Renesmee - finished- - Tutoring by SiNgUrL

by SiNgUrL
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Edward and Bella Cullen's daughter Renesmee was growing older and she started taking notice of her real connection with Jacob as more than friends.She was getting used to talking rather that using her gift to show what she wanted. She thought it was better to talk than just showing what she wanted others to know because she felt more normal that way. She also had her own adventures in life and love and who said the volturi won't be coming back? Maybe they will.... Please leave a comment if you like it or not or any comments. (rough draft only)



chapters

chapter 1: Tutoring

chapter 2: Angry

chapter 3: Change of plans

chapter 4: Go away, Jacob

chapter 5: Denial

chapter 6: Maybe

chapter 7: Secured

chapter 8: Old Jealous Friend

chapter 9: My Jacob

chapter 10: Missing Jacob

chapter 12: Jacob

chapter 13: True Connection

chapter 14: Busted

chapter 15: Danger

chapter 16: My Hero

chapter 17: Grounded

chapter 18: Another Attacker

chapter 19: Reconciliation

chapter 20: Batteries

chapter 23: The other attacker

chapter 24: Visions

chapter 27: Three Visitors

chapter 28: Frozen

chapter 29: Rabbit

chapter 30: Forever


Tutoring
chapter 1   —   updated Jun 03, 2009   —   4033 characters   —   147 people liked this writing   —   95 reviews of this writing
I am 12 years old now but technically younger if you count the years I have lived since I was born. Mom and dad always explains to me that we are different from others that's why I can't go to school and I'm fine with that. Luckily, even if I don't have normal human friends, I still have my best friend. My playmate Jacob.

I have the gift to show people what I think and that's what I did when I was younger but now, I prefer talking because I feel more normal that way. Using and having supernatural gifts are really nice and cool but as I grow old, I prefer to use them olny when I needed. I have my mouth anyway. I'm far away from a normal human being so I just talk to make me feel better rather than touching someone to show me what I'm thinking or wanting to say..

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"Tutoring? Yeah, right Jacob." I chuckled. We were sitting on the old tree on First beach which he told me was where he and mom used to sit when I still wasn't born.

"Don't underestimate me, Nessie," he winced at me then looked down at what I was writing in the sand.

PROFESSOR JACOB BLAC

He immediately took my hand before I could write the "K". Then his breathing suddenly became uneven again. He was always like that when I catch him staring at me, when we're alone and quiet or when he touches me. And I really don't know why because when I ask him he just looks straight ahead away of me smiling like an idiot.

"Okay. Then who's the lucky student that you'll be tutoring?" I asked trying not to laugh.

"Someone from school."
"Offered to pay and I accepted. I need the money to fix the rabbit."

"Rabbit? Again?" It was his old car which I think needs to retire already though I really admire his work. It's his form of being artistic and I like riding in it even though it's not that fast. I prefer racing with him from our house to the clearing.

"I think the rabbit needs to..." and he cut me off before I could continue talking.

"Retire? No way, Nessie," he said and I was expecting that response.

"Sure, sure." I said. It was Jacob's famous expression which was already brushing off on me and Aunt Rose (Rosalie) told me not to say that in front of her. And when she says that, I try not to laugh because she really doesn't go along with Jacob and he also annoys her on purpose when he comes to our house which was often and they're just humurous acting childish like that.

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Jacob is a special person to me and I love him. He's my best friend anyway and he was always there when I needed him and even when I didn't need him. We were always together and we're inseparable. Dad, mom and Aunt Rose all didn't like it when he was spending the night at our house. Jacob and I really didn't like it when night time comes and we need to be on our own homes because that means he's away so sometimes he sneaks up to my room at night and spends the night there sleeping on the couch. At least we're close enough with one another. We were caught one time by Aunt Alice but she just smiled. She was cool with it and she was really cool. I love Aunt Alice and she loves it when Jacob is around. Jacob says I give her headache and he was the neutralizer so when he's around it's better for Aunt Alice.

Anyway, my room was my dad's old room. I also have my room in mom and dad's cottage but I prefer to be in Grandpa Carlisle's house because all the cool gadgets and the books I love to read were there. I have everything I want. They buy me everything and sometimes even if I don't ask them to, they just do. I don't like it when they spend their money to buy me things and gifts or when they prepare parties for me. I become all pouty and annoyed a week before a party is held and Jacob tells me I get that character from my mom. He said mom also didn't like gifts and parties or any special attention that others give to her. Well, she's my mom alright not that I doubt that or anything.

