Don't Get Caught - Escape by ♫Krista♫
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Don't get caught, is the only thing that runs through your mind, when entering enemy territory.
*Authors Note: I have completed the first chapter for the sequel! Ill be posting the link here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4328...
chapters
chapter 1:
Escape
chapter 2:
Diversion
chapter 3:
Gone
chapter 4:
Explaining
chapter 5:
Letters
chapter 6:
Traitor
chapter 7:
Friends
chapter 8:
Ocean 23
chapter 9:
Not Again
chapter 10:
Silence
chapter 11:
Alive
chapter 12:
Forever
chapter 13:
Together
chapter 14:
EXTRA: The characters
chapter 15:
Epilogue
Escape
chapter 1
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updated Apr 17, 2009
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"Listen," He said in a hushed voice.
I put my ear closer to the door, I could only hear the faint murmer of the enemy.
"Nothing, it's just non-sense to me,"
He frowned, "Cassie, try putting two and two together, now quiet or they'll hear us."
Again I put my ear closer to the door, I put all of my energy in trying to hear what they were saying. It was hard, but then I was able to pick up words like, 'destroy' and 'kill.' But the scariest one was, 'spies.' I leaned in closer, and was able to make out one sentence.
"Behind the door."
I gasped. Immediatly I rose from the ground, and grabbed Aaron by the collar, "We have to go!"
Aaron and I ran through the halls hoping that no guards were on duty. My heart was pounding and beads of sweat began to form on my forehead. Then we came to a dead end.
"Just great," I growled.
Aaron started looking around.
"Up!" He said in an impatient tone.
"Whatever you say."
There was a vent above our heads. I gave him a boost and quickly he unscrewed our only escape.
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I put my ear closer to the door, I could only hear the faint murmer of the enemy.
"Nothing, it's just non-sense to me,"
He frowned, "Cassie, try putting two and two together, now quiet or they'll hear us."
Again I put my ear closer to the door, I put all of my energy in trying to hear what they were saying. It was hard, but then I was able to pick up words like, 'destroy' and 'kill.' But the scariest one was, 'spies.' I leaned in closer, and was able to make out one sentence.
"Behind the door."
I gasped. Immediatly I rose from the ground, and grabbed Aaron by the collar, "We have to go!"
Aaron and I ran through the halls hoping that no guards were on duty. My heart was pounding and beads of sweat began to form on my forehead. Then we came to a dead end.
"Just great," I growled.
Aaron started looking around.
"Up!" He said in an impatient tone.
"Whatever you say."
There was a vent above our heads. I gave him a boost and quickly he unscrewed our only escape.
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chapter 1 review
Kyle
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I wonder where they are? The first few paragraphs already get your attention and your blood pumping, very good!
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chapter 1 review
Kevis
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Very suspenseful way to start a book. You've caught my interest, that's for sure.
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chapter 2 review
Katherine
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Pretty good.
I have to let you know that 'through' should be threw. I'm a spelling nazi. "
I have to let you know that 'through' should be threw. I'm a spelling nazi. "
chapter 3 review
♥κДτϊε βэαη♥
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I like it but i dont get it....... you need to tell us more about whats happening. Im hanging by a thread of 'enemy'(who is the enemy)! Tell us more!!
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chapter 4 review
♥κДτϊε βэαη♥
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Thank you for explaining! Now i can fully say.............I LOVED IT!
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chapter 4 review
Kevis
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I love the character names. Dr. Gerold Mongo and James Sinn especially. What's great to know is that this story feels like it is going somewhere and n…more
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chapter 4 review
Sassy
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Ooh, I think I know where this is going. She's going back the base, I bet.
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chapter 5 review
Amanda
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Good stuff! I enjoyed reading, keep it coming. You're a goo writer. <3
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chapter 5 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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cassie,huh? :P this is great, I love it!
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chapter 5 review
Kevis
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Krista,
Your story really has intrigued me. Every chapter ends on something of a cliffhanger. It's impossible for me to do anything else unti…more "
Your story really has intrigued me. Every chapter ends on something of a cliffhanger. It's impossible for me to do anything else unti…more "
chapter 6 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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AWW!! Patrick is my hero!!! yaya!! :D and how dare Aaron?! lol!
