No Ordinary Love - Prologue by ~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~

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"No Ordinary Love" Is a song by TobyMac, a christian rapper. Here is a story, that just shares the title.



chapters

chapter 1: Prologue

chapter 3: Chapter 2~Surprise

chapter 11: Chapter 10~ The Hotel

chapter 12: Chapter 11~Home Again

chapter 13: Chapter 12~Jimmy

chapter 15: Chapter 14~Loss

chapter 17: Chapter 16~The Dream

chapter 26: Chapter 25~Epilogue


Prologue
chapter 1   —   updated Apr 19, 2009   —   2227 characters   —   138 people liked this writing   —   109 reviews of this writing
I climbed into the car next to him. "You ready baby?" he asked me, kissing my hair.
"Yep." I answered.
He backed out of the driveway, and we hit the road. We were going on our biweekly midnight learning trip. Jimmy wanted to be a professer at a university. We drove a few miles, out to the country.
"This is Amesnac Bridge," he was saying. Our car pulled onto the bridge. We were right in the middle of it when "CRACK!"

The concrete of the bridge, buckled beneath us, it split in two, and we went tumbling into the sloshing water below.

I rolled my window down, and crawled out of the sinking car. I kicked up to the surface of the river, and began to tread water.

"Jimmy!" I screamed, hoping he'd made it out of the car.
"Melissa!" I heard him far away. So he had escaped.
"Jimmy!"
"Melissa!" his voice got farther and farther away, I swam closer to it.
"Jimmy!?! Jimmy!" but this time, he didn't respond.
"I love you!" I hollered, but I knew he didn't hear me. I swam back to the car, and saw that it had sunk. I dived down, and swam back inside. I yanked out the picture of us from graduation, from the mirror, and swam back up.

Sirens lit up the cold black night, and myself, and others who had fallen in, were pulled from the murky depths. I waited at the shoreline until dawn hoping that Jimmy would be found. I had alerted the rescuers. Unfortunately, they came back empty handed. No Jimmy. He must have drowned.
"Go home, kid. Get some sleep. I'm sure he's in a better place now." one of the men said. Then, the rescuers left.

I prowled the water until dark, hoping, that Jimmy would swim up, and say he was alright. He didn't. "Why me, lord, why me?" I asked, as darkness fell over the city. The bridge was being repaired, and the car had drowned, all I had left of Jimmy was the picture. I clutched it tight.

In the picture, our blue robes were caressing out behind us, and we were laughing. My cap was half-way off my head, and Jimmy had his arm around my shoulders.

I looked at the ring on my finger. The ring with "Jim and Mel 4ever" carved along the band. My engagement ring. I was full of sadness.

So I did the only thing I could think of. I sat down on the sand, and cried.
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O L I V I A♥ said:
" Sad, but its kool, keep going "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" So far it is really great! The ending was amazing but the first part went to fast and got confusing. Maybe touch that part up a bit, but other than th…more "
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Tiger said:
" I thought it was good.The beginning was fast though "
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Meredith said:
" I t was OK I am not a big fan of this stuff, but it's well written! "
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" Wow! way good! "
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Rainrocks^o^(aka Breanna) said:
" Oh my gosh! so good!!:D "
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Kat said:
" awwwwww! "
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Dancing in the rain said:
" Owwwww, thats so sad "
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Toria said:
" OH! Keep writing! I want to know what happens!!!! xoxoxo! "
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O L I V I A♥ said:
" Wow... "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Your writing is great, very descriptive. "
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" cool "
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kaylajojo said:
" nice... "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" why would she just leave Jimmy in the bathroom??? i mean, come on, she LOVES him! that's stupid! i mean, it goes with the story, but that's not how it…more "
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Jessica said:
" I do not understand why Melissa told Dan that she had broken off the engagement with Jimmy to go out with him, when you said that you thought Jimmy wa…more "
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Kat said:
" eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper said:
" This is gooooooooood! i am so glad you didnt kill jimmy in the end. oh and by the way, i think you used the word slug more than nessasary "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" i like this chapter, it shows how guys can be such assholes and players! =] "
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♫♪ Olivia ♪♫ said:
" write more! i want to see how it works out between melissa and jimmy "
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Gracie said:
" ohmygoodness i didnt think anyone else knew this song! it is one of my alltime faves from TobyMac besides 'feelin so fly'.

