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Playing Pretend (My Boyfriend is Hers) -finished- - Best Friends by SiNgUrL
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What would you not do for your best friend? Can there be a happy ending when a big part of your life started with playing pretend?
Criselda Vonner was a cheerleader in school and she was best friends with Faith Smith. Faith Smith's boyfriend was the hottest guy in school and the captain of the foorball team, Paul Whitman. With Trixie Layman, the cheerleading team captain, wanting to steal him away from her, Criselda had to do something and that was to pretend to be the new girlfriend of Paul atleast until Trixie got tired of stealing Paul away from her. The only problem was she was afraid because she knew that she already had a secret love for Paul since first year highschool even before he courted Faith.
chapters
chapter 1:
Best Friends
chapter 2:
Start of the Game
chapter 3:
New Student
chapter 4:
Justin Flanders
chapter 5:
Unexpected Kiss
chapter 6:
Deeper
chapter 7:
Talk with Paul
chapter 8:
Fight
chapter 9:
Slip up
chapter 10:
Telling Justin
chapter 11:
Truth
chapter 12:
Goodbye Letter
chapter 13:
Getting on with Life
chapter 14:
Friends
Best Friends
chapter 1
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updated Jun 06, 2009
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"She won't stop, Cris. I'm afraid that she'll succeed in stealing Paul. You know I love him," Faith almost sobbed but she didn't.
They were in Faith's apartment and she was having another problem with Paul Whitman, her boyfriend. He was the school's hottest guy and the football captain of the "Scorpions", the school's football team. They were already together before sophomore graduation and they love each other though Faith still fears the possibilties that he'll be stolen from her since Trixie Layman, the cheerleading captain started flirting with Paul and trying to lure him to dump Faith and be with her instead.
Cris was best friends with Faith and she listened carefully to her sentiments though she was still hurt about it because she also loved Paul even before he courted Faith. But Faith never noticed Cris's true feelings for him.
"Cris! Are you listening?" she asked when she noticed Cris doodling something on the floor of her apartment.
"Yes, of course," Cris replied immediately and looked at her.
"So do you have any plan about getting rid of Trixie?" Cris asked.
"Well, you know getting rid of her is not that easy," Faith started thinking.
After a while of silence, Cris stood up and went to Faith's fridge to get a cup of ice cream and when she went back, Faith stared at her like she had already a brilliant plan in mind and something was telling her, she was a big part of it and she started to feel tensed.
"What?" but Faith just continued staring at her and that started to creep her out.
"Faith! You're creeping me out. Stop that!"
"I have a plan!" Faith declared.
"SO what's your brilliant plan?" Cris asked curiously as she put a spoonful of cold in her mouth.
"Well, Trixie is in the cheerleading team and she wouldn't dare go against anyone of her team mates, right?"
Cris was confused, she couldn't understand where she was going.
"So?" her brows met in confusion and curiosity.
She put another spoon of ice cream in my mouth.
"Cris, you're my best friend, right?"
"Of course I am and the point is?" Cris was getting more confused.
"You'll do anything for me, right? You'll be with me in this?" Faith said and Cris was getting more tensed. She was having a bad feeling about what Faith was about to ask her to do.
"But..."
"Please, Cris. I don't want to lose him. You know how much I love him," she was begging now.
Cris sighed and pitied her. She didn't have any other choice but to be with her in whatever her plan was.
"Fine," she finally said.
Faith leaped to her and hugged her but careful enough not to spill the ice cream on her floor.
"Thanks you very much, Cris," she smiled widely and with triumph.
"You're scaring me, Faith. Tell me the plan immediately so that I can start calming down," she said like she was in defeat.
"You'll be his new girlfriend," Faith said.
"What? Are you out of your mind, Faith Smith?" Cris was shocked.
"You'll just pretend for me. You already agreed in this already," she said and faith was taken aback.
"But you didn't tell me this will be an acting game. You know I'm not a good actress," Cris tried to escape from what Faith was planning.
"But Paul is. He can act for you and you'll just have to go with the flow," Faith continued.
Cris felt like she wanted to disappear that moment or go back in time and didn't agree to be in Faith's plans but she knew she couldn't.
"But you don't even know if Paul will agree with this. We're not that close, Faith," she tried another reason.
"Oh, but he will. I know him. He'll do anything for us to be still together," Faith was really convinced with her plan- that it was going to work.
Criselda felt defeated. She didn't know how it would go. She was afraid to act because it wouldn't be just an act for her. She didn't want Faith to notice how Cris really felt for Paul and that was going to be the biggest problem for her.
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They were in Faith's apartment and she was having another problem with Paul Whitman, her boyfriend. He was the school's hottest guy and the football captain of the "Scorpions", the school's football team. They were already together before sophomore graduation and they love each other though Faith still fears the possibilties that he'll be stolen from her since Trixie Layman, the cheerleading captain started flirting with Paul and trying to lure him to dump Faith and be with her instead.
Cris was best friends with Faith and she listened carefully to her sentiments though she was still hurt about it because she also loved Paul even before he courted Faith. But Faith never noticed Cris's true feelings for him.
"Cris! Are you listening?" she asked when she noticed Cris doodling something on the floor of her apartment.
"Yes, of course," Cris replied immediately and looked at her.
"So do you have any plan about getting rid of Trixie?" Cris asked.
"Well, you know getting rid of her is not that easy," Faith started thinking.
After a while of silence, Cris stood up and went to Faith's fridge to get a cup of ice cream and when she went back, Faith stared at her like she had already a brilliant plan in mind and something was telling her, she was a big part of it and she started to feel tensed.
