Never Crossed My Mind - Is it bad or good? (chapter 2) by Rainrocks^o^(aka Breanna)

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A girls parents have left on a trip and none of her family can watch her.... but her crushes family can.



chapters

chapter 2: Is it bad or good?

chapter 6: Friends and Foes

chapter 9: Ticked

chapter 10: Double Trouble

chapter 13: Evil Plotting

chapter 14: Brandy and Michal

chapter 15: Lunch

chapter 16: Taking The Stand

chapter 17: World War III

chapter 18: Clash

chapter 19: Discovered, (perhaps)

chapter 20: Call

chapter 21: What and Why?

chapter 22: A Set Mind And Heart

chapter 23: Plan

chapter 24: Airport

chapter 25: Peru

chapter 26: There

chapter 27: More Than Words

chapter 28: Enemy No Longer

chapter 29: HERE? (Final Chapter)

chapter 30: Thanks!!!


Is it bad or good?
chapter 2   —   updated May 15, 2009   —   2171 characters   —   136 people liked this writing   —   91 reviews of this writing
~~~Sophie ran right home from her bus stop and through her front door in under a minute, she couldn't wait until she could post what happened on her blog.

~~~ Before she could make it up the stairs to her room, her parents called her into the living room. Sophie grimaced, another lecture she was thinking. What did she do? Ok, so maybe she didn't take the trash out last week and maybe she forgot to feed her cat Polka but nothing major. She walked slowly into the living room to find her parents sitting side by side on the soft brown leather couch. This couldn't be good, there was big news, but what?

~~~Sophie sat on the loveseat parallel to the big couch and scanned her parents faces. They weren't going to move, her fathers job didn't imply that so maybe just a trip, that wasn't too bad.

~~~Then to answer her, her father said "Sophie, me and your mother are going to leave for a while and we can't bring you."

~~~Sophie wasn't that surprised, just at the fact that she wasn't going!!"Wait," she said "So your leaving, without me? Where am I going to stay exactly? And where are you going!?"

~~~Her father calmly explained "Well we are going to Puru for buisiness for a year, and you are going to a temporary care home."

~~~Sophie was shocked, how could her parents do this! She said "Wait, what home exactly, not foster care right?" she waited for thier reply.

~~~" No, you will stay with a very kind family, we looked at their background and they are highly rated in this kind of thing, your in good hands!" her father tried to sound convincing but wasn't doing a real great job.

~~~"Who is the family? Do we know them?" She wanted to know.

~~~"Well we talked to the parents or shall I say the Vannson's and they apparently have a son who goes to your school. They say the names Robbie? Do you know him?"

~~~Sophie at that moment probably looked like a fish, but was able to mumble a yes. "Well good, we already packed you up so you can head over later tonight. I hope you don't mind." Sophie just said whatever and headed upstairs to take a last look at her green and purple room, she was going to live at Robby's house.
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Demi said:
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Hmmm interesting.....Great job! "
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" Is Kelsey based on Kelsey? She probably wont be to happy about that! And if she is, who am I? And are you sophie?
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" Okay, I am hooked. Write more. A few edits are needed, but other than that, I'm hooked, and to be honest, I didnt think I would be, but I'm suprised, …more "
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" Still love it! But grrr I dont like Strawberry very much! "
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" I really don't like STRAWBERRY. She is a stupid numbskull and she needs to back off and grow a brain! "
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" Oh no! a couple spelling mistakes but nothing else really. Oh no what are her parents going to do!? "
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You need to write more! "
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Hope said:
" go Robbie! "
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Whoa!!!!!!! Go Robbie, he is sooo sweet! "
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Daisy said:
" i liked that. i wish that could happen in real life. "
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Larosa said:
" GREAT STORY...WHERE IS THE REST???? "
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" Sooooo Goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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Hope said:
" OH! SWEET! "
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Musical♥Writer said:
" More More MOr! I fobid you to stop! Write a second book if you think its getting to long! Its soooooo goood! And if you do stop I will bug u about it …more "
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Hope said:
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♫Krista♫ said:
" Robbie and Sophie r sooo cute together! "
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ScreamSunshine said:
" Loved it!
Can't wait for the next book! "
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" that was good "
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Lenalee said:
" This is an awesome book!! You need to edit the paragraphs and stuff, but I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "
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" come on right another book!pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase!!!!!!! "
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Apurva said:
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