already, Justin," I chuckled.
He winced at me.
"Okay, well, we've done our best so that's enough I think. Actually Aphrodite is one hell of a goddess," I smiled.
"Like you," I thought I heard him say.
"What?" I asked for him to repeat.
"I said Yes, she is," he raised a mocking eyebrow on me and we both ended up laughing when my phone rang.
"Hey, Cris!" it was Paul. What does he need now?
"Hi," I said and my heart was beating fast when I knew it was him.
"Have you-" he was saying something when I saw Justin writing something on the back of my hand. I didn't notice it at first but because he pushed the pen too hard I saw it and pulled it away.
"Ow! What's that for?" I said. He was wearing a wide smile.
"I'm sorry Paul. What was that you're saying?"
"You have company there at this time of night? Is it-" he said but before he could ask I told him he didn't need to worry because it wasn't Faith who was with me.
"Then who?" if I could be right, he sounded a bit surprised. Why would he care anyway, right? And besides, I wasn't doing anything wrong. Justin stood up and went to get something in my fridge.
"No one. Anyway, we'll be finished with this project-" before I could continue, I saw Justin eating my last cup of ice cream.
"Justin! That's mine!" I stood up almost forgetting that I was talking with Paul on the phone.
"Hey! Don't be selfish. Anyway, even if you cry I won't return it. I love this flavor, you know," I stared at him in disbelief.
"Fine, you can have it but replace it or else..." I said when Paul cleared his throat on the phone.
"Oh, Paul! I'm sorry. Where were we?" I realized I was still on the phone.
"Oh, yeah! He would go home soon after EATING MY LAST CUP OF ICE CREAM!" I said while wincing at Justin who was wearing a wide smile.
"You're with Justin? ANd you didn't tell me?" he sounded annoyed and irritated.
"I'm sorry but hey..." I thought about it, I didn't need to tell him who I'll be studying with or who ever I was with.
"Well, I didn't need to tell you who I'm with, Paul," I said when Justin went to the kitchen to throw out the "empty cup of my favorite ice cream!"
"Oh, yeah." his voice was lower as he realized I was right.
"I'm not your boyfriend. I forgot," he said and hang up after saying bye.
"What was with him?" I looked on my phone and closed it.
I couldn't understand what he meant by he forgot he wasn't my boyfriend. I really don't get it. I didn't want to get a wrong assumption.
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In school, Paul didn't ask me about anything about Justin or that night when we were sitting together in the cafeteria. Well, I think that's better. He wasn't talking much with me either. I think that was one of my points when I told him we shouold lie low. Well, it took days before he agreed with me.
While Paul was practicing with the football team and my team mates were practicing, too. I excused myself for a while because I was getting worried. I didn't see Faith all day at school and because Paul looked like he didn't want to talk to me, I didn't dare ask him any questions. Maybe he was having a bad day.
I went to my locker in the hallway and looked for my phone when Justin startled me.
"Hey! Miss Aphrodite!" he said smiling wide. He leaned his hand on the locker supporting his body.
"Justin! You startled me!" I let out a deep breath.
"I want to tell you something," he said and I just raised my brows wondering what it was he would be wanting to tell.
And then his face got closer to mine.
"Justin?" but he wasn't stopping. it was like his face would be falling to mine and my first reaction was to close my eyes.
"You idiot!" it was Paul's voice.
I opened my eyes and saw Justin on the floor touching his cheek. Paul punched him on the face. I saw his fists still clenched so I stood between them.
Paul looked so angry. Was it still part of the pretending? I couldn't understand.
"What's wrong with you, Paul?" I asked in surprise and anger that he punched my friend.
"He was about to kiss you!" I was shocked. yes, Justin was about to do that but why was he so angry about it? No one would see it and our pretending wouldn't be ruined. Or was he feeling pissed because he was still my fake boyfriend in school that if somebody saw Justin and me, his reputation would be damaged.
"What's this about, Paul?" I asked again while Justin stood up and stood behind me.
"You didn't tell me you were with him last night and now, you're willing to be kissed by him? I must be the one asking what's wrong with you, Cris!" Paul announced it.
The students, the rest of the Scorpions and the squad were all there. Now, he ruined his reputation. He was going way too far. I couldn't understand now if it was about his reputation or his relationship with Faith- the pretending. He was confusing me too much and Faith wasn't around wither making me worried sick. I felt dizzy and fell into someone's arms.
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chapter 2 review
Carly
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cute, i like the plan but poor cris is going to be hurt and paul looks like he dumped faith for her friend...
good over all "
good over all "
chapter 2 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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ok so far im in love with this!
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chapter 3 review
Katy (twilight_teen14)
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i like it but paul is supposed to say, "im her boyfriend" not his.
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chapter 5 review
ScreamSunshine
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Wow. Cris seems to like Justin...kinda a lot...sorta. Maybe she would tell him what's going on. But this is really good! Keep going!
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chapter 5 review
Christa & ?
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sweet! Keep writing I'm Sooo exicted to find out what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Carly
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!!! no! what just...?? Paul kissed her?!
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
chapter 6 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I have a feeling Justin knows about the 'pretend dating' thing. Because he just tugged her away before she could say kissed in front of Faith. So, y…more
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chapter 8 review
ScreamSunshine
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That was great! I'm starting not to like Paul...at all. Justin's funny and nice(:
This is really good! Keep writing! "
This is really good! Keep writing! "
chapter 9 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I still love it! It's great!
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
chapter 9 review
Carly
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Are you crazy? Not like it??? It was awesome! Even with Mental Block and Wrmth Drainage! I love your writeing :]
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chapter 9 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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awww its sooooo sad!!!:( but its still awsome! :)
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chapter 10 review
Carly
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Aw i love Justin :] hes so nice
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
chapter 11 review
ScreamSunshine
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Whoa! Turnage in the story! This is really really good! Keep going!
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
chapter 12 review
Mrs Jones
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awwww... my heart is totally breaking right now... poor Paul... this is such a good story... i wouldn't know what to do either... i mean, Faith is her…more
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chapter 12 review
Sharleen
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OMG OMG OMG! lol
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
chapter 13 review
Carly
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Done? Really?
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
chapter 13 review
Abbee
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NOOOOO!....r u going to be writing a second book? is faith going to become cris's friend again?
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chapter 13 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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hey... question, are they in highschool or college??? because they act liek highschool but highschoolers dont have apartments... is it like a bording…more
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chapter 14 review
Sharleen
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noo!! lol dont finish! lol write book2!! lol
dat was really good! "
dat was really good! "
chapter 14 review
Carly
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Aww it's over... :( oh well, it was AWESOME singurl! I hope you do a sequel (can't spell lol) but if not, awesome!!!! Love your writing your soooo gre…more
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