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Playing Pretend (My Boyfriend is Hers) -finished- - Best Friends by SiNgUrL

by SiNgUrL
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What would you not do for your best friend? Can there be a happy ending when a big part of your life started with playing pretend?

Criselda Vonner was a cheerleader in school and she was best friends with Faith Smith. Faith Smith's boyfriend was the hottest guy in school and the captain of the foorball team, Paul Whitman. With Trixie Layman, the cheerleading team captain, wanting to steal him away from her, Criselda had to do something and that was to pretend to be the new girlfriend of Paul atleast until Trixie got tired of stealing Paul away from her. The only problem was she was afraid because she knew that she already had a secret love for Paul since first year highschool even before he courted Faith.



chapters

chapter 1: Best Friends

chapter 2: Start of the Game

chapter 3: New Student

chapter 4: Justin Flanders

chapter 5: Unexpected Kiss

chapter 6: Deeper

chapter 7: Talk with Paul

chapter 8: Fight

chapter 9: Slip up

chapter 10: Telling Justin

chapter 11: Truth

chapter 12: Goodbye Letter

chapter 13: Getting on with Life

chapter 14: Friends


Best Friends
chapter 1   —   updated Jun 06, 2009   —   3944 characters   —   59 people liked this writing   —   46 reviews of this writing
"She won't stop, Cris. I'm afraid that she'll succeed in stealing Paul. You know I love him," Faith almost sobbed but she didn't.

They were in Faith's apartment and she was having another problem with Paul Whitman, her boyfriend. He was the school's hottest guy and the football captain of the "Scorpions", the school's football team. They were already together before sophomore graduation and they love each other though Faith still fears the possibilties that he'll be stolen from her since Trixie Layman, the cheerleading captain started flirting with Paul and trying to lure him to dump Faith and be with her instead.

Cris was best friends with Faith and she listened carefully to her sentiments though she was still hurt about it because she also loved Paul even before he courted Faith. But Faith never noticed Cris's true feelings for him.

"Cris! Are you listening?" she asked when she noticed Cris doodling something on the floor of her apartment.

"Yes, of course," Cris replied immediately and looked at her.

"So do you have any plan about getting rid of Trixie?" Cris asked.

"Well, you know getting rid of her is not that easy," Faith started thinking.

After a while of silence, Cris stood up and went to Faith's fridge to get a cup of ice cream and when she went back, Faith stared at her like she had already a brilliant plan in mind and something was telling her, she was a big part of it and she started to feel tensed.

"What?" but Faith just continued staring at her and that started to creep her out.

"Faith! You're creeping me out. Stop that!"

"I have a plan!" Faith declared.

"SO what's your brilliant plan?" Cris asked curiously as she put a spoonful of cold in her mouth.

"Well, Trixie is in the cheerleading team and she wouldn't dare go against anyone of her team mates, right?"

Cris was confused, she couldn't understand where she was going.

"So?" her brows met in confusion and curiosity.

She put another spoon of ice cream in my mouth.

"Cris, you're my best friend, right?"

"Of course I am and the point is?" Cris was getting more confused.

"You'll do anything for me, right? You'll be with me in this?" Faith said and Cris was getting more tensed. She was having a bad feeling about what Faith was about to ask her to do.

"But..."

"Please, Cris. I don't want to lose him. You know how much I love him," she was begging now.

Cris sighed and pitied her. She didn't have any other choice but to be with her in whatever her plan was.

"Fine," she finally said.

Faith leaped to her and hugged her but careful enough not to spill the ice cream on her floor.

"Thanks you very much, Cris," she smiled widely and with triumph.

"You're scaring me, Faith. Tell me the plan immediately so that I can start calming down," she said like she was in defeat.

"You'll be his new girlfriend," Faith said.

"What? Are you out of your mind, Faith Smith?" Cris was shocked.

"You'll just pretend for me. You already agreed in this already," she said and faith was taken aback.

"But you didn't tell me this will be an acting game. You know I'm not a good actress," Cris tried to escape from what Faith was planning.

"But Paul is. He can act for you and you'll just have to go with the flow," Faith continued.

Cris felt like she wanted to disappear that moment or go back in time and didn't agree to be in Faith's plans but she knew she couldn't.

"But you don't even know if Paul will agree with this. We're not that close, Faith," she tried another reason.

"Oh, but he will. I know him. He'll do anything for us to be still together," Faith was really convinced with her plan- that it was going to work.

