I Love You, Dylan - Dylan by ~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~

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Note: When the chapter title is "Dylan" it's from Maia's POV. When the chapter title is "Maia" it's from Dylan's POV.



chapters

chapter 1: Dylan

chapter 2: Maia

chapter 3: Dylan

chapter 4: Maia

chapter 5: Dylan

chapter 6: Maia

chapter 7: Maia

chapter 9: Maia

chapter 10: Dylan

chapter 11: Maia

chapter 12: Dylan

chapter 13: Maia

chapter 14: Dylan

chapter 15: Maia

chapter 16: Dylan

chapter 17: Maia

chapter 18: Dylan

chapter 19: Maia

chapter 20: Dylan


Dylan
chapter 1   —   updated Apr 26, 2009   —   2625 characters   —   174 people liked this writing   —   145 reviews of this writing
He was so cute. So breathtakingly beautiful. Siiiiiiiggggggghhhhh. His brown hair shines in the light, and gently falls over his beautiful face. It slants, covering one eye, as his pale lips form a gorgeous smile. Siiiiiigggggghhhhh.

Dylan.
~*^*~
"Heads up!" he called, tossing the football to Brad.
"Yeah!" Brad screamed, holding the football in the air.
"Nice!" I grinned at Dylan, and Brad.
"Whoot!" Alexandra cried next to me, dancing.
I glanced over to Jessica and Alex, (he's a boy. Alexandra is the girl.) They gave me a thumbs up, and went back to talking.

"Get ready!" Brad aimed the football for Dylan.
"K, go!"
The ball instantly met air, and soared for Dylan. He jumped into the air, and caught it, falling back into the mud, soiling his jersey.
"Ha!" Alexandra laughed and pointed, as he crawled out from the mud. "Nice, dude!" Dylan shook the mud off, as Brad clutched his stomach.

We were outside of the church, playing ball, and hanging out. Jessica and Alex, sat on a blanket, talking. Alexandra, Brad, Dylan, and I, were all playing football for entertainment.

"Just toss the ball." Alexandra said to Dylan.
"Fine. Go long!"
Alexandra let her feet fly, as she ran for the ball. Dylan cackled as she fell face first into the ground.
"Thats not funny!" I glared at him, and ran for my friend. By Alex was faster.

He was by her side in an instant, rolling her over, and pulling the sod from between her teeth. Alexandra sputtered, and shook the dirt from her short, spiky, red hair. Dylan and I surrounded her, helping her get up. "Here, have some water." Jessica tossed the bottle to her.

"Thanks." Alexandra downed the whole thing.
"So, you still up to play?" I asked her.
"Yeah! Lets go!" she took off running towards the other end of the field. Brad shot the football.

I laughed. Leave it to Alexandra to get the game back going.
~*^*~
After a long afternoon of mud, football, and fun, Dylan walked me home.

"So, was it fun?"
"Yeah. You, and Brad, and Alex, and the girls, are extremely fun to hang with."
"Thanks." he grinned.
"So, hows the girlfriend?"
"Oh, Lillian? She's fine. Got second place in the volleyball tournement, you know."
"Ah. That's great."
"I know. I'm proud of her."
"I would be too."
Dylan smiled at me. "Your a pretty great girl too."
"Thanks." I smiled back, and he wrapped his arms around me, in a tight hug.
~*^*~
I'll admit it. I love Dylan. He is the greatest thing that happened to me. But, he's going out with Lillian Wrobie. He would never fall for a girl like me. We're best friends, though. And I know everything about him.
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1837918
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Toria said:
" Really good! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" Awesome beginning! "
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Gracie said:
" niceeee! cant wait 2 read more! "
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JustAnotherConverseLovinGurl said:
" Omg this is really good!!! Great beginning! "
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Anna said:
" Awesomeness! "
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Dylan said:
" I like the story so far a lot, also BTW thanks for writing about me, just kidding. I really like. Also, the Dylan person sounds kind of like me, I h…more "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" That was awesome! "
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Rrita said:
" i loved it "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" Great! but it sux that Dill is dating someone else. "
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Toria said:
" oh good second chapter too! :) "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" Wonderful! "
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Anna said:
" Love it! I like the alternating points of view. "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" I already love this! I cant believe I havent read this until now! "
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Nina !!! im the vampire girl!!! u jealous? said:
" BEAUTIFULLLLLLL "
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Ally said:
" I think I've always liked it when the boys narrarate better!
"
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" Not much going on there but good nonetheless "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" This is wonderfully paced! "
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JustAnotherConverseLovinGurl said:
" I love how u change the perspective every ohter chapter so we get to see what both people are thinking!! Very clever!! "
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Anna said:
" I FREAKING LOVE SPONGEBOB! Haha. You make me laugh. "
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Nina !!! im the vampire girl!!! u jealous? said:
" HAHA THAT WAS FUNNNIE "
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Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!! said:
" hehehe i saw that episode! yes if you didnt know that really was on spongebob once only spongebob didnt say it, some narater did "
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Ally said:
" lol to sponge bob! "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" This is really good!

