The Beavers of Valley Forge - Prologue by ♪ Lavi ♪ B.D.
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Six wandering beavers intent on building a dam have just arrived at Valley Forge Park. They think it's simple... just build the dam, right? Wrong. They didn't count on magical hills and a host of various animals, some more hostile than others. That seems to be simple. But then a shadow washes over the forest...
With the loss of one, the whole forest is thrown into chaos. As more and more dissapear, the animals lurch into a mission to rescue their companions.
But again and again, not all is as simple as it seems to be.
chapters
chapter 1:
Prologue
chapter 2:
Lists, Lists, and More Lists
chapter 3:
The Library
Prologue
chapter 1
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Prologue
A New Home
It was a cold, foggy early spring night and not a living soul was awake except for six wandering beavers creeping along a dark highway. These beavers were considered nomads, as they had never lived in an area for longer than a year. Their names were Boss, their leader, and O’Wisey, O’Strengthy, O’Smiley, O’Lazy, and O’Worky. O’Lazy was extremely lazy, but he was allowed to stay only because he was good at tracking down and gathering food. O’Smiley was also lazy, but with his smile he could beguile any enemies that crossed the beavers’ path. O’Wisey was the mastermind behind all the construction work the beavers performed and O’Worky worked tirelessly on projects. O’Strengthy could handle the heaviest logs and branches. Together, they were a team.
This night they were on a quest. O’Wisey had heard of Valley Forge Park and had persuaded Boss to allow them to move to the park. Now they crept along the highway when O’Smiley saw a sign. “Hey let’s go look! Maybe we’re there!” The beavers snuck across the road and scuttled over to the sign. Smiley stared up and read, “Va… Valley Forge Nation… National Historical Park. Whoopeee!!!!! We’re there, guys!”
However, Boss wasn’t so excited. “Look at the trees, bro, aren’t ya hungry? Aim famished!” That was true, as the last food they had eaten had been early in the morning. So each of the beavers chose a tree and nestled at the base. Using their sharp teeth, they nipped off pieces of bark and munched. For a few minutes, all that could be heard was the sound of crunching. Then, Boss stated in a sleepy voice, “Don’t know about y’all, but aim goin’ ter nod off till morning.”
The last thing the beavers remembered before they drifted off was moonlight in their furry faces.
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A New Home
It was a cold, foggy early spring night and not a living soul was awake except for six wandering beavers creeping along a dark highway. These beavers were considered nomads, as they had never lived in an area for longer than a year. Their names were Boss, their leader, and O’Wisey, O’Strengthy, O’Smiley, O’Lazy, and O’Worky. O’Lazy was extremely lazy, but he was allowed to stay only because he was good at tracking down and gathering food. O’Smiley was also lazy, but with his smile he could beguile any enemies that crossed the beavers’ path. O’Wisey was the mastermind behind all the construction work the beavers performed and O’Worky worked tirelessly on projects. O’Strengthy could handle the heaviest logs and branches. Together, they were a team.
This night they were on a quest. O’Wisey had heard of Valley Forge Park and had persuaded Boss to allow them to move to the park. Now they crept along the highway when O’Smiley saw a sign. “Hey let’s go look! Maybe we’re there!” The beavers snuck across the road and scuttled over to the sign. Smiley stared up and read, “Va… Valley Forge Nation… National Historical Park. Whoopeee!!!!! We’re there, guys!”
However, Boss wasn’t so excited. “Look at the trees, bro, aren’t ya hungry? Aim famished!” That was true, as the last food they had eaten had been early in the morning. So each of the beavers chose a tree and nestled at the base. Using their sharp teeth, they nipped off pieces of bark and munched. For a few minutes, all that could be heard was the sound of crunching. Then, Boss stated in a sleepy voice, “Don’t know about y’all, but aim goin’ ter nod off till morning.”
The last thing the beavers remembered before they drifted off was moonlight in their furry faces.
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chapter 1 review
Kristen
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It was good. I like beavers.
CJIV says that beavers are yummy. Sometimes he mixes things up by steam broiling them. "
CJIV says that beavers are yummy. Sometimes he mixes things up by steam broiling them. "
chapter 1 review
Kaouthar
said:
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Hey Lavi,
This is pretty good. who knew you were a writer. Good Job! "
This is pretty good. who knew you were a writer. Good Job! "
chapter 1 review
Chase
said:
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Lavi, I have never read that much about beavers. Because of you book I don't intend to. You spend to much time describing the characters and their fee...more
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chapter 2 review
♫Shyam♫☺☺☺☻☻☻♥♥♥♦♦♦
said:
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I have to say, Lavi, that wasn't half bad. Kudos to you for writing this! (although there was relly no purpose to write about beavers...)
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chapter 3 review
Helen
said:
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good job writing all this so far!! but the names are a little odd... are you stealing sophie's exclimations? they sound oddly sophie-ish
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