Playing Pretend (My Boyfriend is Hers) -finished- - Telling Justin (chapter 10) by SiNgUrL

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What would you not do for your best friend? Can there be a happy ending when a big part of your life started with playing pretend?

Criselda Vonner was a cheerleader in school and she was best friends with Faith Smith. Faith Smith's boyfriend was the hottest guy in school and the captain of the foorball team, Paul Whitman. With Trixie Layman, the cheerleading team captain, wanting to steal him away from her, Criselda had to do something and that was to pretend to be the new girlfriend of Paul atleast until Trixie got tired of stealing Paul away from her. The only problem was she was afraid because she knew that she already had a secret love for Paul since first year highschool even before he courted Faith.



chapters

chapter 1: Best Friends

chapter 2: Start of the Game

chapter 3: New Student

chapter 4: Justin Flanders

chapter 5: Unexpected Kiss

chapter 6: Deeper

chapter 7: Talk with Paul

chapter 8: Fight

chapter 9: Slip up

chapter 10: Telling Justin

chapter 11: Truth

chapter 12: Goodbye Letter

chapter 13: Getting on with Life

chapter 14: Friends


Telling Justin
chapter 10   —   updated Jun 13, 2009   —   3678 characters   —   59 people liked this writing   —   46 reviews of this writing
I was left alone in my room thinking about what happened because all in all, I haven't got any clue what Paul and Faith meant. I wanted to call Faith again but when she didn't answer my first call, I just hid my phone under my pillow and began wondering about what Paul said and what reaction I saw from Faith.

Tears were forming in the corner of my eyes now and then because I was afraid that our friendship could end bad and because I hurt her. I've gotten this feeling since the start but they didn't agree with me that this wasn't a good idea. I tried to tell Faith that I had a bad feeling about this but she was too busy focusing her jealousy on Trixie.

Knock. Knock.

I sniffed and rubbed my nose. I stood up and looked at my face in the mirror while I passed it and opened the door.

"Justin? Hey, I forgot you're coming," I half-smiled as I let him in.

"You okay?"he said raising his brows obviosly curious about my weary looks.

I just nodded and looked down on what he's carrying.

"Oh yeah, here's the replacementS," he emphasized that he brought more than what he ate.

I took the plastic bag from his hand and looked inside it excitedly.

"Just in the nick of time. I really need these to-" I sighed.

"de-stress?" he continued and I nodded.

"Anything happened between you and Paul?" he was trying to guess.

"...And Faith," I looked down and forced out a smile then walked to thr couch and he folllowed.

He pursed his lips with his eyes wide open and sat on the couch.

"O-kay. So were they cheating on you?" he asked straight forwardly.

I let out a deep breath and sat beside him. I took a cup and opened it and dug in.

"I don't really know what happened," I said with a half-spoonful of ice cream in my mouth.

"Well, just tell me what happened before I found you here being all weary and tired-looking and..."

"Okay, I look messed up. I get it," I stuck my tongue out to him while he took off his shoes to sit more comfortably on the couch facing me.

"Just tell me already," he insisted looking more serious.

"Can you keep a secret?" I said and put a teaspoonful in my mouth again.

"Sure..." he let out a deep breath and looked at me.

"I can be called a pro at keeping 'em," he continued looking a little odd making me curious about what secret he must be keeping.

"I'm not really with him..." I said and looked down playing with my ice cream.

He just stared at me then looked away and got himself a cup of ice cream.

"Hey! Those are mine now!" I tried to snatch them back but I didn't reach it so I just decided to give it. I placed the others beside me so that he couldn't take any of them again.

"So he's with Faith?" he asked and I just nodded. Admitting it wasn't that hard but I felt like someone stepped on my chest when I said it. i just ate another mouthful of coldness and looked at him.

"Why do you look like it's something you know already?" she asked.

"Oh, psh! It's not like that," he shrugged.
"Just tell me the whole story from the start until what happened a while ago," he smiled half-heartedly making me feel like he knew something about this.

I shrugged and decided to summarize the story and how it ended just a while ago and he listened intently reacting now and then making me comfortable because he was a good listener and I didn't feel uneasy when I was telling it to him.

A/N: I was writing yesterday when my dad asked me to go with him to his friend's house so I only posted now.

Anyway, hope you still like it. Thanks for the support guys! Specially Sunni! Thanks for the encouraging messages and comments... :) And Carly and to all of you...
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" this is really good! "
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Carly said:
" cute, i like the plan but poor cris is going to be hurt and paul looks like he dumped faith for her friend...

good over all "
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" ok so far im in love with this! "
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Christa & ? said:
" Omg, it is getting intense!!!! "
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Katy (twilight_teen14) said:
" i like it but paul is supposed to say, "im her boyfriend" not his. "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Wow. Cris seems to like Justin...kinda a lot...sorta. Maybe she would tell him what's going on. But this is really good! Keep going! "
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Christa & ? said:
" sweet! Keep writing I'm Sooo exicted to find out what happens next.
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Carly said:
" !!! no! what just...?? Paul kissed her?!
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" I have a feeling Justin knows about the 'pretend dating' thing. Because he just tugged her away before she could say kissed in front of Faith. So, y…more "
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Annabel said:
" paul is sorta..... >.< "
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Mrs Jones said:
" write more... i love it... "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" That was great! I'm starting not to like Paul...at all. Justin's funny and nice(:

This is really good! Keep writing! "
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Carly said:
" O_O

he almost kissed her!!! whats up with paul?? "
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" keep writing puh-leeze! "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" I still love it! It's great!

Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
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Carly said:
" Are you crazy? Not like it??? It was awesome! Even with Mental Block and Wrmth Drainage! I love your writeing :] "
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Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!! said:
" awww its sooooo sad!!!:( but its still awsome! :) "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" This is really good! Keep writing! I love love love it! "
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Carly said:
" Aw i love Justin :] hes so nice

Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t…more "
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Abbee said:
" WOOO! u write really good. KEEP WRITING! =) "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Whoa! Turnage in the story! This is really really good! Keep going!

I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
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" SO GOOD!!!! "
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" wtf?! What... Jay?!? What did he DO?!?!?! "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" That was soo sad! Keep writing! This is really good! "
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Jessamine said:
" NO!!! keep going! pleasepleasepleaseplease!! "
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Carly said:
" I dont care what his exscuse is! I still hate paul!! "
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Mrs Jones said:
" awwww... my heart is totally breaking right now... poor Paul... this is such a good story... i wouldn't know what to do either... i mean, Faith is her…more "
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Sharleen said:
" OMG OMG OMG! lol

please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
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Carly said:
" Done? Really?

...

Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
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" NOOOOO!....r u going to be writing a second book? is faith going to become cris's friend again? "
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" hey... question, are they in highschool or college??? because they act liek highschool but highschoolers dont have apartments... is it like a bording…more "
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Sharleen said:
" noo!! lol dont finish! lol write book2!! lol

dat was really good! "
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Carly said:
" Aww it's over... :( oh well, it was AWESOME singurl! I hope you do a sequel (can't spell lol) but if not, awesome!!!! Love your writing your soooo gre…more "
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" awww... it's over... I loved it... u shud so write a book 2... maybe about Paul and Cris finally getting together??? or maybe being best friends and s…more "
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