Playing Pretend (My Boyfriend is Hers) -finished- - New Student (chapter 3) by SiNgUrL
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What would you not do for your best friend? Can there be a happy ending when a big part of your life started with playing pretend?
Criselda Vonner was a cheerleader in school and she was best friends with Faith Smith. Faith Smith's boyfriend was the hottest guy in school and the captain of the foorball team, Paul Whitman. With Trixie Layman, the cheerleading team captain, wanting to steal him away from her, Criselda had to do something and that was to pretend to be the new girlfriend of Paul atleast until Trixie got tired of stealing Paul away from her. The only problem was she was afraid because she knew that she already had a secret love for Paul since first year highschool even before he courted Faith.
chapters
chapter 1:
Best Friends
chapter 2:
Start of the Game
chapter 3:
New Student
chapter 4:
Justin Flanders
chapter 5:
Unexpected Kiss
chapter 6:
Deeper
chapter 7:
Talk with Paul
chapter 8:
Fight
chapter 9:
Slip up
chapter 10:
Telling Justin
chapter 11:
Truth
chapter 12:
Goodbye Letter
chapter 13:
Getting on with Life
chapter 14:
Friends
New Student
chapter 3
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I just still couldn't believe Faith could do things like this. I mean pretend in front of everybody that she was dumped for me just to e with Paul at the end of the day? I couldn't believe she could love anyone like this and I couldn't elieve that I agreed with her plan, too.
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I was walking to put my book in the locker and get my art materials for our next class when I bumped into someone and dropped my book. I thought it must be Paul again but it wasn't.
"I'm sorry," he picked up my book and returned it.
He was gorgeous like Paul. And his eyes were enchanting like sudden warmth flowed inside me when I looked in them. I haven't seen him before.
"Um hi," he said with the most soothing voice I had ever heard.
"H -hi," I was frozen in place while he handed me the book.
He smiled and was to walk away when I turned and called him. I wasn't like this but some guts in me told me I must talk to him at least know his name.
"Hey!"
"W-what?" he looked back.
"Um..." I couldn't think of anything to ask or say to him.
"Y-you're just new here, aren't you?" I finally thought of something to say.
He nodded and smiled.
"I'm a junior," I said. What was I thinking? And so what if Im a junior. What is it to him? And now I noticed he looked mature enough to e a senior and so I gulped. What if he was a senior?
"I'm a junior, too," he smiled wider.
"My next class is under..." he pulled out a piece of unfolded paper from his book and read his schedule.
"Mrs. Tuffet," he looked back to me again.
"Art class?" I asked in surprise. It was my next class too. This is going good so far although I'm not sure why I'm glad he was to be my classmate.
"Yeah. Is that your next class, too?"
I nodded and smiled. I feel like I would blush.
"We could walk together if you'd like to," he asked me to walk with him? Okay. Of course, who wouldn't want to walk with him? He's totally gorgeous.
I was about to nod when the cheerleading team and the scorpions arrived in the hall. We were in the end of the building so they won't notice us. The cheerleaders gathered around Paul as usual. I wasn't with them because they will just chat all break time.
"Who's that?" I didn't notice him look at where I was looking at.
"Oh, um... that's Paul Whitman. He's the football captain that's why the..."
"cheerleadears gather around him?" he continued my sentence.
I smiled and nodded.
"He's in our next class," I added as a matter of fact.
"You know him?" he continued to ask.
"I... um he's... he's..." I don't know what to say. He's the boyfriend of my friend who's pretending to be my boyfriend as of now? That's confusing. I didn't know what to say when someone put an arm around my waist.
"I'm her boyfriend," Paul said and I was surprised. Why was he putting his arm around me? This is far from what we've talked about. I feel like I would faint with him beside me. My heart was pounding and I just wish they won't hear it then heat flushed my cheeks. I looked down. I knew I was blushing.
"Oh, hi," the new student said.
"Maybe it's better if I go now?" he asked me.
"What's you next class?" Paul asked.
"Arts class," he said.
"Well, you can walk with us," Paul offered. I looked up at him and he was smiling at the new student.
I was just glad he wasn't a jerk.
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I was walking to put my book in the locker and get my art materials for our next class when I bumped into someone and dropped my book. I thought it must be Paul again but it wasn't.
"I'm sorry," he picked up my book and returned it.
He was gorgeous like Paul. And his eyes were enchanting like sudden warmth flowed inside me when I looked in them. I haven't seen him before.
"Um hi," he said with the most soothing voice I had ever heard.
"H -hi," I was frozen in place while he handed me the book.
He smiled and was to walk away when I turned and called him. I wasn't like this but some guts in me told me I must talk to him at least know his name.
