Playing Pretend (My Boyfriend is Hers) -finished- - Telling Justin (chapter 10) by SiNgUrL
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What would you not do for your best friend? Can there be a happy ending when a big part of your life started with playing pretend?
Criselda Vonner was a cheerleader in school and she was best friends with Faith Smith. Faith Smith's boyfriend was the hottest guy in school and the captain of the foorball team, Paul Whitman. With Trixie Layman, the cheerleading team captain, wanting to steal him away from her, Criselda had to do something and that was to pretend to be the new girlfriend of Paul atleast until Trixie got tired of stealing Paul away from her. The only problem was she was afraid because she knew that she already had a secret love for Paul since first year highschool even before he courted Faith.
chapters
chapter 1:
Best Friends
chapter 2:
Start of the Game
chapter 3:
New Student
chapter 4:
Justin Flanders
chapter 5:
Unexpected Kiss
chapter 6:
Deeper
chapter 7:
Talk with Paul
chapter 8:
Fight
chapter 9:
Slip up
chapter 10:
Telling Justin
chapter 11:
Truth
chapter 12:
Goodbye Letter
chapter 13:
Getting on with Life
chapter 14:
Friends
Telling Justin
chapter 10
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I was left alone in my room thinking about what happened because all in all, I haven't got any clue what Paul and Faith meant. I wanted to call Faith again but when she didn't answer my first call, I just hid my phone under my pillow and began wondering about what Paul said and what reaction I saw from Faith.
Tears were forming in the corner of my eyes now and then because I was afraid that our friendship could end bad and because I hurt her. I've gotten this feeling since the start but they didn't agree with me that this wasn't a good idea. I tried to tell Faith that I had a bad feeling about this but she was too busy focusing her jealousy on Trixie.
Knock. Knock.
I sniffed and rubbed my nose. I stood up and looked at my face in the mirror while I passed it and opened the door.
"Justin? Hey, I forgot you're coming," I half-smiled as I let him in.
"You okay?"he said raising his brows obviosly curious about my weary looks.
I just nodded and looked down on what he's carrying.
"Oh yeah, here's the replacementS," he emphasized that he brought more than what he ate.
I took the plastic bag from his hand and looked inside it excitedly.
"Just in the nick of time. I really need these to-" I sighed.
"de-stress?" he continued and I nodded.
"Anything happened between you and Paul?" he was trying to guess.
"...And Faith," I looked down and forced out a smile then walked to thr couch and he folllowed.
He pursed his lips with his eyes wide open and sat on the couch.
"O-kay. So were they cheating on you?" he asked straight forwardly.
I let out a deep breath and sat beside him. I took a cup and opened it and dug in.
"I don't really know what happened," I said with a half-spoonful of ice cream in my mouth.
"Well, just tell me what happened before I found you here being all weary and tired-looking and..."
"Okay, I look messed up. I get it," I stuck my tongue out to him while he took off his shoes to sit more comfortably on the couch facing me.
"Just tell me already," he insisted looking more serious.
"Can you keep a secret?" I said and put a teaspoonful in my mouth again.
"Sure..." he let out a deep breath and looked at me.
"I can be called a pro at keeping 'em," he continued looking a little odd making me curious about what secret he must be keeping.
"I'm not really with him..." I said and looked down playing with my ice cream.
He just stared at me then looked away and got himself a cup of ice cream.
"Hey! Those are mine now!" I tried to snatch them back but I didn't reach it so I just decided to give it. I placed the others beside me so that he couldn't take any of them again.
"So he's with Faith?" he asked and I just nodded. Admitting it wasn't that hard but I felt like someone stepped on my chest when I said it. i just ate another mouthful of coldness and looked at him.
"Why do you look like it's something you know already?" she asked.
"Oh, psh! It's not like that," he shrugged.
"Just tell me the whole story from the start until what happened a while ago," he smiled half-heartedly making me feel like he knew something about this.
I shrugged and decided to summarize the story and how it ended just a while ago and he listened intently reacting now and then making me comfortable because he was a good listener and I didn't feel uneasy when I was telling it to him.
A/N: I was writing yesterday when my dad asked me to go with him to his friend's house so I only posted now.
Anyway, hope you still like it. Thanks for the support guys! Specially Sunni! Thanks for the encouraging messages and comments... :) And Carly and to all of you...
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Tears were forming in the corner of my eyes now and then because I was afraid that our friendship could end bad and because I hurt her. I've gotten this feeling since the start but they didn't agree with me that this wasn't a good idea. I tried to tell Faith that I had a bad feeling about this but she was too busy focusing her jealousy on Trixie.
Knock. Knock.
I sniffed and rubbed my nose. I stood up and looked at my face in the mirror while I passed it and opened the door.
"Justin? Hey, I forgot you're coming," I half-smiled as I let him in.