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chapter 8 review
Kevis
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This story reads a lot like a screenplay. It's heavy on dialogue and light on exposition. But it works surprisingly well for this kind of story. I am …more
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chapter 9 review
♥κДτϊε βэαη♥
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Gosh i feel so bad for Cassie, I NEED to know if Pat is like Aaron, TELL TELL TELL!
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chapter 10 review
Annie
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Love 2 read! I suggestion though. I would use more describing and voice.
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chapter 10 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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its really short but i love the end
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chapter 11 review
♥κДτϊε βэαη♥
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ugh Pats a JERK!! AHH i hate guys like that. even in books.
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chapter 11 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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...if I were cassie, my thoughts would NOT be 'g' rated right now...
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chapter 11 review
Sassy
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Dang. Betrayels all around. Will it ever end? But that makes the story good. I like it.
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chapter 12 review
Sarah
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u definatly need 2 write another chapter!!!! i love this story!! :)
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chapter 12 review
~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~
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Ok, Krista. This is amazing you absolutely have to rite more. Love it!!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 12 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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WHAT THE W?!?!?! Aaron! holy cow! *slaps face* ...well, I feel sheepish...LOL! :D
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chapter 12 review
Sassy
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OH MY GOSH!!!!! THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING!!!!! Wow, wow, wow, I LOVED it. Wow.
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chapter 13 review
~Maia~The Jesus Freak~Lover of Books~
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Ok, no offense, and plz dn't ht me, but......
This was kinda a quick ending, and I didn't really like it. "We love you Cas, you are ou…more "
This was kinda a quick ending, and I didn't really like it. "We love you Cas, you are ou…more "
chapter 13 review
♥κДτϊε βэαη♥
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I COMPLETLY ADN UTTERLY ADORE THIS BOOK!!! you should add more so that you could get it published, like why had Aaron sent the folder telling Cassie t…more
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chapter 13 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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wait... is Aaron a traiter or not?
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chapter 13 review
Nina !!! im the vampire girl!!! u jealous?
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the begining really caught my attention wow really good!
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chapter 13 review
Aly ♫SOCCER GOALIE♫SOFTBALL CATCHER♫
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okay, sorry that i didn't comment on every chapter, but I LOVED THIS!!! OMG OMG OMG!!!
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chapter 13 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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aww!!!happy endings!!! LOVE 'EM! Great job Krista, this was so much fun to read!
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chapter 13 review
Kevis
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Wonderful story! Kept my interest all the way through. You did a great job, Krista. Looking forward to reading more of your excellent writing.
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chapter 13 review
Joy
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this was awesome!!!!!!!!! i liked...i mean loved the whole thing!!!!!!
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chapter 14 review
Sarah
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I absolutly love these pictures!! they r awesome!! but how come u never get to see Aaron's face?
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chapter 14 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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the first and secound one are sooo cute!
you used a good pic for Aaron "
you used a good pic for Aaron "
chapter 14 review
call me crazy and be done with it.
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This is a really good idea to add pictures of the characters!!!:D
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chapter 15 review
Musical♥Writer
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I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz write more! Lean the other way!
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chapter 15 review
♥κДτϊε βэαη♥
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Krista! this is awsome! write book two! im sure everyone agrees with me!
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chapter 15 review
Phoenix loves the Phantom of the Opera
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This is great! This could definitely lead into a book two!
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chapter 15 review
Siareen
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DO BOOK 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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chapter 15 review
SylverSkye
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This is very well written! I only wish the chapters and the story in general were longer. I loved how fast-paced the story was!
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chapter 15 review
Esther GIRL WITH MAD NINJA SKILLS!! HIYA!!
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i like how you added 'maybe...' it's kinda mysterious and gives a hint that theres a sequel.
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chapter 15 review
Kyle
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I wish we could give things a star out of star rating on goodreads. But anyways 5 out of 5 xD loved it. It never ceases to stop thrilling me, and yet …more
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