The two traveled home on the plane, and it seemed to pass extremly fast. Then, finally, they were home. It was a comfort after all the havoic, to be somewhere familiar. They went into the house, scared about everything that they were going to get a lecture on. The buying of plane tickets, going to a forign country, ect. But surprisingly, there were her parents, Robbie's parents, Kaylee and even Jeremy. They were all smiling like crazy and that made Sophie wonder.
~~~MOM!? DAD?! What are you doing here? HOW did you get here?!"
~~~Robbie's mouth was wide as a goldfishes as he wondered the same things.
~~~"Well, sit down and we can explain." Sophie's father explained. To her, it felt like extreme dezjua-vu. Like when she had first figured out she was moving here, she figured she was going to be shocked all over again.
~~~"OK? What is all this about? If it is about what we did, I'm sorry...."
~~~But her Robbie's mother stopped her mid-way as she said, "No, it's not that. Your parents still can't really take care of you yet Sophie. So..... you have to stay with us for a while..."
~~~Sophie now matched Robbie's face and said, "WHAT?! Really! Here? I have to stay here, for how long?!"
~~~Sophie's mother cleared her throat and said awkwardly, "A year or two."
~~~Robbie turned to Sophie and looking at eachother, they both knew that everything was going to continue, perfectly.
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HEY PEOPLE!!! THAT IS MY LAST CHAPTER!!!!! MY NEXT BOOK(#2) IS CALLED FRAGILE!!!!!!!!!! HOPED YOU LIKED IT!!

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