Playing Pretend (My Boyfriend is Hers) -finished- - Unexpected Kiss (chapter 5) by SiNgUrL
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What would you not do for your best friend? Can there be a happy ending when a big part of your life started with playing pretend?
Criselda Vonner was a cheerleader in school and she was best friends with Faith Smith. Faith Smith's boyfriend was the hottest guy in school and the captain of the foorball team, Paul Whitman. With Trixie Layman, the cheerleading team captain, wanting to steal him away from her, Criselda had to do something and that was to pretend to be the new girlfriend of Paul atleast until Trixie got tired of stealing Paul away from her. The only problem was she was afraid because she knew that she already had a secret love for Paul since first year highschool even before he courted Faith.
chapters
chapter 1:
Best Friends
chapter 2:
Start of the Game
chapter 3:
New Student
chapter 4:
Justin Flanders
chapter 5:
Unexpected Kiss
chapter 6:
Deeper
chapter 7:
Talk with Paul
chapter 8:
Fight
chapter 9:
Slip up
chapter 10:
Telling Justin
chapter 11:
Truth
chapter 12:
Goodbye Letter
chapter 13:
Getting on with Life
chapter 14:
Friends
Unexpected Kiss
chapter 5
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Trixie still didn't believe that I was with Paul. She was still unsure whether to believe us or not. Maybe it was too obvious that we really weren't together. I just wish she would drop it so that we could end up the pretending now.
It was dismissal time and after the cheerleading practice. Paul waited for me out the gym. The other girls ignored us when they passed by us. Justin was with Trixie because he was a new popular boy, she befriended him just for popularity sake. Then they saw us and stopped in front of us.
"So I can't think that you can do this to Faith, Cris?" Trixie said.
"C'mon, Trixie. Leave them alone," Justin told her to stop ut of course she didn't.
I looked at Paul and squeezed his hand that was already holding mine. Then I looked back at Trixie trying to keep our plan safe.
"What proof do you want, Trixie?" Paul asked.
"Proof? Well, let's see. You walk her to class, you carry her things, you wait for her until after practice but..."
I was beginning to feel the fear again. I knew something was in her mind and when she would tell what proof it'll be and we couldn't do it in front of her, this would end.
"Trixie..." I was about to complain about her blabbing when she said it.
The worst proof we couldn't do.
"I haven't seen you kiss her," she smiled a wicked smile like she won a fight.
And if she felt triumphant, I felt defeated. How about Faith? What about their relationship? Even if Paul stood by her, Trixie would continue making her jealous and that could end up that Faith would break up with him unless he quit the team in order for Trixie to stop flirting with her.
"Trixie..." Justin tried to interfere again when Paul lifted my chin to face him and our lips touched. I was surprised and shocked, I closed my eyes. I was frozen but he kissed with passion. I could feel heat rushing through my veins then after a few seconds he let go and looked at Trixie with his usual sweet smile. He was triumphant.
I looked down trying not to move. I had a glimpse of shocked faces. Trixie's, Justin's and some other cheerleaders who were still by the gym.
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When I reached my apartment. I threw myself in bed and still couldn't believe what happened. i felt like I was just dreaming. I was confused and fearful.
What if Faith knew about the kiss? Why did Paul do that? I felt the passion in the kiss but I know it was just part of pretending though I wasn't expecting this to be a part of it.
Please, Faith. DOn't be mad about this.
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It was dismissal time and after the cheerleading practice. Paul waited for me out the gym. The other girls ignored us when they passed by us. Justin was with Trixie because he was a new popular boy, she befriended him just for popularity sake. Then they saw us and stopped in front of us.
"So I can't think that you can do this to Faith, Cris?" Trixie said.
"C'mon, Trixie. Leave them alone," Justin told her to stop ut of course she didn't.
I looked at Paul and squeezed his hand that was already holding mine. Then I looked back at Trixie trying to keep our plan safe.
