Playing Pretend (My Boyfriend is Hers) -finished- - Start of the Game (chapter 2) by SiNgUrL
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What would you not do for your best friend? Can there be a happy ending when a big part of your life started with playing pretend?
Criselda Vonner was a cheerleader in school and she was best friends with Faith Smith. Faith Smith's boyfriend was the hottest guy in school and the captain of the foorball team, Paul Whitman. With Trixie Layman, the cheerleading team captain, wanting to steal him away from her, Criselda had to do something and that was to pretend to be the new girlfriend of Paul atleast until Trixie got tired of stealing Paul away from her. The only problem was she was afraid because she knew that she already had a secret love for Paul since first year highschool even before he courted Faith.
chapters
chapter 1:
Best Friends
chapter 2:
Start of the Game
chapter 3:
New Student
chapter 4:
Justin Flanders
chapter 5:
Unexpected Kiss
chapter 6:
Deeper
chapter 7:
Talk with Paul
chapter 8:
Fight
chapter 9:
Slip up
chapter 10:
Telling Justin
chapter 11:
Truth
chapter 12:
Goodbye Letter
chapter 13:
Getting on with Life
chapter 14:
Friends
Start of the Game
chapter 2
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'How could you?' I thought in disbelief.
Faith was right. Paul agreed with her plan. I couldn't believe it. How could they do this to me? What was Faith thinking? How could she not think that with her plan, one of us could get hurt in the end. I just couldn't think. I know she trusted me that much that's why she didn't think aout it twice. She's escaping herself from eing jealous and that's just the idea of the plan.
With Trixie possibly backing off because Paul would be with me, it would all turn out alright for her. Because even if I would be with Paul at school, Faith wouldn't need to worry because she trusted me but what about me? I would be hurting while doing the pretending. I knew I would be. Truly afraid and terrified that something bad of an outcome would be happening.
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Before I could enter our classroom where Faith, Trixie, Paul and our other classmates were for our first period, someone held my sweaty hand and snatched my bag and biology book from me.
"Hey!" I looked back at who did it and was surprised to find Paul. He wasn't in class like I thought a while ago.
"What are you doing?" I asked confused.
He raised his brows and shrugged.
"Oh." I realized this was the first day of our pretending.
"Good morning to you, too, Cris," he said and I realized I haven't even greeted him.
Before I could apologize for almost forgetting the plan, he tugged me away into the classroom. He was still holding my hands and carrying my bag and books.
Everyone in class looked at us in surprise, shock and disbelief. epecially Trixie who was obviously the most shocked.
I looked at Faith and she was looking down oh her book looking devastated.
'Hey, this is just part of you plan,' I wanted to tell her when Paul set me in my table.
I looked at him with my asking expression and looked at Faith then back to him expecting for an answer.
He lowered his head and his warm breath were suddenly in my ears.
"Don't worry. It's part of her plan," he whispered then stood up and sat beside me taking the seat of Clara, my usual seatmate, who was now sitting beside Faith.
I sighed in relief. I thought Faith was really devastated. She was a good actress, too, like Paul.
The teacher came in and we started our class.
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Faith was right. Paul agreed with her plan. I couldn't believe it. How could they do this to me? What was Faith thinking? How could she not think that with her plan, one of us could get hurt in the end. I just couldn't think. I know she trusted me that much that's why she didn't think aout it twice. She's escaping herself from eing jealous and that's just the idea of the plan.
With Trixie possibly backing off because Paul would be with me, it would all turn out alright for her. Because even if I would be with Paul at school, Faith wouldn't need to worry because she trusted me but what about me? I would be hurting while doing the pretending. I knew I would be. Truly afraid and terrified that something bad of an outcome would be happening.
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Before I could enter our classroom where Faith, Trixie, Paul and our other classmates were for our first period, someone held my sweaty hand and snatched my bag and biology book from me.
"Hey!" I looked back at who did it and was surprised to find Paul. He wasn't in class like I thought a while ago.
"What are you doing?" I asked confused.
He raised his brows and shrugged.
"Oh." I realized this was the first day of our pretending.
"Good morning to you, too, Cris," he said and I realized I haven't even greeted him.
Before I could apologize for almost forgetting the plan, he tugged me away into the classroom. He was still holding my hands and carrying my bag and books.
Everyone in class looked at us in surprise, shock and disbelief. epecially Trixie who was obviously the most shocked.
I looked at Faith and she was looking down oh her book looking devastated.
'Hey, this is just part of you plan,' I wanted to tell her when Paul set me in my table.
I looked at him with my asking expression and looked at Faith then back to him expecting for an answer.
He lowered his head and his warm breath were suddenly in my ears.
"Don't worry. It's part of her plan," he whispered then stood up and sat beside me taking the seat of Clara, my usual seatmate, who was now sitting beside Faith.
I sighed in relief. I thought Faith was really devastated. She was a good actress, too, like Paul.
The teacher came in and we started our class.
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chapter 2 review
Carly
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cute, i like the plan but poor cris is going to be hurt and paul looks like he dumped faith for her friend...
good over all "
good over all "
chapter 2 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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ok so far im in love with this!
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chapter 3 review
Katy (twilight_teen14)
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i like it but paul is supposed to say, "im her boyfriend" not his.
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chapter 5 review
ScreamSunshine
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Wow. Cris seems to like Justin...kinda a lot...sorta. Maybe she would tell him what's going on. But this is really good! Keep going!
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chapter 5 review
Christa & ?
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sweet! Keep writing I'm Sooo exicted to find out what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Carly
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!!! no! what just...?? Paul kissed her?!
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
chapter 6 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I have a feeling Justin knows about the 'pretend dating' thing. Because he just tugged her away before she could say kissed in front of Faith. So, y…more
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chapter 8 review
ScreamSunshine
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That was great! I'm starting not to like Paul...at all. Justin's funny and nice(:
This is really good! Keep writing! "
This is really good! Keep writing! "
chapter 9 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I still love it! It's great!
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
chapter 9 review
Carly
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Are you crazy? Not like it??? It was awesome! Even with Mental Block and Wrmth Drainage! I love your writeing :]
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chapter 9 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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awww its sooooo sad!!!:( but its still awsome! :)
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chapter 10 review
Carly
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Aw i love Justin :] hes so nice
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
chapter 11 review
ScreamSunshine
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Whoa! Turnage in the story! This is really really good! Keep going!
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
chapter 12 review
Mrs Jones
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awwww... my heart is totally breaking right now... poor Paul... this is such a good story... i wouldn't know what to do either... i mean, Faith is her…more
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chapter 12 review
Sharleen
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OMG OMG OMG! lol
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
chapter 13 review
Carly
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Done? Really?
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
chapter 13 review
Abbee
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NOOOOO!....r u going to be writing a second book? is faith going to become cris's friend again?
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chapter 13 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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hey... question, are they in highschool or college??? because they act liek highschool but highschoolers dont have apartments... is it like a bording…more
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chapter 14 review
Sharleen
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noo!! lol dont finish! lol write book2!! lol
dat was really good! "
dat was really good! "
chapter 14 review
Carly
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Aww it's over... :( oh well, it was AWESOME singurl! I hope you do a sequel (can't spell lol) but if not, awesome!!!! Love your writing your soooo gre…more
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