Write more! "
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*darklight *always white and sometimes red said:
" i like it "
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♥Hima the Grape♥ said:
" coolish! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" Nice...
"Maia (curse her)?"
cool! "
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JustAnotherConverseLovinGurl said:
" I liked it but i was wondering y it said Maia (curse her) and also why it said lillian "loved him".
Yep but this part made me laugh:
…more "
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chapter 4 review
♫Krista♫ said:
" I love Dylans POV! "
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Ally said:
" hee hee hee! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" AWESOME PLOT! "
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JustAnotherConverseLovinGurl said:
" Nice ending to this chapter! "
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Anna said:
" I HATE LILLIAN!!!! Haha. "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Cat fight!!! =P "
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Ally said:
" **BURSTING OUT LAUGHING ABOUT LILLIAN ATTACKING** "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" Lillian is rude and if i was Dill i would've killed her already! Lol. "
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chapter 6 review
Toria said:
" Keep writing please!!!!!! "
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*darklight *always white and sometimes red said:
" Keep writing please
please!!!!!!
" "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" good, good, good! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" Cool, she admitted it! "
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JustAnotherConverseLovinGurl said:
" Ouch!
Lillians a b****.
Excuse my french
Dylans got some guts to stand up to his girlfriend like that! I like him. "
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Anna said:
" Aww! I love that! "I love you to the moon, Dylan. And I will forever." "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" OMGOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!! said:
" who said that? lilly or maia? "
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Ally said:
" oh wwwhhoooa wow...okay then.... "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" Did Maia say I love you or Lillian? I should kno but either one could've fainted. "
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Toria said:
" This is really really good! Keep it up! :) "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" Didn't she say that she loved him? "
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JustAnotherConverseLovinGurl said:
" I knew she was hiding something!!
Awww it reminds me of snow white.. or was that sleeping beauty?
Eh one of the two?
Your a great write…more "
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chapter 7 review
Anna said:
" Yes!!!!! Go Dylan! "
2010094
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Soooooo SWEET! "
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Katy (twilight_teen14) said:
" Aww this is good. luhv it. "
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Ally said:
" **sighs** oh my.... "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" Wow. Really good, intense-ish and I still hate lillian "
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chapter 8 review
ScreamSunshine said:
" This is great!
I am so excited to see what happens! (: "
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Sydney said:
" omg keep writing i need to know wat happens ooooooooooo this should be published!!!!!!!!! "
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*darklight *always white and sometimes red said:
" finish now
i love it "
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Kelsey said:
" you NEED to write more, you HAVE to write more it's a-m-a-z-i-n-g! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" Are you going to add more?
you better! "
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ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper said:
" you are SUCH a good writer!
please keep writing
wow, lillian must take boxing classes or somethin' to beat up maia so that she is half-dea…more "
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Anna said:
" Seriously, I hate Lillian. "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" wow. . . "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" If I was lillian i would've ran for it as soon as Dill was destracted. dumbass... "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Ahhh! This is so good! "
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Toria said:
" really good! :) "
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Mrs Jones said:
" OH EM GEE!!!! I loved it, PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I think i love Dylan... hehehehe... so great "
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Sharleen said:
" please continue!!!!!!!!