"What proof do you want, Trixie?" Paul asked.
"Proof? Well, let's see. You walk her to class, you carry her things, you wait for her until after practice but..."
I was beginning to feel the fear again. I knew something was in her mind and when she would tell what proof it'll be and we couldn't do it in front of her, this would end.
"Trixie..." I was about to complain about her blabbing when she said it.
The worst proof we couldn't do.
"I haven't seen you kiss her," she smiled a wicked smile like she won a fight.
And if she felt triumphant, I felt defeated. How about Faith? What about their relationship? Even if Paul stood by her, Trixie would continue making her jealous and that could end up that Faith would break up with him unless he quit the team in order for Trixie to stop flirting with her.
"Trixie..." Justin tried to interfere again when Paul lifted my chin to face him and our lips touched. I was surprised and shocked, I closed my eyes. I was frozen but he kissed with passion. I could feel heat rushing through my veins then after a few seconds he let go and looked at Trixie with his usual sweet smile. He was triumphant.
I looked down trying not to move. I had a glimpse of shocked faces. Trixie's, Justin's and some other cheerleaders who were still by the gym.
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When I reached my apartment. I threw myself in bed and still couldn't believe what happened. i felt like I was just dreaming. I was confused and fearful.
What if Faith knew about the kiss? Why did Paul do that? I felt the passion in the kiss but I know it was just part of pretending though I wasn't expecting this to be a part of it.
Please, Faith. DOn't be mad about this.
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chapter 2 review
Carly
said:
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cute, i like the plan but poor cris is going to be hurt and paul looks like he dumped faith for her friend...
good over all "
good over all "
chapter 2 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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ok so far im in love with this!
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chapter 3 review
Katy (twilight_teen14)
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i like it but paul is supposed to say, "im her boyfriend" not his.
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chapter 5 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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Wow. Cris seems to like Justin...kinda a lot...sorta. Maybe she would tell him what's going on. But this is really good! Keep going!
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chapter 5 review
Christa & ?
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sweet! Keep writing I'm Sooo exicted to find out what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Carly
said:
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!!! no! what just...?? Paul kissed her?!
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
chapter 6 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I have a feeling Justin knows about the 'pretend dating' thing. Because he just tugged her away before she could say kissed in front of Faith. So, y…more
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chapter 8 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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That was great! I'm starting not to like Paul...at all. Justin's funny and nice(:
This is really good! Keep writing! "
This is really good! Keep writing! "
chapter 9 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I still love it! It's great!
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
chapter 9 review
Carly
said:
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Are you crazy? Not like it??? It was awesome! Even with Mental Block and Wrmth Drainage! I love your writeing :]
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chapter 9 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
said:
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awww its sooooo sad!!!:( but its still awsome! :)
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chapter 10 review
Carly
said:
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Aw i love Justin :] hes so nice
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
chapter 11 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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Whoa! Turnage in the story! This is really really good! Keep going!
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
chapter 12 review
Mrs Jones
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awwww... my heart is totally breaking right now... poor Paul... this is such a good story... i wouldn't know what to do either... i mean, Faith is her…more
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chapter 12 review
Sharleen
said:
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OMG OMG OMG! lol
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
chapter 13 review
Carly
said:
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Done? Really?
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
chapter 13 review
Abbee
said:
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NOOOOO!....r u going to be writing a second book? is faith going to become cris's friend again?
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chapter 13 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
said:
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hey... question, are they in highschool or college??? because they act liek highschool but highschoolers dont have apartments... is it like a bording…more
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chapter 14 review
Sharleen
said:
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noo!! lol dont finish! lol write book2!! lol
dat was really good! "
dat was really good! "
chapter 14 review
Carly
said:
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Aww it's over... :( oh well, it was AWESOME singurl! I hope you do a sequel (can't spell lol) but if not, awesome!!!! Love your writing your soooo gre…more
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