~Liv~ Book 1 (this story is finished) - Seeing Brody by Music Lover ♥ Taylor Swift Fanatic ♥ HP Rox

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Liv has known Brody her whole life. They grew up together in the same school, same church, same neighborhood. They see eachother everyday at school. They know everything about eachother, but one thing Brody doesn't know is that Liv is in love with him. And she has been for years...
(this story is now finished)
Copyright 2009 Emily T.



chapters

chapter 1: Seeing Brody

chapter 2: The Weekend

chapter 3: Trent

chapter 4: Going Bowling

chapter 5: Trent's Note

chapter 6: My First Date

chapter 7: The Week After

chapter 8: Date Number Two

chapter 9: Mixed Feelings

chapter 10: Third Date

chapter 11: The Best Birthday

chapter 12: Surprise Dinner

chapter 13: The Perfect Dress

chapter 14: Kevin's Prom

chapter 15: Preparing For Prom


Seeing Brody
chapter 1   —   updated Jul 07, 2009   —   6472 characters   —   88 people liked this writing   —   75 reviews of this writing
I checked the time on my phone. 7:15, I thought. I was getting ready for another day at school. I sprayed hairspray one last time on my curly, black hair and headed towards the kitchen.
"Good morning, Liv," my mother greeted me. She was still in her bath robe with her hair in a towel and she was eating a fried egg.
"Hi mom," I replied sullenly. I was dreading going to school. There wasn't any big test or anything, I just hated school.
I poured myself a glass of orange juice and sat down at the table next to my mom. I lived in a large house with my mom, dad, and three siblings. Just then, my younger brother, Kevin, walked into the room. He was in the 11th grade and loved school. He had more friends then I thought was possible. He was the most popular kid in his grade. So naturally, he walks into the room excited to go to school. And somehow that annoyed me tremendously.
"Hey, Liv!" he said with his annoying grin, "What's the matter?"
"Gosh, Kevin, why must you bother me? You know I don't like going to school..."
"Hey, we only have a few months left," he answered kind've sadly.
"I know," I mumbled.
My dad walked into the room all dressed and ready for work. My younger sisters, Britta, and her twin, Cassie followed behind him. They were identical twins. They both had dark, stick straight red hair and blue/green eyes. Even though they were identical twins, they had very different personalities. Cassie was wearing a flowy tank top and a skirt with sandals and wore her hair down. She had shorter hair then Britta and she had beautiful sideswept bangs. Britta was wearing jeans and a t-shirt with black converse. She wore her hair in a high pony tail. They were were both in the 7th grade.
"Good morning, everybody," my dad said grabbing a cup of coffee.
"Good morning," everyone answered.
I got up, grabbed my Vera Bradley backpack and said, "Okay, well, I'm gonna go wait for the school bus. It should be here in five minutes."
I headed out the door with Kevin, Cassie, and Britta following me. Kevin and I waited for our bus to come while Britta and Cassie waited for their bus to come. When my bus arrived, I hopped on and spotted my friends almost immediately.
"Hi Lissa! Hi Jenne!" I greeted my friends. Lissa and Jenne have been my best friends since the beginning of highschool. Jenne has green eyes and really short, light brown hair. Lissa has shiny, long blonde hair and blue-gray eyes.
"Hey girl!" Jenne said. She noticed my surly expression and said softly, "Hey, today is Friday. Tomorrow there's no school. You, me, and Lissa can go to the mall or something."
I looked at her and smiled, "Sure. That sounds fun!"
We stopped a couple more times to let kids on and we arrived at the school at 7:55am. Just enough time to get to our classes, I thought. We got off and got to our classes just in time.
My first period class is English, which is my favorite subject. It was the only class I actually enjoyed throughout the day. My second period class is Biology, which isn't too bad. Geometry is my worst subject, but the teacher for that class is very patient and willing to help. So it makes that class a little easier to handle.
Finally, after my last class, I went to my locker. I was putting books back into my locker when I glanced to my right and saw him.
"Brody," I whispered breathlessly. He's been my best friend ever since I can remember. We grew up in the same neighborhood. We learned how to talk, ride a bike, and do Algebra together. We did everything together and we knew everything about eachother.
Well, not everything, I suppose. When I was 12, I started liking him. He was my first crush. Now, I'm 17 and I can't say I like him anymore. I love him. I'm IN LOVE with him. As I watched him, tears started welling up in my eyes. I quickly brushed them away before anyone saw.
I resumed putting books into my locker. I tried to ignore the lump in my throat. I don't know why I became sad every time I saw him. We were still the best of friends, but I don't think he'll ever want to be more than that. I wiped my eyes again. I closed my locker and walked out of the school to the school bus.
I arrived home in a crappy mood. I usually came home like that, but today it was worse. I didn't usually see him at school. We don't have any of the same classes, so we rarely see eachother. I hadn't seen him all week and the sight of him made me feel sad. I checked my email, got a snack, then settled down in my room to do my homework. I know, I know. I just got home from school, which I hate, but I don't like to leave homework till the last minute.
Cassie and Britta had already come home and were doing whatever. I didn't know. And Kevin had been on the same bus as me. He's probably working on some assignment that's due in like two months, I thought. I smiled a little. Sometimes Kevin was such a geek when it came to schoolwork. As soon as I finished my work, my mom pulled into our driveway. She came into the house all tired out from working.
"Hello, everyone!" She called. She put her purse down and poured herself a glass of lemonade. I walked into the room.
"Hi mom!" I greeted her, smiling.
"Hey, hon, how was school?" She asked.
"Oh, same as always," I said uninterested in talking about the most miserable hours of my day. Actually, it wasn't the same as always cuz I saw Brody. I hadn't talked to him or anything, but seeing him was the most exciting part of my day.
Kevin walked into the room. He was wearing his reading glasses which meant I was probably right about the assignment that's due in two months. He started talking to my mom about chemistry and how this reacts to this when you mix it and blah blah blah. I went back into my room and starting IMing my friends.
Hey Jenne, I typed.
Hi what's up?, she asked.
I saw Brody today. I saw him; he didn't see me, I typed back.
Well, are you ok, she asked. She and Lissa both knew that I was in love with Brody. They were the only two people in the world.
Yeah, I guess so, thanks for asking, I typed.
Later that night, I lay in my bed thinking what it'd be like to be Brody's girlfriend. I wouldn't want to do anything to destroy our friendship, but I loved him oh-so-much! I cried myself to sleep that night.
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Abbee said:
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" i like the story line! keep writing!!! "
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Olivia said:
" very good! "
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" awesome writing. i like the 1st person point of view! "
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Anna said:
" its really good!! "
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Anna said:
" Love it! And how do you do italics? It won't let me do it on here. "
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" I like it. "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" COOL! so much better than mine. good for a first chapter! very good! "
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Ruby! said:
" this is the best !!!!!! "
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♥Justin-Bieber♥ said:
" i didnt get to read it all but good so far i was at the part were she graves her vera bradley but mom made me get off - great so far ur a awesome writ...more "
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" It is very bravo... not badd.... "
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" meh.. "
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" chapter 2 is good too! "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" awww! her love for brody is so passionate! "
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Trixie said:
" Oh... oh... Terri Smith? Not Liv... Huh! Live is sooo unfair! "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" love it! "
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~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~ said:
" :) "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" trent, huh? is this a new love interest for liv, perhaps? "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" Ah. He likes her, perhaps? "
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Trixie said:
" Oh, ya... I take my words back! Okay, Life is unfair, but a climb. But I like how Trent 'step' into Liv world.... KEEP WRITING! "
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Hello said:
" this is great! "
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Anna said:
" Ah!!! I wonder what the note said! "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" ooh super duper good! "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" oh, so he is a new love interest! "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" Yeah, he definitely has a crush on her. "
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Trixie said:
" I like bowling when I was 8... Now, I'm 10... Hiks, I missed all the fun and misarable time I had... "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" ooh i thought her arguing with herself was funny ^^ "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" AH! AWESOME! so creative! and i LOVED the fight you liv had with herself! "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" Plz don't screw this up, Liv. Brody is a loser bcuz he doesn't like you. Trent does, and he's hot. Pick him, will u? "
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Trixie said:
" Oh... YEAH! I love this! "
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Naomi said:
" AMAZING.
-D.N.V "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" super cool :P "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" so great! liv like trent! trent likes liv! yipee! "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" Okay, a person arguing with themself is absolutely never a good thing! "
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Trixie said:
" Hm... First date... wonder how you picture is so great... "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" second date! second date! what is to become of this? "
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" :) "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" oh, she likes him! admit it, liv! admit it! "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" If she kepps having convos with herself, even if they'r ein her head, she might want to ask for help... =) "
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Trixie said:
" Debating with herself? She should go to Psikater. "
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Anna said:
" Sad!!! I'm not happy with Brody right now. =[