"You okay?"he said raising his brows obviosly curious about my weary looks.
I just nodded and looked down on what he's carrying.
"Oh yeah, here's the replacementS," he emphasized that he brought more than what he ate.
I took the plastic bag from his hand and looked inside it excitedly.
"Just in the nick of time. I really need these to-" I sighed.
"de-stress?" he continued and I nodded.
"Anything happened between you and Paul?" he was trying to guess.
"...And Faith," I looked down and forced out a smile then walked to thr couch and he folllowed.
He pursed his lips with his eyes wide open and sat on the couch.
"O-kay. So were they cheating on you?" he asked straight forwardly.
I let out a deep breath and sat beside him. I took a cup and opened it and dug in.
"I don't really know what happened," I said with a half-spoonful of ice cream in my mouth.
"Well, just tell me what happened before I found you here being all weary and tired-looking and..."
"Okay, I look messed up. I get it," I stuck my tongue out to him while he took off his shoes to sit more comfortably on the couch facing me.
"Just tell me already," he insisted looking more serious.
"Can you keep a secret?" I said and put a teaspoonful in my mouth again.
"Sure..." he let out a deep breath and looked at me.
"I can be called a pro at keeping 'em," he continued looking a little odd making me curious about what secret he must be keeping.
"I'm not really with him..." I said and looked down playing with my ice cream.
He just stared at me then looked away and got himself a cup of ice cream.
"Hey! Those are mine now!" I tried to snatch them back but I didn't reach it so I just decided to give it. I placed the others beside me so that he couldn't take any of them again.
"So he's with Faith?" he asked and I just nodded. Admitting it wasn't that hard but I felt like someone stepped on my chest when I said it. i just ate another mouthful of coldness and looked at him.
"Why do you look like it's something you know already?" she asked.
"Oh, psh! It's not like that," he shrugged.
"Just tell me the whole story from the start until what happened a while ago," he smiled half-heartedly making me feel like he knew something about this.
I shrugged and decided to summarize the story and how it ended just a while ago and he listened intently reacting now and then making me comfortable because he was a good listener and I didn't feel uneasy when I was telling it to him.
A/N: I was writing yesterday when my dad asked me to go with him to his friend's house so I only posted now.
Anyway, hope you still like it. Thanks for the support guys! Specially Sunni! Thanks for the encouraging messages and comments... :) And Carly and to all of you...
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chapter 2 review
Carly
said:
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cute, i like the plan but poor cris is going to be hurt and paul looks like he dumped faith for her friend...
good over all "
good over all "
chapter 2 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
said:
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ok so far im in love with this!
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chapter 3 review
Katy (twilight_teen14)
said:
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i like it but paul is supposed to say, "im her boyfriend" not his.
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chapter 5 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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Wow. Cris seems to like Justin...kinda a lot...sorta. Maybe she would tell him what's going on. But this is really good! Keep going!
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chapter 5 review
Christa & ?
said:
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sweet! Keep writing I'm Sooo exicted to find out what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Carly
said:
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!!! no! what just...?? Paul kissed her?!
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
chapter 6 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I have a feeling Justin knows about the 'pretend dating' thing. Because he just tugged her away before she could say kissed in front of Faith. So, y…more
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chapter 8 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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That was great! I'm starting not to like Paul...at all. Justin's funny and nice(:
This is really good! Keep writing! "
This is really good! Keep writing! "
chapter 9 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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I still love it! It's great!
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
chapter 9 review
Carly
said:
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Are you crazy? Not like it??? It was awesome! Even with Mental Block and Wrmth Drainage! I love your writeing :]
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chapter 9 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
said:
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awww its sooooo sad!!!:( but its still awsome! :)
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chapter 10 review
Carly
said:
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Aw i love Justin :] hes so nice
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
chapter 11 review
ScreamSunshine
said:
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Whoa! Turnage in the story! This is really really good! Keep going!
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
chapter 12 review
Mrs Jones
said:
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awwww... my heart is totally breaking right now... poor Paul... this is such a good story... i wouldn't know what to do either... i mean, Faith is her…more
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chapter 12 review
Sharleen
said:
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OMG OMG OMG! lol
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
chapter 13 review
Carly
said:
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Done? Really?
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
chapter 13 review
Abbee
said:
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NOOOOO!....r u going to be writing a second book? is faith going to become cris's friend again?
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chapter 13 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
said:
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hey... question, are they in highschool or college??? because they act liek highschool but highschoolers dont have apartments... is it like a bording…more
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chapter 14 review
Sharleen
said:
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noo!! lol dont finish! lol write book2!! lol
dat was really good! "
dat was really good! "
chapter 14 review
Carly
said:
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Aww it's over... :( oh well, it was AWESOME singurl! I hope you do a sequel (can't spell lol) but if not, awesome!!!! Love your writing your soooo gre…more
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