Reality - Prologue by Jenny Q

by Jenny Q
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Simmons & Craigs: Series for Illusion~(not yet written.)
[contains profanity/swear words. be warned.]
Two children's parents abandon them to spend their tenth anniversary off on a Canada exploration for five years, Andrea and Jeremy becoming orphans only to gain strong insightful powers discovered on Earth many years ago. Triggered from deep in their souls, the power brought forth what none has believed to be a reality. Due to those circumstances, their situation pulls the family apart and united again at the most unexpected of times. The weight of certain secrets, however, brought more the brunt of danger in their midst. To secure their protection, the Simmons and Craigs families have teamed together against unknown harm, with Andrea Simmons, a fifteen-year-old girl, as the targeted victim and Brandon Craigs, an eighteen-year-old boy, as the "bodyguard" of said victim.



chapters

chapter 1: Prologue

chapter 2: Return

chapter 3: Past

chapter 4: Party

chapter 5: Truth

chapter 6: Caution

chapter 7: Danger


Prologue
chapter 1   —   updated Jul 29, 2009   —   2147 characters   —   17 people liked this writing   —   12 reviews of this writing
Before she could flick the lights on, she was pushed forward. Someone shut the door and the room was left in darkness. She couldn’t even begin to think what had just happened when the lights turned on. At first, she couldn’t see clearly and thought it might have been her imagination. But when she let her searching eyes lie on the kitchen doorway, her brother was grinning at her.
It’s been ten years since they last saw each other, and he plays a trick on her!
“Jeremy!” She gaped at him in surprise.
“I’m back, sister,” He said.
She noticed immediately that he had a new sinister aura around him. Then he frowned and lunged for her.
She woke up panting, and bolted upright in a sitting position with shock. Realizing that it was a dream, she looked at her bedside clock and read 5:30 AM.
For five minutes, she just sat there in silence and remained in deep thought as she finally prepared herself for the usual morning orphanage routine. She would need to bring her book with her after brushing her teeth and combing her hair. For half an hour, everyone would just read in the living area as breakfast was being readied. But today she wasn’t in the mood.
She walked downstairs into her brother’s old bedroom that was still vacant and looked at what she had always seen when she first came in: his mirror. The reflection wasn’t of her, but of him. She was completely sure that her brother was dead. Why would she dream and daydream about him all of a sudden, see him appear so real?
A scraping noise of the door being closed startled her. She looked behind her and there he was again, his mouth pulled into that same grin in the dream. She did not want to see what would happen next.
However, instead of jumping at her, he suddenly brought her in a tight hug and had the door open at the same time. Two adults came in, one a woman and the other a man. These weren’t married couples who were coming to adopt her. They were here to take her back, as their biological daughter… And all she was able to do was hold onto her brother while pouring out all the locked emotions she held inside into a long needed weep.
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