"Hey!"
"W-what?" he looked back.
"Um..." I couldn't think of anything to ask or say to him.
"Y-you're just new here, aren't you?" I finally thought of something to say.
He nodded and smiled.
"I'm a junior," I said. What was I thinking? And so what if Im a junior. What is it to him? And now I noticed he looked mature enough to e a senior and so I gulped. What if he was a senior?
"I'm a junior, too," he smiled wider.
"My next class is under..." he pulled out a piece of unfolded paper from his book and read his schedule.
"Mrs. Tuffet," he looked back to me again.
"Art class?" I asked in surprise. It was my next class too. This is going good so far although I'm not sure why I'm glad he was to be my classmate.
"Yeah. Is that your next class, too?"
I nodded and smiled. I feel like I would blush.
"We could walk together if you'd like to," he asked me to walk with him? Okay. Of course, who wouldn't want to walk with him? He's totally gorgeous.
I was about to nod when the cheerleading team and the scorpions arrived in the hall. We were in the end of the building so they won't notice us. The cheerleaders gathered around Paul as usual. I wasn't with them because they will just chat all break time.
"Who's that?" I didn't notice him look at where I was looking at.
"Oh, um... that's Paul Whitman. He's the football captain that's why the..."
"cheerleadears gather around him?" he continued my sentence.
I smiled and nodded.
"He's in our next class," I added as a matter of fact.
"You know him?" he continued to ask.
"I... um he's... he's..." I don't know what to say. He's the boyfriend of my friend who's pretending to be my boyfriend as of now? That's confusing. I didn't know what to say when someone put an arm around my waist.
"I'm her boyfriend," Paul said and I was surprised. Why was he putting his arm around me? This is far from what we've talked about. I feel like I would faint with him beside me. My heart was pounding and I just wish they won't hear it then heat flushed my cheeks. I looked down. I knew I was blushing.
"Oh, hi," the new student said.
"Maybe it's better if I go now?" he asked me.
"What's you next class?" Paul asked.
"Arts class," he said.
"Well, you can walk with us," Paul offered. I looked up at him and he was smiling at the new student.
I was just glad he wasn't a jerk.
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chapter 2 review
Carly
said:
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cute, i like the plan but poor cris is going to be hurt and paul looks like he dumped faith for her friend...
good over all "
good over all "
chapter 2 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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ok so far im in love with this!
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chapter 3 review
Katy (twilight_teen14)
said:
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i like it but paul is supposed to say, "im her boyfriend" not his.
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chapter 5 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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Wow. Cris seems to like Justin...kinda a lot...sorta. Maybe she would tell him what's going on. But this is really good! Keep going!
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chapter 5 review
Christa & ?
said:
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sweet! Keep writing I'm Sooo exicted to find out what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Carly
said:
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!!! no! what just...?? Paul kissed her?!
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
chapter 6 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I have a feeling Justin knows about the 'pretend dating' thing. Because he just tugged her away before she could say kissed in front of Faith. So, y…more
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chapter 8 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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That was great! I'm starting not to like Paul...at all. Justin's funny and nice(:
This is really good! Keep writing! "
This is really good! Keep writing! "
chapter 9 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I still love it! It's great!
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
chapter 9 review
Carly
said:
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Are you crazy? Not like it??? It was awesome! Even with Mental Block and Wrmth Drainage! I love your writeing :]
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chapter 9 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
said:
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awww its sooooo sad!!!:( but its still awsome! :)
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chapter 10 review
Carly
said:
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Aw i love Justin :] hes so nice
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
chapter 11 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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Whoa! Turnage in the story! This is really really good! Keep going!
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
chapter 12 review
Mrs Jones
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awwww... my heart is totally breaking right now... poor Paul... this is such a good story... i wouldn't know what to do either... i mean, Faith is her…more
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chapter 12 review
Sharleen
said:
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OMG OMG OMG! lol
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
chapter 13 review
Carly
said:
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Done? Really?
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
chapter 13 review
Abbee
said:
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NOOOOO!....r u going to be writing a second book? is faith going to become cris's friend again?
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chapter 13 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
said:
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hey... question, are they in highschool or college??? because they act liek highschool but highschoolers dont have apartments... is it like a bording…more
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chapter 14 review
Sharleen
said:
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noo!! lol dont finish! lol write book2!! lol
dat was really good! "
dat was really good! "
chapter 14 review
Carly
said:
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Aww it's over... :( oh well, it was AWESOME singurl! I hope you do a sequel (can't spell lol) but if not, awesome!!!! Love your writing your soooo gre…more
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