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Growing Up With You - Present Time: Part 1 by Megan

by Megan
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A love story between two teenagers who have been best friends since they were two.



chapters

chapter 1: Present Time: Part 1

chapter 2: When We Were Five

chapter 3: Lucky Seven

chapter 4: Tough Being Nine

chapter 6: Unlucky Thirteen

chapter 7: Forever Fifteen

chapter 9: Years From Now


Present Time: Part 1
chapter 1   —   updated May 02, 2009   —   2347 characters   —   42 people liked this writing   —   28 reviews of this writing
Daniel's lips were soft against mine. It was routine now, the way his arms curled around my waist, the way my hands tangled in his brown curly hair. I loved him and I could tell at times like this that he loved me too. His lips followed along my jaw slowly. His eyes opened as he brought his face up to meet mine. A smile formed on his angelic face. I couldn't help but to laugh.

"I love you," he whispered against my collarbone.

"I love you, too." Heat coursed through my veins as his hands followed along my arms.

"Daniel, are you home?" Daniel's mom called from downstairs.

"Shit!" Daniel hissed as he slid off the bed. He grabbed my arm and pulled me with him. He fastened the few buttons on my shirt that he managed to get through. I laughed quietly.

"Coming!" He called as he opened the door.

I pulled my hair into a pony tail so that she wouldn't be able to see how messed up it was. We ran down the stairs quickly.

"Hi Mrs. Johnston," I said as I entered the kitchen, out of breath.

"Oh, Melanie I didn't know that you were here this afternoon. How are you?"

"Great, How was lunch with my mom?" I smiled sweetly. She and my mother were best friends and have been since I was about two.

"Oh, it was fabulous. Will you make sure your mother doesn't forget about our weekend plans?"

"Sure," I said. I glanced at Daniel. He was rocking on his heels, biting his lip. "Bye Daniel." His face snapped up to mine.

"Uh, I'll walk you to your car." Daniel took my hand and led me out the door.

Daniel eased up immediately once we were outside. His hand wasn't as rough against mine.

"She knows that we are together, why do you act so nervous?" I laughed as he leaned against my car door.

"Yeah, but does she know what she might walk in on after school?"

"Oh, it's not like we're doing things that she doesn't already know we're doing," I laughed.

"Either way," he said as he leaned forward, his lips touching mine.

"Daniel, get in the house! Why couldn't you just stay friends? It was much easier to allow her in your room!" She was standing in the doorway.

"I have to go," I whispered, pulling away.

"It was fun when we were little, wasn't it?" he laughed.

"Oh, you liked me the whole time,"I laughed.

"Yeah, but it's fun to remember," he whispered.

Yes, to remember......
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Emily♫ said:
" Yeah, you like writing romance don't cha? I get stuck everytime I try to add romance, so I just don't! LOL! "
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Elisha [taylor swifts n1 fan] said:
" i love it it rox. Keep on writting u rock. I liked it alot. I am desperate to find out what happends next how old r u piz tell me i gotta know i am t...more "
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Tiger said:
" that was really good "
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Leslie said:
" Very good. You don't much help i'll say. "
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Lizette said:
" i loved its sounds "real" something that can haapen in a relationship "
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Jordan liked it
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Abby said:
" brillant whats your seacret? "
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Lily said:
" It was great "
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" That was really good!
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Roxii said:
" I love it! "
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Sarah said:
" awesome :) "
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Elisha [taylor swifts n1 fan] said:
" i love it. U r so great at writting romace. keep writting if u were an authour i would todally buy ur book. JUst so u know i am a twelve year old i ...more "
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Tiger said:
" u r a good writer "
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Andrew said:
" shes 14. Im not a stocker, im her brother. =] great story megan, im on chapter 4! spend more time on this, i like it better. "
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Tiger said:
" good "
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go minnesota vikings!!! *leah saved by Jesus Chris said:
" omg thiz iz awesum!! "
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Gracie said:
" write more!!! "
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chapter 7 review
Jordan said:
" Okay, I have to admit it: Your idea may be one that ppl use a lot, but you express it so beautifully! Keep writing girl, you have got a gift! "
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Lily said:
" I loved it in some ways i could totally relate to the charachters u should write more!! im excited to see what else happens!! "
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chapter 9 review
Jordan said:
" Aww, how sweet! "Forever and Always", what a great present on top of it... "
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go minnesota vikings!!! *leah saved by Jesus Chris said:
" omg...i really like the 4ever and always thing "
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Amy said:
" That was really nice! :) "
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♫♪ Olivia ♪♫ said:
" that was great! i loved the ending.. i think there should have been a little bit more present time though.. but it was still fabulous "
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clara[iloveaaron:] said:
" This was amazing!! I loved the whole flashback idea. "
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sMiLeY!! said:
" Wow! It was beautiful. "
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Roxii said:
" I love it! "
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Aileen said:
" Aww!! i love it! =)
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Sunni the Dinosaur said:
" This was amazing. "
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Alicia said:
" omg i seriously teared up :] that was amazing, good job "
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