Playing Pretend (My Boyfriend is Hers) -finished- - Justin Flanders (chapter 4) by SiNgUrL
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What would you not do for your best friend? Can there be a happy ending when a big part of your life started with playing pretend?
Criselda Vonner was a cheerleader in school and she was best friends with Faith Smith. Faith Smith's boyfriend was the hottest guy in school and the captain of the foorball team, Paul Whitman. With Trixie Layman, the cheerleading team captain, wanting to steal him away from her, Criselda had to do something and that was to pretend to be the new girlfriend of Paul atleast until Trixie got tired of stealing Paul away from her. The only problem was she was afraid because she knew that she already had a secret love for Paul since first year highschool even before he courted Faith.
chapters
chapter 1:
Best Friends
chapter 2:
Start of the Game
chapter 3:
New Student
chapter 4:
Justin Flanders
chapter 5:
Unexpected Kiss
chapter 6:
Deeper
chapter 7:
Talk with Paul
chapter 8:
Fight
chapter 9:
Slip up
chapter 10:
Telling Justin
chapter 11:
Truth
chapter 12:
Goodbye Letter
chapter 13:
Getting on with Life
chapter 14:
Friends
Justin Flanders
chapter 4
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"So Trixie is still not backing off. She trails him like all through out the day," Faith said when Paul went home.
"It's been a week, Faith. Are we still going on with this?" I was starting to get used to Paul doing his job as my fake boyfriend in school and I couldn't deny that I was getting more and more terrified because I felt I was starting to feel that I'll e lost without the pretending if it's all done. I wanted it to finish efore it would all e too late.
"Cris please. We'll stop this as soon as Trixie stops stalking my boyfriend. Please. You're the only one who can help me with this,"
"But Faith..."
"Please Cris,"
I sighed. I couldn't turn her down. I love my best friend far too much like a sister and I couldn't bear see her down because I didn't help her with this one problem.
"Fine,"
"Thanks very much. You're relly the best friend someone will be proud to have,"
"Welcome," was all I could say.
"So, change topic. Paul said you're interested with Justin Flanders?" he was the new boy in school.
"Justin? How can he know that?" I asked in surprise.
"He said he can see it in your eyes," she shrugged.
When the hell did Paul waste his time in looking in my eyes to see if I like someone? I shook my head.
"Well?" Faith asked again.
"I like him 'cause he's a nice guy and a good friend," I just said. Justin and I spent some time together in making projects and assignments because he just lives a block away from my apartment.
"Oh, c'mon Cris. He's gorgeous, smart and in a week he's already as popular as Paul," she was quite in disbelief that I wasn't interested in Justin.
"And so?"
Then while she was talking, I saw her new necklace. I knew it was new because it was the first time I saw it.
"Where'd you get that pretty locket?" I leaped to that topic so as to escape her attention with me not liking Justin Flanders.
"Oh this?" she smiled sweetly.
She opened it and looked at the pictures inside of it.
"Paul gave it to me. He said he saw it in a store and decided to buy it for me. He's really sweet,"
"And the other day, my parents called. They told me Lara was sick and when I told Paul about it, he got worried too and wished Lara to get well soon," she said as she was remembering it.
Lara is Faith's younger sister. paul haven't met her yet but he already cared because she was Faith's family.
That was another thing about Paul. He was a good and caring person. Even if he was the most popular guy in school, he wasn't a bully or he doesn't brag about him being popular. He kept it low. He was humble. Maybe it was also one of Faith's reasons she didn't want to lose him. He's really worth to have.
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"It's been a week, Faith. Are we still going on with this?" I was starting to get used to Paul doing his job as my fake boyfriend in school and I couldn't deny that I was getting more and more terrified because I felt I was starting to feel that I'll e lost without the pretending if it's all done. I wanted it to finish efore it would all e too late.
"Cris please. We'll stop this as soon as Trixie stops stalking my boyfriend. Please. You're the only one who can help me with this,"
"But Faith..."
"Please Cris,"
I sighed. I couldn't turn her down. I love my best friend far too much like a sister and I couldn't bear see her down because I didn't help her with this one problem.
