Sophie decided, she couldn't be mad any more. She had to do something, and not just sit there idly waiting for a miracle to happen. She was going to go to where ever her father was, and her mom. She picked up the now sleeping Kaylee and took her into her room to put her in bed. Even Robbie had fallen asleep and started to stir.
"What..what time is it? Sophie whats wrong?" Robbie asked drowsily as he sat up from the comfortable couch.

"Well.." she started, "I feel like I really need to do something. You know, like visting my parents in Puru." She watched as Robbie's already red face turned a ghoulish white.

"No. Just no, that will not happen. You aren't going. I don't care if I have to chain you down, you can't go! It is way to dangerous and do you even KNOW how much crime there is in Puru?! NO."

"Well, if you don't want me to go alone, try going WITH ME genius!" Sophie huffed. She couldn't understand why Robbie didn't want her to go.

"You know what, FINE! I will go with you! You obviously can't go alone,you need SOMEONE!"

Sophie gasped and said, "Who said I NEEDED someone!? I am perfectly capable of going alone! YOU were the one who said I shouldn't go alone!"

Robbie started to open his mouth, but let it close again. Instead, he rushed over to Sophie and wrapped her in a bear hug.

"I'm sorry." They said at the same time. Then they both laughed and pulled away.

"Well, Puru it is then." Robbie sighed.

"Exactly." Sophie said.

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Demi said:

" haha, strawberry. btw, i thought robby is spelled robby, not robbie!? "

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" Is Kelsey based on Kelsey? She probably wont be to happy about that! And if she is, who am I? And are you sophie?
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" so, sophie is going out with jake, to make robbie jealous?? "

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" Still love it! But grrr I dont like Strawberry very much! "

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" I really don't like STRAWBERRY. She is a stupid numbskull and she needs to back off and grow a brain! "

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" OMGosh! wow way to go Sophie! I love that name! That is way cool I would never be able to do that! that is so cool! "

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" love it! Go sophie! "

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" write more write more! There are a few issues with it, like when they talk? yeah, those should be new paragraphs. but it's good, keep going. "

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Hope said:

" Oh no! a couple spelling mistakes but nothing else really. Oh no what are her parents going to do!? "

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" Hmm, whats going to happen next? "

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" uh oh what happens???
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" loved it even though it was terribly sad and only a few mistakes! "

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" Peru is spelled wrong every time in this story "

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" go Robbie! "

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♫Krista♫ said:

" Whoa!!!!!!! Go Robbie, he is sooo sweet! "

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" i liked that. i wish that could happen in real life. "

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" GREAT STORY...WHERE IS THE REST???? "

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" Sooooo Goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "

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" OH! SWEET! "

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" Awww sooo sweet! I love this story! "

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Musical♥Writer said:

" More More MOr! I fobid you to stop! Write a second book if you think its getting to long! Its soooooo goood! And if you do stop I will bug u about it ...more "

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Hope said:

" the hurt can't be over... she still has to be upset over her father right... i would be "

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" Robbie and Sophie r sooo cute together! "

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" Loved it!
Can't wait for the next book! "

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" YAY!!!good job!!! luv the finale! "

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