"What?" but Faith just continued staring at her and that started to creep her out.
"Faith! You're creeping me out. Stop that!"
"I have a plan!" Faith declared.
"SO what's your brilliant plan?" Cris asked curiously as she put a spoonful of cold in her mouth.
"Well, Trixie is in the cheerleading team and she wouldn't dare go against anyone of her team mates, right?"
Cris was confused, she couldn't understand where she was going.
"So?" her brows met in confusion and curiosity.
She put another spoon of ice cream in my mouth.
"Cris, you're my best friend, right?"
"Of course I am and the point is?" Cris was getting more confused.
"You'll do anything for me, right? You'll be with me in this?" Faith said and Cris was getting more tensed. She was having a bad feeling about what Faith was about to ask her to do.
"But..."
"Please, Cris. I don't want to lose him. You know how much I love him," she was begging now.
Cris sighed and pitied her. She didn't have any other choice but to be with her in whatever her plan was.
"Fine," she finally said.
Faith leaped to her and hugged her but careful enough not to spill the ice cream on her floor.
"Thanks you very much, Cris," she smiled widely and with triumph.
"You're scaring me, Faith. Tell me the plan immediately so that I can start calming down," she said like she was in defeat.
"You'll be his new girlfriend," Faith said.
"What? Are you out of your mind, Faith Smith?" Cris was shocked.
"You'll just pretend for me. You already agreed in this already," she said and faith was taken aback.
"But you didn't tell me this will be an acting game. You know I'm not a good actress," Cris tried to escape from what Faith was planning.
"But Paul is. He can act for you and you'll just have to go with the flow," Faith continued.
Cris felt like she wanted to disappear that moment or go back in time and didn't agree to be in Faith's plans but she knew she couldn't.
"But you don't even know if Paul will agree with this. We're not that close, Faith," she tried another reason.
"Oh, but he will. I know him. He'll do anything for us to be still together," Faith was really convinced with her plan- that it was going to work.
Criselda felt defeated. She didn't know how it would go. She was afraid to act because it wouldn't be just an act for her. She didn't want Faith to notice how Cris really felt for Paul and that was going to be the biggest problem for her.
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chapter 1 review
Christa (is a sleepy kitty...)
said:
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I like it so far. Crisedela's a pretty interesting name.
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chapter 2 review
Carly
said:
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cute, i like the plan but poor cris is going to be hurt and paul looks like he dumped faith for her friend...
good over all "
good over all "
chapter 2 review
Esther*DragonLover*Andifyoudon't...illhavetomakeu!
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ok so far im in love with this!
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chapter 3 review
Katy (twilight_teen14)
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i like it but paul is supposed to say, "im her boyfriend" not his.
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chapter 5 review
Sunni the Dinosaur
said:
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Wow. Cris seems to like Justin...kinda a lot...sorta. Maybe she would tell him what's going on. But this is really good! Keep going!
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chapter 5 review
Christa (is a sleepy kitty...)
said:
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sweet! Keep writing I'm Sooo exicted to find out what happens next.
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chapter 5 review
Carly
said:
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!!! no! what just...?? Paul kissed her?!
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
chapter 6 review
Sunni the Dinosaur
said:
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I have a feeling Justin knows about the 'pretend dating' thing. Because he just tugged her away before she could say kissed in front of Faith. So, y...more
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chapter 8 review
Sunni the Dinosaur
said:
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That was great! I'm starting not to like Paul...at all. Justin's funny and nice(:
This is really good! Keep writing! "
This is really good! Keep writing! "
chapter 9 review
Sunni the Dinosaur
said:
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I still love it! It's great!
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
chapter 9 review
Carly
said:
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Are you crazy? Not like it??? It was awesome! Even with Mental Block and Wrmth Drainage! I love your writeing :]
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chapter 9 review
Esther*DragonLover*Andifyoudon't...illhavetomakeu!
said:
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awww its sooooo sad!!!:( but its still awsome! :)
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chapter 10 review
Sunni the Dinosaur
said:
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This is really good! Keep writing! I love love love it!
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chapter 10 review
Carly
said:
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Aw i love Justin :] hes so nice
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t...more "
Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t...more "
chapter 11 review
Sunni the Dinosaur
said:
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Whoa! Turnage in the story! This is really really good! Keep going!
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
chapter 12 review
Mrs Jones
said:
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awwww... my heart is totally breaking right now... poor Paul... this is such a good story... i wouldn't know what to do either... i mean, Faith is her...more
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chapter 12 review
Sharleen
said:
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OMG OMG OMG! lol
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
chapter 13 review
Carly
said:
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Done? Really?
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
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Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
chapter 13 review
Abbee
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NOOOOO!....r u going to be writing a second book? is faith going to become cris's friend again?
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chapter 13 review
Esther*DragonLover*Andifyoudon't...illhavetomakeu!
said:
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hey... question, are they in highschool or college??? because they act liek highschool but highschoolers dont have apartments... is it like a bording...more
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chapter 14 review
Sharleen
said:
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noo!! lol dont finish! lol write book2!! lol
dat was really good! "
dat was really good! "
chapter 14 review
Carly
said:
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Aww it's over... :( oh well, it was AWESOME singurl! I hope you do a sequel (can't spell lol) but if not, awesome!!!! Love your writing your soooo gre...more
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chapter 14 review
Mrs Jones
said:
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awww... it's over... I loved it... u shud so write a book 2... maybe about Paul and Cris finally getting together??? or maybe being best friends and s...more
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chapter 14 review
Esther*DragonLover*Andifyoudon't...illhavetomakeu!
said:
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ooooooooo i like it!!!!!
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