Saving Lives Isn't Easy -Finished- - Prologue by Carly

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(Warning: Finished BUT you can expect a few spelling mistakes it's a rough draft)
Dr. Jack is a doctor, an isolated and cold hearted doctor. He hasn't always been socially akward, at one time he was, at one time, a kind person.

One day, the isolated Dr. Jack gets a case that he cannot wrap his head around. He risks everything for this patient, including his job. As the paitent gets worse, Dr. Jack tries everything to save this dying patient.

As this is going on, Jack has to deal with his best friend falling for Emmy Collins, their boss. Even worse, he used to have feelings for her too. Sadly, as his boss and friend fall in love, his feelings for her begin resurface and he is left with a difficult choice...
Tell her he loves her and make his friend miserable or not tell her and suffer through the heartbreak as they fall deeper in love?

Save a patient, make a choice, and find love... All in a days work for Dr. Jack





chapters

chapter 1: Prologue

chapter 2: Memories

chapter 4: Irrational

chapter 8: Walking

chapter 9: Dinner--Emmy

chapter 10: Hospitalized

chapter 11: Surprise Feelings

chapter 12: What A Mistake--Emmy

chapter 13: Facing Monday--Emmy

chapter 14: Running Out Of Time

chapter 15: Diagnosis

chapter 18: Argument

chapter 19: Caught

chapter 20: Regrets--Emmy

chapter 21: Dreams--Emmy

chapter 24: Waking Up--Emmy

chapter 25: Testing--Jack

chapter 26: Too Late

chapter 28: Save Me

chapter 31: Shock--Jack

chapter 32: Heartache

chapter 33: Confessions

chapter 34: Fundraisers--Emmy

chapter 35: Sorry!!! A/N:

chapter 36: Trust--Ryan

chapter 37: Plans--Emmy

chapter 39: Helpless

chapter 40: Scared

chapter 41: White Roses

chapter 43: Speach--Emmy

chapter 44: Control-Jack

chapter 46: Revealed-Emmy

chapter 47: Teardrops--Jack

chapter 48: Sick EDIT: IMPORTANT

chapter 49: Fighting For Her Life

chapter 51: Gone Too Far

chapter 52: Almost Gone

chapter 53: One Last Chance-EDIT

chapter 54: Cure EDITED

chapter 55: A/N: fiction...

chapter 56: Going Home--Emmy

chapter 57: Finally Together

chapter 58: New Years (The End)

chapter 59: Epilogue


Prologue
chapter 1   —   updated Jun 03, 2009   —   612 characters   —   224 people liked this writing   —   109 reviews of this writing

"We're loseing him!!" they shouted as i ran down the hall to grab a crash cart.


I felt the world stop as the man's heart beat faltered and stopped. The machine let out a defening beep.

"Vtech!" they shouted, taking the paddels from my hands and shocking his heart.

The monitor showed a strait line, no pulse. He was dead. in a second my life had changed.


That was the first time i lost my patient...ever





A/N: So i decided to start this, hope you like it. I WILL ask for ideas!! soon<3

comments are love <3 tell me what you think



for amelia, because she helped me with this.
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I wonder what the baby is-a girl or a boy. "
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SiNgUrL said:
" yeah, it's always sad to end a story.

Now they're baby girl having a crush on Ryan is sooo cute!! :) "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Hmmm, I don't know. It's to hard to pick!!!

I really like the ending, though :) It's so cute. "
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Christy said:
" My favorite chapter has to be chapter 57 "finally together". "
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