btw, love the st…more "
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Kat said:
" wha--nevermind "
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Kat said:
" yay "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" soo fake! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" nice ending! "
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Kat said:
" !!!!!!!! "
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chapter 8 review
♫Krista♫ said:
" Oh gosh! That would drive me crazy, talking about ur ex, to ur girlfriend, espescially the making out part! "
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Kat said:
" ya "
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Toria said:
" AHH! Keep going please!! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Intresting, I wonder how Lezly will react... "
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Kat said:
" oh "
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chapter 10 review
♫Krista♫ said:
" Oh wow! Jimmy=Jerk. I feel sorry for Melissa. "
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♥Hima the Grape♥ said:
" Both Jimmy and Lezly are idiots! I feel horrible for Melissa. "
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chapter 11 review
Gracie said:
" Keep writing!!!! What happens?!?!? You have to keep going. "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" I really want to know what happens next! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" This is PHENOMENAL!!! "
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Toria said:
" OMG OMG OMG Please please keep writing! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" nice ending! "
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chapter 13 review
Gracie said:
" The suspense is killing me!!!! what is going to happen?!? please write more! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!! I feel sooooo sorry for Melissa. But great job, I love this story! "
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Trixie said:
" Sooo Sad!! "
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Gracie said:
" Getting better with each chapter! I never want this story to end! Its realy really good! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Cool! Maybe things are turning around for Melissa after all! "
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ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper said:
" this was a really good chapter!!! i suggest changing the chapters name because it kinda gives things away... ;) "
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Trixie said:
" SW33T! "
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chapter 15 review
Toria said:
" Ohhhhh. This is sooo sad. She's loosing all the people that cared about her! But ur writing is really good. I feel like I'm standing there next to …more "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Okay, I love your story, but (plz dont get mad at me) this chapter I did not like. Like there was really no emotion, espescially this part:

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Gracie said:
" *sniff* for both you mentioning me in your credits and *sniff* because the story has a bittersweet (hold the sweet) ending. i feel so terrible for Mel…more "
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Trixie said:
" sad!! "
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chapter 16 review
Gracie said:
" *gasp* yet another man? cooool! write more! thi is getting really good! sad, too, but in a good, read-it-and-weep sort of way. "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Great job! You redeeme yourself! But (okay another critisism, sorry!) Maybe she shouldnt have given Ben, her phone number......like heres just an idea…more "
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Chandini said:
" ohemghee! LOVE IT "
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Toria said:
" Another guy??? This is amazing! Nice job Maia!!! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" You have a great taste of romance, but I think that she's just going through boyfriends way to fast. No offense, but maybe you should make it more rel…more "
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Trixie said:
" Sweet! "
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Gracie said:
" wooooh getting better with each chapter! that was a very descriptive chapter too, very alive and a good use of imagery, as my English teacher would sa…more "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" OMG!!!!!!!! This was one of my favorite chapters!!!!!!! Great job!!! I love your writing so much!!!! Ahhh write more, plzzzz! Hurry!!!!!!! EEEEEEKKKKK…more "
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Toria said:
" Really good. This really leaves you hanging! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" You write such wonderful dreams.
I think that they add a great twist to the story. "
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Trixie said:
" HMHMHM... "
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chapter 18 review
♫Krista♫ said:
" The ending was awesome! Keep writing!!!!! "
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Gracie said:
" dont stop now! keep writing! "
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Toria said:
" whoa. dan's like really wierd. lol. really good tho! keep writing! "
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Trixie said:
" NICE! "
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chapter 19 review
♫Krista♫ said:
" Maia, KEEP WRITING!!!!! Im not even joking, if you stop there ill-ill well i dont know wat ill do...but keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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Gracie said:
" nooooooooooo maia you have to keep writing! keep going! its so good and yeah it would be fine if you stopped here, but you definately should keep goin…more "
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♫♪ Olivia ♪♫ said:
" keep writing! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" NO!!!
Don't tell us your ideas, keep them to yourself so that you don't ruin it! Keep writing! "
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Allie said:
" luv it keep writing "
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ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper said:
" MAIA!!!!!!!
KEEP FREAKIN' WRITING!!!!
THIS STORY IS SO EMOTIONALLY-DEEP I STARTED SOBBING WHEN SHE STARTED CRYING!!!!!!! "
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Toria said:
" Poor Melissa either has to find a nice guy that actually stays with her or she needs to die too and go to heaven with all the guys that left her...and…more "
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Megan said:
" She can't just die! Is that the end?? "
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Gracie said:
" omgee-ness!