"Fine,"
"Thanks very much. You're relly the best friend someone will be proud to have,"
"Welcome," was all I could say.
"So, change topic. Paul said you're interested with Justin Flanders?" he was the new boy in school.
"Justin? How can he know that?" I asked in surprise.
"He said he can see it in your eyes," she shrugged.
When the hell did Paul waste his time in looking in my eyes to see if I like someone? I shook my head.
"Well?" Faith asked again.
"I like him 'cause he's a nice guy and a good friend," I just said. Justin and I spent some time together in making projects and assignments because he just lives a block away from my apartment.
"Oh, c'mon Cris. He's gorgeous, smart and in a week he's already as popular as Paul," she was quite in disbelief that I wasn't interested in Justin.
"And so?"
Then while she was talking, I saw her new necklace. I knew it was new because it was the first time I saw it.
"Where'd you get that pretty locket?" I leaped to that topic so as to escape her attention with me not liking Justin Flanders.
"Oh this?" she smiled sweetly.
She opened it and looked at the pictures inside of it.
"Paul gave it to me. He said he saw it in a store and decided to buy it for me. He's really sweet,"
"And the other day, my parents called. They told me Lara was sick and when I told Paul about it, he got worried too and wished Lara to get well soon," she said as she was remembering it.
Lara is Faith's younger sister. paul haven't met her yet but he already cared because she was Faith's family.
That was another thing about Paul. He was a good and caring person. Even if he was the most popular guy in school, he wasn't a bully or he doesn't brag about him being popular. He kept it low. He was humble. Maybe it was also one of Faith's reasons she didn't want to lose him. He's really worth to have.
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chapter 2 review
Carly
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cute, i like the plan but poor cris is going to be hurt and paul looks like he dumped faith for her friend...
good over all "
good over all "
chapter 2 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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ok so far im in love with this!
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chapter 3 review
Katy (twilight_teen14)
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i like it but paul is supposed to say, "im her boyfriend" not his.
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chapter 5 review
ScreamSunshine
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Wow. Cris seems to like Justin...kinda a lot...sorta. Maybe she would tell him what's going on. But this is really good! Keep going!
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chapter 5 review
Christa & ?
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sweet! Keep writing I'm Sooo exicted to find out what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Carly
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!!! no! what just...?? Paul kissed her?!
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
chapter 6 review
ScreamSunshine
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I have a feeling Justin knows about the 'pretend dating' thing. Because he just tugged her away before she could say kissed in front of Faith. So, y…more
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chapter 8 review
ScreamSunshine
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That was great! I'm starting not to like Paul...at all. Justin's funny and nice(:
This is really good! Keep writing! "
This is really good! Keep writing! "
chapter 9 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I still love it! It's great!
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
chapter 9 review
Carly
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Are you crazy? Not like it??? It was awesome! Even with Mental Block and Wrmth Drainage! I love your writeing :]
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chapter 9 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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awww its sooooo sad!!!:( but its still awsome! :)
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chapter 10 review
Carly
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Aw i love Justin :] hes so nice
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
chapter 11 review
ScreamSunshine
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Whoa! Turnage in the story! This is really really good! Keep going!
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
chapter 12 review
Mrs Jones
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awwww... my heart is totally breaking right now... poor Paul... this is such a good story... i wouldn't know what to do either... i mean, Faith is her…more
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chapter 12 review
Sharleen
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OMG OMG OMG! lol
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
chapter 13 review
Carly
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Done? Really?
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
chapter 13 review
Abbee
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NOOOOO!....r u going to be writing a second book? is faith going to become cris's friend again?
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chapter 13 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
said:
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hey... question, are they in highschool or college??? because they act liek highschool but highschoolers dont have apartments... is it like a bording…more
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chapter 14 review
Sharleen
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noo!! lol dont finish! lol write book2!! lol
dat was really good! "
dat was really good! "
chapter 14 review
Carly
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Aww it's over... :( oh well, it was AWESOME singurl! I hope you do a sequel (can't spell lol) but if not, awesome!!!! Love your writing your soooo gre…more
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