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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" awww. brodys an idiot for not liking liv, trents a smart dude. "
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Trixie said:
" Uh.. oh... Love never stops huh? "
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Anna said:
" AAAH! "
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Naomi said:
" You know i love this story and the conversations she has with herself are HILARIOUS.
-D.N.V "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" A KISS! A KISS! YEA! A KISS! OMG!!! I CANT GET OVER IT! THEY BELONG! THEY BELONG TOGETHER! "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" finally! "
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Trixie said:
" Wow... Life really goes on.. "
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Olivia said:
" Awesome! keep writing! "
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Anna said:
" Aww! Trent is growing on me. "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" Aawww!! "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" they kiss like every time they see eachother! i LOVE those relationships! "
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Trixie said:
" Whoa.... Enjoying birthday is fun...
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Anna said:
" Keep writing, or else. "
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RedPath ~Enna-girl~ said:
" Please keep writing!!!!!!! "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" aww! a family dinner! liv is always thinking of others, i love that about her! "
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Trixie said:
" ROCKIN'! "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" pretty cool dresses! "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" the perfect prom dress! every girls dream is to find the perfect prom dress! and liv found it! yea! "
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Trixie said:
" Shopping is FUN! Great thing! "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" XP "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" good for kevin! he has someone now, too! "
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Trixie said:
" Hm,a good thing to got a brother in ONE HOUSE! "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" oooohhhhh "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" PROM! ok, excuse me, need to read the next chapter! "
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Trixie said:
" WOW! "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" Aawwww that's cool. Gonna read the last chapter... "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" yea! liv had a happy prom! "
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Trixie said:
" Gotta roll, maidmosell. "
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Greek Ninjaful said:
" Aw that's so sweet! I loooovee your story! ^^ "
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Olivia said:
" THIS IS A GREAT STORY!!!!!! "
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Mrs. Del Rio *Rapunzel* ♪FFF♪ Music Lova said:
" awww! how sweet! "
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♥Jess♥ said:
" Um... okay. "
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" gud job! "
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" Good ending! "
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