love it! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" cool!
I've been waiting forever for this! "
1964386
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ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper said:
" boxing class......heh-heh-heh "
2010094
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Awwww Maia!!!!!! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" Gah!! Too many phone calls!! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" funny in an odd way "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Its ok!
Again: Awww Maia! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" no prob! My post for lillians pov came out so wrong. She's the DA not u if u thought that was wat i was implying. Lol "
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Mrs Jones said:
" argh.... WRITE WRITE WRITE... hehehehe... So eager right now... shux Dylan is just the greatest "
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JustAnotherConverseLovinGurl said:
" Love love love love love this.
Keep writing!! dont stop now! "
2371903
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Sharleen said:
" come on keep writing lol

very good!! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" i am laughing sooo hard that i can barely type "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" love it!!!!!!!! one of my favorite stories of yours!!! "
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Ally said:
" :D ;) :D "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" Me 2 Dill. Me too... "
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chapter 12 review
JustAnotherConverseLovinGurl said:
" Yay u added more! "
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ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper said:
" awwwwww "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" love the ending of chapter 12!!!!! keep writing! "
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Anna said:
" Hahahaha. "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" i can tell that it is getting pretty good "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" hmm, hmmm, HMM??? "
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Ally said:
" oooooooooooooooooooooo! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" Yes Dill. How do u feel. (I feel like talking to the charies. I'll be there pyscho doc.) "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" nice! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" quick . . . but i still love it! "
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Ally said:
" yes! "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" i like it. keep writing! what i do, is that i write as many chapters as i need to, to make it go to a climax, that way readers can get as much as they…more "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" AHHHHHH! Go go go! Write Write Write! "
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Anna said:
" Ah!!! Write more please! "
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Renaynaynay! said:
" oh my god!! i love it! really good! :) "
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*darklight *always white and sometimes red said:
" i like it "
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Sarahbear said:
" PLEASE DONT STOP.PLEASE WRITE MORE.i loved it.it has that balance of romance like not too much but just enough. "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" wow "
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Kendra (Don't Stop Believin'!) said:
" I LOVED THIS~!!!! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Whats the depressing thing??????????????? "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Love it! Keep going! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" OHMYGOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOLY CRAP!!!!! I DIDNT SEE THAT!!!!!!!!! "
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Anna said:
" NOOOOOO!!!!! "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" aww... that's so sad! i love it, though... *sad face* "
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Toria said:
" oh! thats soo sad! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" OMG! I really think that he made a bad decision! "
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Gracie said:
" *GASP!* how could he? "
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Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!! said:
" awwwwwwwwwww "
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Ally said:
" oh my.....good grief! geez! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" O.M.G!!! U were supposed to say YES!!!! "
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chapter 16 review
ScreamSunshine said:
" NEED TO WRITE MORE! -It's a law (: "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" holy crap!!!!!!!!!!!! OH OH OH!!!!! NEED TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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Anna said:
" So... you should... WRITE MORE! "
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Chandini said:
" holy crap...dis is toooo good "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" awww! dylan is soo sweet! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" *speachless at the ending* "
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Ally said:
" yes! "
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Anna said:
" Go Dylan! "
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Kaylynn said:
" yes! finally! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW HOW SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" I LOVE DYLAN! he's sooo sweet! aww, it just makes me smile! i love it!!! =] "
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Toria said:
" eek! a kiss! lol "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" he just said that he didn't love her, then he did, then he couldn't, and then he does that! "
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♦♥Snow☺♥☺Storm♥♦ said:
" Read the whole thing, love it! "
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Ally said:
" YES! YOU DID IT! YAY! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" YAY!! Good boy Dill! ~pats his gorgeous head~ lol "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Amazing! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" soo sweet! "
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☻♥☻ Roxii ☻♥☻ said:
" I hate this soooo much! Not because it's bad, because i can't stop reading it! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" okay then.... "
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jennifer said:
" this was good!!! luv da story. "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" haha, ok "
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Gracie said:
" awww! i like this story!

ur a good writer!

btw....true story??? "
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Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!! said:
" wow reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllyyyyyyyy short "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" i wonder what happens "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Cool! Yayz cant wait to read it! "
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Gracie said:
" yay! i cant wait for the next one! "
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Renaynaynay! said:
" AHHHHHH!!!!!! this was so good!i cant even put it into words.
I cant wait for the sequel!!!WHOO! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" okay! "
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.:.Midnyte Song.:. said:
" uhh... ok. "
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Sophie said:
" this is cool.. what happened with lillian? "
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Ruby! said:
" nice!! XD "
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Trixie said:
" I REALLY LOVE IT A THOUSAND, MILLION, HUNDReD TIMES! "
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♫Huneeya♥ said:
" yay! me gonna read sequel now :D "
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" That was great! Now I have to read the sequel. "
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