whoa. this is a good chapter, although it is a bit...i dont know, quick. but still, it rocks.

keep writing! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" OMG!!!!!!!!!! I hate her!!!!!! Oh, wats going to happen to Melissa?????? Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!! And hurry!!!!!!! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" OMG!!!
"She hit me head on..."
this is awwesome!!!!!!!!!! "
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Trixie said:
" COOL! "
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chapter 21 review
♫Krista♫ said:
" WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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Toria said:
" OMG!!!! Is this the end??! You are an amazing author!!!! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" nice twist:
"Ben" "
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chapter 22 review
♫Krista♫ said:
" NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! She cant die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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Toria said:
" Oh! Thats sad...only a few days left? :( "
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*darklight *always white and sometimes red said:
" i like it "
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Nayah said:
" Keep writing! This is really good :D "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" you are really going to kill her off!!!!!!!?????????????? "
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Trixie said:
" COOLLLL AND SAD! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" I can't wait for the next chapter! "
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ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper said:
" YOU ABSOLUTELY HAVE TO KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
although i do wish you wont make her die "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Woa.....I dont want her to die!
Holy crap!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more now!!!!!!!!! "
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ThatStalkerGirlBehindYouWhoIsAlsoACreeper said:
" keep keep keep keep keep WRITING!!!!!!! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" OMG!!!
I've been waiting for this chapter for nearly a month now, and it was sooooo worth it! "
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Sharleen said:
" Really?? all that crap she went through and then shes gona die??? well dat sucks!!!

Neway please dont stop writing i want to know wat happe…more "
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Nina !!! im the vampire girl!!! u jealous? said:
" o my god that was amazing!!!!!!!! keep going! please!!!!!!! o my god i loved that sooooooooooo much :) "
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jennifer said:
" OMG!!!!!!!!! PLZ WRITE LOADS MORE!!! and if you write more, dont let her die and let her marry ben... "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" write!!!!! "
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Gracie said:
" awwww! snifff! "
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Gracie said:
" haha you gave me the right reaction...

well! she lives. goodyyyy!!! does she get married? have kids? go back to work? have a long and happy…more "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Haha you took the words right out of my mouth. I'm a little curious, what was so out of order you couldnt post it?
And YAYZ! SHE LIVES!!!!!!!! "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" i knew it! and what do you mean: Melissa said so herself not to share the story? i thought she wasn't real...? "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" how'd you know?
but my mom was in the shower, and i was starting to laugh like crazy, and so she really did think there was something wrong wi…more "
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Vina *TEAM PEETA & NEW HP FAN* said:
" LOVED STORY!! "
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Toria said:
" haha. i like the end! lol "
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chapter 26 review
Toria said:
" really like the ending. good job on the whole story! :) "
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♥♥maddie♥♥ said:
" aww... thats so sad! "
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Isabel- Percabeth 4eva! said:
" that's so sweet and sad! i am crying now "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" BEAUTIFUL! Im teary-eyed! Great job, was absolutly wonderful! "
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Trixie said:
" SOO SAD! BUT, I LOVE IT! "
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Nina !!! im the vampire girl!!! u jealous? said:
" sooooo sad! but that was really good u u are an amazing auther that is one of the best stories i have ever read. "
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Mahalia said:
" LOVED IT :D "
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♦♥Snow☺♥☺Storm♥♦ said:
" Aaaw did it really have to end now? Why can't it be longer? Pweeeeasssse?! "
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