Criselda felt defeated. She didn't know how it would go. She was afraid to act because it wouldn't be just an act for her. She didn't want Faith to notice how Cris really felt for Paul and that was going to be the biggest problem for her.
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Christa (is a sleepy kitty...) said:
" I like it so far. Crisedela's a pretty interesting name. "
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Annabel said:
" this is really good! "
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Carly said:
" cute, i like the plan but poor cris is going to be hurt and paul looks like he dumped faith for her friend...

good over all "
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~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" Good! "
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Esther*DragonLover*Andifyoudon't...illhavetomakeu! said:
" ok so far im in love with this! "
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Christa (is a sleepy kitty...) said:
" Omg, it is getting intense!!!! "
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Katy (twilight_teen14) said:
" i like it but paul is supposed to say, "im her boyfriend" not his. "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" Wow. Cris seems to like Justin...kinda a lot...sorta. Maybe she would tell him what's going on. But this is really good! Keep going! "
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chapter 5 review
Christa (is a sleepy kitty...) said:
" sweet! Keep writing I'm Sooo exicted to find out what happens next.
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Carly said:
" !!! no! what just...?? Paul kissed her?!
NO! Faith is going to be horrified... "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" I have a feeling Justin knows about the 'pretend dating' thing. Because he just tugged her away before she could say kissed in front of Faith. So, y...more "
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Annabel said:
" paul is sorta..... >.< "
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Mrs Jones said:
" write more... i love it... "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" That was great! I'm starting not to like Paul...at all. Justin's funny and nice(:

This is really good! Keep writing! "
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Carly said:
" O_O

he almost kissed her!!! whats up with paul?? "
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Abbee said:
" keep writing puh-leeze! "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" I still love it! It's great!

Don't worry. A story takes time, so you will get over the warmth drainage and mental block soon. "
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Carly said:
" Are you crazy? Not like it??? It was awesome! Even with Mental Block and Wrmth Drainage! I love your writeing :] "
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Esther*DragonLover*Andifyoudon't...illhavetomakeu! said:
" awww its sooooo sad!!!:( but its still awsome! :) "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" This is really good! Keep writing! I love love love it! "
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Carly said:
" Aw i love Justin :] hes so nice

Hey, I'll leave comments anytime to support the writer of my favorite story :] I know how it feels to get t...more "
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Abbee said:
" WOOO! u write really good. KEEP WRITING! =) "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" Whoa! Turnage in the story! This is really really good! Keep going!

I really want to know who Justin/Jay was and what he did before. "
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Mrs Jones said:
" SO GOOD!!!! "
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Carly said:
" wtf?! What... Jay?!? What did he DO?!?!?! "
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Abbee said:
" I LOVE IT! keep writing...! "
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Sharleen said:
" keep writing!!!!!! "
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Esther*DragonLover*Andifyoudon't...illhavetomakeu! said:
" awwwwwwww "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" That was soo sad! Keep writing! This is really good! "
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Jessamine said:
" NO!!! keep going! pleasepleasepleaseplease!! "
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Carly said:
" I dont care what his exscuse is! I still hate paul!! "
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Mrs Jones said:
" awwww... my heart is totally breaking right now... poor Paul... this is such a good story... i wouldn't know what to do either... i mean, Faith is her...more "
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Sharleen said:
" OMG OMG OMG! lol

please hurry and write more!!!! dis is soooo goood! hurry please! lol "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" Great! Great! Great! This is so good! "
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Carly said:
" Done? Really?

...

Sorry I hate endings *sigh* Oh well it was awesome while it lasted! "
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Abbee said:
" NOOOOO!....r u going to be writing a second book? is faith going to become cris's friend again? "
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Mrs Jones said:
" Poor Cris... shux... LOVE IT!!! "
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Esther*DragonLover*Andifyoudon't...illhavetomakeu! said:
" hey... question, are they in highschool or college??? because they act liek highschool but highschoolers dont have apartments... is it like a bording...more "
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Sharleen said:
" noo!! lol dont finish! lol write book2!! lol

dat was really good! "
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Carly said:
" Aww it's over... :( oh well, it was AWESOME singurl! I hope you do a sequel (can't spell lol) but if not, awesome!!!! Love your writing your soooo gre...more "
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Mrs Jones said:
" awww... it's over... I loved it... u shud so write a book 2... maybe about Paul and Cris finally getting together??? or maybe being best friends and s...more "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" *squeal* this is super good! Book 2! "
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Daisy said:
" cool i love that story. "
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Katy (twilight_teen14) said:
" it was kind of sad. "
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Esther*DragonLover*Andifyoudon't...illhavetomakeu! said:
" ooooooooo i like it!!!!! "
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Stevie said:
" It was funny.....at first I was skeptic(SORRY!!!) but i did enjoy it, very much....looking forward to the sequel......and don't worry, inspiration wil...more "
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