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Jack said:
" I thought Renesmee preferred showing thoughts with her gift rather than talking.
I've read quite a few other writings on this site with Renesmee…more "
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I love it! The whole idea of Jacob and Renesmee's Story is really cool, and it matches the story and style of Twilight.
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" This is awesome. I love this first chapter. I'm gonna read more. "
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Jazmyne Parks said:
" I LIKE IT. IT FOLLOW'S THE MOOD OF THE SAGA, AND TEACHES YOU MORE ABOUT NESSIE "
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" this is kinda cool. when i saw it i was like "oh god. i hate whn any1 writes about twilight fan fic" cuz i am obssessed and like everything …more "
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" MY GOD, that was amazing. I'm like a HUGE fan of the twilight saga. I wish I could write like you can.
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Carlesme said:
" Yeah, Renesmee prefers showing others what she thinks by using her gift. But I think you changed that because it was more convenient to just make her …more "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" I like it and I'm glad someone is writing bout nessie and jacob. "
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" I like the plot, it's interesting to someone like me who's read twilight, but this isn't great writing. It's very imaginative, and it is impressive th…more "
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Naomi said:
" This is really good. I've always been wondering what would happen between them.
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" This is awesome! Maybe it could be Nuhaul. You know, the guy half vampire. That'd be interesting(: "
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" Ugh, Vivien's evil. I read this AFTER you wrote ch16 so I know it's Nahuel I am SO glad you mentioned him I LOVE him. "
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" I can sympathize with the dillema Renesmee's in. But why would a vampire want to attack Tara? "
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" its really good just ine idea you might wanna change how she calles bella b/c in the book she calles bella mamma instead of eseme otherwise its really…more "
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" That sooooo adorable! THIS STORY IS GREAT!

I love Nessie and Jacob together(:
*chanting* WriteWriteWriteWriteWrite! "
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Jack said:
" sweet. But if Renesmee only LOOKS like a 13 year old, she must be actually just a few years. Unless it's the other way around: that she IS 13, and loo…more "
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" I'm glad you added this part. Jacob's POV has always been interesting. His were my favorite chapters in Breaking Dawn "
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*mumbles while getting louder* write write write wrITE WRTITE WRITE WRITE! "
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" Ahhh! I think I know! Is it Stephen and the other guy who hated the Volturi? They always finished each others sentences and stuff?

Reall…more "
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" I thought Tara died??? lol... or maybe she should?? lol... "
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Mrs Jones said:
" about time Tara gets the PICTURE!!! lol... gosh... she was irritating the hell out of me... lol... I LOVED IT though... "
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Sisi the Slayer of Evil said:
" ha ha haha! "Nessie! Tell your boyfriend I saw his twin on discovery channel!" Emmet shouted while still on the couch and laughed.
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Abbee said:
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" still kinda confused "
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Trixie said:
" Good! It's making the game! "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Ahhh! This is sooooooo good! I love it! Keep going! "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" This is really good! I love it! My favorite chapter is "My Hero". Haha, don't ask why, it just is. :) "
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Mrs Jones said:
" Loved it... Jacob is so beautiful... lol "
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spiritsandghosts...BOO!(Athena) said:
" omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg! this is super good writing!!! omg! you should finish it!! this is so good!! "
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Mrs Jones said:
" argh... i couldn't stop sreaming... I LOVED IT!!! especially the ring??? how cute... aw.. i love Jacob... "
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Naomi said:
" AWWW LOVE IT!! GREAT JOB!
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Abbee said:
" wonderful ending! loved it! "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" This is GREAT! You NEED a sequel to this! "
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Sharleen said:
" yay!!!!

best!! loved it!! "
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Eva said:
" My favorite chapter was #26 because alice is AWESOME1!!!!!!!! I thought that it what sort of disgusting when Renesmee said that she could feel Jacob p…more "
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Bella9Tink said:
" A very well thought story, except for the gross part. Blech.. How old exactly is Jacob? I haven't even read The Twilight Series. "
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Ana Lucia said:
" SO COOL!! I LOVE IT. "
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Tigerstarz said:
" THIS is So good!
I love the ending, it's so romantic!

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Stephanie said:
" Ahhhh, it was okay, the last chapter I'm still questioning. I have to say my faveorite chapter was probably Batteries. Hehe! "
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Christy said:
" Okay, I do agree with Jack and Carly, but OMG this is a great story! You are an amazing author!!! My only suggestion is that when you write, you shoul…more "
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spiritsandghosts...BOO!(Athena) said:
" I LOVE this last chapter! It's sooooo sweet!!! "
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Cielo said:
" This story was awesome. I loved it! "
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Trixie said:
" Good ending! "
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Reed said:
" LOVED IT YOU HAVE TOO WRITE MORE AND IT SHOULD START LIKE WHEN THEY TELL BELLA AND EDWARD AND HE SHOULD REACT KINDA LIKE CHARLIE DID "
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Christa said:
" Love IT! "
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